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Reviewer: Baela (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 6
Eek! You CAN'T leave me hanging like that! Oh my god, I'm going nuts here! Please, please, please update very, very, very quickly! Loving this to insanity!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 6
I am totally loving this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: femflorest5 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 6
nice, sneaky but love it!
Reviewer: annettelovez (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 6
:) Edward is just deliciously devious.
Reviewer: scarlet_river93 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 6
I love this story! pls hurry with the next chapter I'm dying to find out what happens! Bye
Reviewer: VampireLover89 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 6
I love it! And the ending to chapter 6 is awsome. I love your writing style and can't wait for more!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 6
Yes! I thoroughly enjoyed wickedward and I hope to see more of him! I hope that your muse is back because I really want to get the rest of this story!
Reviewer: buckwheat (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 6
ok...that was unexpected...seriously!
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 6
Fantastic story. Love dark Edward and the cliff hanger!
Reviewer: mvero (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 6
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cant wait for the next chapter. I wonder if Isabella will say yes?
Reviewer: MisguidedAngel (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 6
LOL...I just cannot help but love your Dark/Dominant Edward, the way he just takes charge and goes after what he wants...very sexy!!
Great chapter I truly enjoy the way he makes Bella squirm. I really hope you don't decide to draw-out their engagement...he doesn't seem like the kind of guy who likes to wait for his dessert;-). That and I think the best part of this story will take place when he finally has her and afterwards she finally finds out what he truly is.
Author's Response: Yes, he does make her squirm, doest he? He'll make her squirm in ways she hasnt even known... (hehehe *evil laugh*)
Yup, this Edward likes to go after what he wants. He's actually kinda like a spoilt brat sometimes, but lets see how Bella can affect him. She has already made him change a few things about himself, even though they both dont realize it.
next chapter coming soon. stay tuned!
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 6
YES YES YES!!! I'm so excited for the next chapter.
Reviewer: LaPushBaby (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oh My Goodness!!!!! I knew that was coming....And it made me so excited! YAY!
Reviewer: crazyaboutcullens (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 6
....Oh....My....
First off, can I say how happy I am to see you have updated! I mean I didn't even recognise the story when I first saw it and this is too damn good a story to abandon, so I am glad you haven't.
Let's get back to that little cliffie you just dropped.. I mean What?? I don't know what I expected but it sure as hell wasn't THAT! Hasn't Darkward read any of those Jane Austen books clogging up his library? Girls like Isabella Swan don't take kindly to forced marriages... unless she's going to do what I did and run in there going "God yes Edward take me away now!" But still, I am looking forward to her answer.. well we kind of know the answer, more like her reaction and I think this has made me like your Edward even more... so congrats, you have a crazyaboutcullens special:
FAVOURITE QUOTE OF THE CHAPTER:
'My Bella…’
Twisting his hands into the soil, he grabbed a handful of it, remembering her chocolate coloured eyes. They seemed to invite him in, lock him in their warmth. He wanted to see them everyday and every night.
Explains it all really!!! Thanks again for the story it's fantastic! And please update more: You're killing me here!!
Author's Response: LOL yes, he has read all those Austen classics. (You'll hear more about them in the next chapter), but well, he hasnt really put any of that into use, like ever. He was comfy in his hidden lifestyle, letting others handle his business while he did what he desired. So, he is used to getting instant gratification, so to say. He cant wait to have Bella, so goes for the shortest route.
Poor Isabella, I really feel bad for her. (or do I? lol)
Glad that you liked that 'my Bella' part where he's hunting. he seriously has no idea whats happening, but likes to think that he's in control.
I'm defo not abandoning this fic. sometimes, it just takes a while for the scenes to unfold before my eyes. Plus, having exams was a major issue. I'll update it as regularly as i can.
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 6
I really am enjoying this a lot. I like wickedward too, so scheming and maniacal.
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 6
Mwah-ha-ha! The plot thickens! Loving it!
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 4
Where's a lurking vampire when you need him? :-)
LOVE the story -- so very original!
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 3
You do a terrific job with writing dialog that seems true to that period of time. I'm really enjoying this!
Reviewer: Shamatt (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 6
This is just perfect - I can't wait for the next chapter. Charles has to say yes so the movement to the "manor" will be quite intertaining.
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ooooo -- shades of Bela Lugosi -- I love it!
Reviewer: marie-jo (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 6
Please say yes Bella! I have to admit that I am quite please with this sudden turn of event and I hope that Bella will say yes. Edward is quite the clever guy : he had planned everything. Altought I'm guessing that Charles is not to happy about this...
This story of your is quite unique: I love this darker Edward and I enjoy the fact that he's starting to change because of Bella.
I cannot wait to see what's going to happen next!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Next chapter coming soon!
You'll get to see Charles's reaction, Bella's decision, and well, more of Wickedward, plus a good friend Angela.
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 6
I feel bad I have not kept up with your other story. This one just really drew me in. Sorry - I'll jump back to the other one soon.
But this one - wow! What a fabuolus, intense plot. I think your build up is amazing - you dont rush anything and so it's much more realistic - their beginnings of love for each other. And I think it's hillarious how Edward doesn't understand her human tendencies - has no idea how to comfort her. Hopefully she'll clue him in.
Your Edward is so unique and fresh. And that Bella is hesitant - she doesn't immediately fall in love with a "god-like" man is nice. Looking forward to more - keep updating!!!
Author's Response: Ah git back to mah sweet Aiden! lol (well, please dont ignore it. it already suffers from post-BD hate syndrome. heh and it's going to get a little twisty as well.)
Edward is teh clueless about human feelings and tendencies. He'll have to learn fast. and Bella, well she certainly isnt intoxicated by his very presence. she's hesitant, like any normal should be. i'm taking my story toward normal progression. that way, it stays believable.
update coming soon! :D
Reviewer: Solanarose (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 6
SHE BETTER SAY YES PLEASE
Reviewer: DeltaSwan90 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 6
ummm holy crap.
I certainly hope Darkward redeems himself at some point! what on Earth is he planning! he truly is Darkward... he seems so uncaring *sigh*
loving it, can't wait to see where you take this tale!
Author's Response: hehe he *seems* uncaring - is the theme, 'seems' being the operative word. get my drift? hehe
lets see what he has planned for poor Bella. update coming soon!
Reviewer: marteloise (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 6
I've just discovered this fic and I love it!! Can't wait to read more!! Thanks for writing!
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