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Reviews For Monster's Serenade
Reviewer: Randy (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 20

Really great chapter, thanks for the more frequent updates, I love this story and always get such a thrill when I see you have updated.

Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 20

This was beautifully written chapter.  She's noticed things about him, which he refuses to explain.  The way she took control of him - he really was helpless against her, and the wax play - so erotic. What a fascinating enounter.

 

Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 20

I know I've said this more than once and will probably say it several more times BUT I just adore this story and get soo excitied when I see an update.

Reviewer: lord periperi (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 20

she won't stop there, sooner or later, she will ask again. it wouldn't be her if she didn't.

and edward is not fair if he thinks that she doesn't deserve  to know:no matter the social stand on such things in those times. in this state of status quo, he can offer her a few years more, and she deserves better, if not for the fact that he loves her (no matter the denial), then for her patience and sacrifice, meaning that she went blindly in this ordeal.

another great chapter, as always.

Reviewer: murmureetoile (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 20

Great chapter!! Continue!

Would it be so terrible if Edward told Bella the truth about his nature...?

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 20

*raises hand* That is all. *LOL*

Reviewer: jillangel (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 20

Awesome update, I love the way you are intertwinning Jacob into the story!   I hope we don`t have to wait much longer for Edward to tell Bella his secret!

Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 19

Yay! I finally had a chance to catch up on reading this! I'm loving all the E/B action going on (which is my fav) but I'm completely worried about what's going to happen if/when Bella finds out. I'm actually surprised she's still hanging around after all of Edward's insane moodswings.

But whatever, their lovin is hot and I can't wait to read more! Great job!!!

P.S. ADF rules me :)

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 19

dun-dun-dunnnn!! Bella's gonna dig up the goods!

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 19

What's Edward going to do when it's that time of month, or is that the reason for the four days? This story is really fun, thanks for the new chapter!

Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 19

I love the demon part. Very creative. Great chapter.

Reviewer: murmureetoile (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 19

Great story!! Continue!

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 19

Looks like Bella is getting to be much more wary of Edward.

Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 19

I don't remember if I reviewed this chapter last night.  Lord, my mind.

Anyways, I enjoyed this chapter.  Thank you for updating.  For some reason I always get so excited and it makes my day to log on and see that this story has updated.

Thank you for writing this story.

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 19

Very curious and anxious for the next chapter!

Keep up the awesome work!

Please udpate soon!

Reviewer: KnoKnayme (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 19

oooo!!!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 19

THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES

SO WELL WRITTEN

IT MUST BECOME AN IFIC

Reviewer: buffy9705 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 6

wow

Reviewer: scandblue (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 19

I am enjoying your story SO much... I love the period in which it takes place, and you have developed the characters so well. Excellent!!!  

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 19

Hmmm, I would think that Edward should have hung around some so that he could listen in on the conversations that Isabella was having with her friend.  He's already uncomfortable with her astute awareness and her curious line of questioning that circles around the truth.  Now, without a doubt, Isabella is certainly thinking of some type of possesion of Edward.  He knew that his behavior was unseemly and he made no attempt to smooth it over with her before he left.  I hope for his sake he spent his time thinking of a formidable excuse!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 19

Well I would have been prone to believe the demon possesion theory back then. I sure hope Bella doesn't believe the whole philandering theory but unless Edward tells her the truth she is going to drive herself crazy...

I can't wait to see if Edward will finally tell Bella something.

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 19

well, I can't even begin to say...but I like how you through the angle out there that he could be cheating on her.....not enough people do that!

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 19

it was good but i want more edward and bella and when is bella going to find out about edward and his family i want more plot please

anyways it was amazing as uasual

well until next time

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 19

If was in that era, I would think the same as Angela if my husband was going away so frequently, acting the way Edward is.

I wonder if Bella will confront him about her thoughts...It would be rather interesting to see what his reaction would be.

Looking forward to your next chapter!

Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 18

Awesome chapter Devy!!  I was so glad to see the update!

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