Well, that was a comic respite to your Darkward tale!  Loved that Bella feels such guilty pleasure for the way Edward makes her feel-and of course, we all love Edwards carnal needs!

I don't usually leave reviews, but I really enjoy ths story. I love the interactions between Edward and Bella. Their chemistry is unique, and I love the slow build. I loved the introduction of The Cullens in this chapter. Keep up the good work!

It kind of baffles me how much your story has really drawn me in.  I don't usually like stories around this time period - but yours works exceptionally well.  I'm so additcted :)  I love your more confident Edward - and this new dynamic with his family is refreshing. 

And your A/N - about lemons coming.  Sigh!

Pretty cool story! I am happy the Cullens have arrived to shake things up!

I think a change in canon is good every once in a while. I liked the Cullens so far and can't wait to see what happens next!

I'm a little scared for Bella now, Being in the middle of a Cullen family fued is not safe.

UPDATE SOON!!!!!

please,please,please write more

You did an awesome job with the first kiss. Way to go Bella! Can't wait to read the build up to the wedding. Is Edward gonna invite the rest of the Cullens?

AliciaZA

Author's Response:

The wait is over. You'll get to read about it in the next chapter, which is coming out soon.

thanks for reviewing

I don't think I've seen this done before. Interesting. I'm not sure about some the vernaculer the characters are using. Fo 1890 would someone greet a lady with a 'hey' or refer to someone as a 'sleepy head'? i dont' read historical novels and I'm not a history buff, but these phrases sounded a little modern for the time

 

I found your fic on the 'review for review' thread

 

Chris

Author's Response:

First of all, thanks for reviewing.

And about the issue with 'hey' and 'sleepy head'--like always, many a reviewers have pointed out that i use some words which are still in use in modern times. The thing is, they never went out of use.

The story I'm writing is not based in medieval times. and even then, if you check out the history of these two expressions, then you'll find that they have been in use since the later medieval period.

Charles has used the expression 'hey' to call his niece. it's a very informal way of addressing, i agree, but he isn't calling out to a stranger, he is addressing his own niece. therefore, such expressions can be found in informal speech, even back then.

majorly denied! :P

I'm really enjoying this story. I love the idea of it being set in 1890. And you seem to know what you're talking about to an extent. Impressive.

I'll definitely be keeping track of this one.

-kfm

Isabella whimpered, her body completely betraying her. The intensity she had felt before was now flowing between them with full force. There was no searching, no doubting, just wanting. It was like a craving, a hunger which desperately needed satiation.

That's one of my favorite parts...^^

I think your story is great! I'm always looking forward to another update from you! Lovely, keep it going! ;)

Author's Response:

Yup, that part just flowed out of. that was one of those rapid typing scene writing thingies, like i was possessed or something. lol

So i guess the passion came out of me straight and landed into the story.

thanks for reviewing

I loved it.