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Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 9
Great chapter. I loved that Bella is so dazed by his kiss. And Alice, the trousseau.
Reviewer: Rinna (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 9
Yippee....the Clullens are here!!! Happy for an update, can't wait for more....
Hee...Jasper's accent.
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 9
haha, I love their accents. :) Great chapter! Update soon so I have more to read!
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 8
The description of the kiss was amazing. You did it wonderfully! Great chapter.
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 7
Fantastic! But a little mean to cut it off there. lol
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what Bella is thinking. :)
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 5
I love your sadistward. :) Completely in character for Edward and his protective nature. Great chapter!
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 4
I can't believe you stopped the chapter there. Pure evil. haha. Great chapter! Please come to the rescue Edward!
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 3
Great chapter! Your story is captivating.
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 2
Edward back to his stalker ways. Great chapter! Your descriptions at the end are fantastic.
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great story! I found it through the Review for Review thread. This is a really interesting story idea, and can't wait to read the rest.
Reviewer: Darla (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 9
Mooooooore!!! Please!!!
Reviewer: Darla (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 8
Awwwwwwwwwww!
Reviewer: Darla (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 6
How cool ist that????? Awsome!
Reviewer: Zara Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 9
thank you so much for continuing this story. It is hard to find a good story where Edward is still a vampire. The story is great and it's not another twilight re-write (thank god). Please continue the story.... I am dying to know if Bella figures out Edward's secret, if Charles is able to stop the wedding and of course will both fall in love with each other.
Please update soon.
Reviewer: marie-jo (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 9
I absolutely love this story. It's so different, entertaining and I have to say that I adore this Edward. He knows what he wants and he's going for it. Bella is adorable: she is somewhat naive but she has a backbone. They are perfect for each other.
I'm so glad that the wedding date is set. I cannot wait to see what's going to happpen next.
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 9
LOVE it!!!! You're doing quite well on this story! I was so disappointed when I saw that this was the last chapter. While your writing is different, it's nice to know all that's going on, instead of just bits and pieces!! Love that Emmett's from Ireland and Jasper from Yorkshire. I broke out in laughter tryng to read what Jasper was thinking!!! Keep up the great work and can not wait to witness the next part of your story!!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 9
I love this story soooooooo much. Great writing.Update SOON,,,,,SOON!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 9
I love this story soooooooo much. Great writing.Update SOON,,,,,SOON!
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 9
Just keeps getting better and better, more plz!
Reviewer: SottoVoce (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 9
Hahaha juicy means pretty in Irish slang? Blood=vampire juice.
Love this story... more kissing please! I like how you write it. Hope Bella starts touching him more on her own accord since she likes it so much!
Reviewer: juliet233 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 9
I was hoping Alice would be the first other Cullen to show up! :) The translation of Jasper's contributions to the scene was very helpful lol. This was a great chapter!
Reviewer: buckwheat (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 9
mmmmmm Emmitt with an irish accent....yummy!!!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 9
Awesome chapter. Meeting the family was funny and great!
Please update soon?
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 9
VERY CUTE!!!!
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