Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 11
First I'm so sorry your not feeling well. Back pain sucks!!!!! I do want you to know how great I think this story is!!!!! I just love the dark side of this Edward!! He's such a bad boy!!!! I can't wait for more. I hope you are on the road to recovery soon and writing quickly!LOL! I have really enjoyed this one!! Can't believe the wedding is so soon and whats with aunt clara's script??? Can't wait to find out!!
Author's Response: Edward is dark, indeed, and he gets all nasty too. But we love that, dont we? lol
update is coming soon, filled with wedding festivites and a lots of drama, as usual. Ah, Aunt Clara's script will make an appearance again, but not so soon. and I'm recovering well, thanks to your wishes. :)
BTW, this fic got nominated for the Indie Twific awards. So please vote for it if you think it makes the cut.
link - http://theindietwificawards.com/vote.aspx
Reviewer: mrscullen2009 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 11
This is one of my favorites! =) I hope you feel better!
Author's Response: thank you for liking my fic. I do feel better now. next chapter is coming soon.
BTW, this fic got nominated for the Indie Twific awards. So please vote for it if you think it makes the cut.
link - http://theindietwificawards.com/vote.aspx
Reviewer: Sandicus (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 11
just wanted to say loving this story and cant wait to see what happens next thanks xx
Author's Response: thanks! update is coming soon.
BTW, this fic got nominated for the Indie Twific awards. So please vote for it if you think it makes the cut.
link - http://theindietwificawards.com/vote.aspx
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 9
Loved your Cullens! OMG! So funny. I'd never seen sentences where British accents were written out. So cute!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 8
I think the kiss was perfect. Is he going to tell her that her is a vampire?
Reviewer: Zara Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 11
thank you for continuing the story...please update soon
Author's Response: updating soon, as soon as my validation beta gets it through. :)
BTW, this fic got nominated for the Indie Twific awards. So please vote for it if you think it makes the cut.
link - http://theindietwificawards.com/vote.aspx
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 7
Love the description of the ring! Excellent! Great ending--makes me want more.
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 6
Wow! I love your Darkward! He's just a bit evil, but not entirely. He's a "bad boy"!
Reviewer: Naymee (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 11
So glad to have an update. This was a great chapter, I can hear Jasper's dodgy accent in my head now when I read him!
Hope you feel better soon. xxx
Author's Response: I feel better now, thanks! haha, Jasper's accent gave me a heachache. Glad that you liked it.
update coming soon.
BTW, this fic got nominated for the Indie Twific awards. So please vote for it if you think it makes the cut.
link - http://theindietwificawards.com/vote.aspx
Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 11
I am sending you more "imaginary" pillows in exchange for the next chapter!!! :)
Author's Response: the imaginary pillows helped a lot, I'm feeling much better now. :)
next chappy is coming soon.
BTW, this fic got nominated for the Indie Twific awards. So please vote for it if you think it makes the cut.
link - http://theindietwificawards.com/vote.aspx
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great cliffie. I am completely engrossed in this tale. Great job!
Reviewer: meyerjc2002 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 11
Can't wait for the wedding. I'm really hope that Edward finds love in this.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 11
I just love this story so much!!!!!!!I loved Edward and Bells's passionate kiss!
I love that Edward has stood up to his family and is kicking them out. Man, Rosalie is such a bitch, and Emmett is a jerk to bring up Tanya to Edward-Good Riddance!! I'm so glad they won't be at the wedding!!!!!
Can't wait for the wedding (and of course, wedding night, honeymoon, etc.)!! I remember the new big mirror at the end of Edward's bed!!
Hope you feel better soon!. Thanks for this great story!
Sheryl
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 2
Excellent story. So glad I found it!
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 11
wow ! I' gald to be invited. Wait !!, I dont have a gown !!
Author's Response: lol, neither do I. We'll attend the wedding in casuals and scare the shizz outa the vamps! hehe :P
BTW, this fic got nominated for the Indie Twific awards. So please vote for it if you think it makes the cut.
link - http://theindietwificawards.com/vote.aspx
Reviewer: Vampyre (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 11
Really enjoyed this chapter. Very pleased to see Isabella's attraction to Edward continues to blossom. Liked wedding invite at the end.
Sorry to hear about your back. That can be so disrupting. I have the same problem also. Speedy recovery~!
Author's Response: Thanks for the wishes, I'm recovering well now. doc said that it was a minor niggle, nothing grand. thank gawd!
The next chapter is coming soon, so stay tuned for the wedding. :)
BTW, this fic got nominated for the Indie Twific awards. So please vote for it if you think it makes the cut.
link - http://theindietwificawards.com/vote.aspx
Reviewer: RomperStomper (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 11
Man o man, Rosalie gets away with the kind of behavior that is in no way acceptable. I look forward to the day someone writes about her getting her verbal arse kicked.
*sigh*
Author's Response: haha, Rose is very bitchtastic at the mo, so stay tuned for next chapter as well. She has issues, major issues.
BTW, this fic got nominated for the Indie Twific awards. So please vote for it if you think it makes the cut.
link - http://theindietwificawards.com/vote.aspx
Reviewer: Randy (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 11
I love this story. It is getting so interesting. Please get better soon and keep writing.
Author's Response: updating soon, as soon as my VB approves the chapter. (might take a day)
BTW, this fic got nominated for the Indie Twific awards. So please vote for it if you think it makes the cut.
link - http://theindietwificawards.com/vote.aspx
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 11
I love this story and I'm happy that Isabella is reacting good and I hope she would fall in love with him.
But I didn't like the way he spoke to his family...
PLEASE update soon!
Author's Response: Isabella and Edward have a push-pull thing going at the mo. It'll get smoother as time passes, I promise. :)
Edward is a bit of a nasty bastard in my fic, so you'll have to wait a bit to see him get any better. after all, he's dark, and very different from canon Edward. He has issues with his family as well.
next chapter is coming soon. You'll see a better behaved Eddie in there, but there will more drama. oh yeah.
BTW, this fic got nominated for the Indie Twific awards. So please vote for it if you think it makes the cut.
link - http://theindietwificawards.com/vote.aspx
Reviewer: crazyaboutcullens (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 11
OK.. reading back my review I realise you can't really pat yourself on the back...
*blushes* Sorry.. I'll just take my foot out of my mouth now...
Seriously, get well soon :) An amazing author like yourself deserves it!
Reviewer: crazyaboutcullens (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 11
:( I'm sorry you're unwell...
But hot damn that was a good chapter!!
Seriously, pat yourself on the back. If you can write this chapter when you're sick, can you imagine the amazing-ness you right when you're well again??
I mean, the hotness of Darkward + the anger of Darkward= a damn good chapter!
And trust me, my maths is always flawless ;)
Get well soon... You know what they say, a chapter a day keeps the doctor away!
(They don't say that? Really? Well... imagine they do anyway ;)
Author's Response: haha, thanks for the wishes. I'm actually feeling much better now. and I've sent the next chapter up for validation.
more Darkward anger on the way. (don't say that I didn't warn) lol
BTW, this fic got nominated for the Indie Twific awards. So please vote for it if you think it makes the cut.
link - http://theindietwificawards.com/vote.aspx
Reviewer: xmouth (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 11
Wow i love it it's one of my top flicks
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 11
sooooo well written. Fabulous chapter; great story. I love the gothic feel to it. And I hope you are feeling better soon; an injured back in the summertime? Not fair!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so happy that my fic is well appreciated. :)
I am feeling better now, so the next chapter is on the way through validation.
BTW, this fic got nominated for the Indie Twific awards. So please vote for it if you think it makes the cut.
link - http://theindietwificawards.com/vote.aspx
Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 11
Yay, you finally posted a new chappie!! Aww, so sorry about your back. Hope you feel better soon. I really love Monsters Serenade so far, so I promise not to abandon you if you promise not to quit writing the story until you finish the epilogue. Deal (wink)?
Now, for the chapter. Was a really good chapter. I can see that Bella is slowly (in spite of herself - lol) beginning to care for Edward (sigh, be still my heart - giggles). Edward continues to amaze me with his hotness (fanning myself now). Emmett and Jasper and hilarious with the archaic speech patterns (snorting with laughter). Little bit upset with Edward for throwing his family out after the wedding (stamping my foot). I mean, I get why he did it but things are so much more fun and interesting with the Cullens around (especially with sneaky pixie Alice, about ready to fall off the wagon Jasper and overgrown frat boy Emmett - hehe). It would be hysterical to read how Edward and Bella try to settle into their roles as husband and wife with no privacy and the Cullens always butting in (lol).
You evil to have ended it on such a cliffie! I'm dying to read what the Cullens think of the fact that Bella is "special". I'm guessing that they all about ready to start bombarding Edward with their thoughts and theories!! Please post the next chappie as soon as you get better. Will eagerly wait for it. Till then, take care of yourself.....
AliciaZA
Author's Response: hey, I'm not quitting yet! lol
My back is better now, and the next chapter is on the way.
My Edward is a nasty bastard, but a hot one at that.. haha. And I know, it would've been so much fun with Emmett and Jasper around after the wedding. they would've totally teased the blushes out of Isabella. lol
But when Edward puts his foot down, the rest have no choice but to listen. He's not the one to take the teasings and intrusions lightly. So he laid down the law. ahh he is of course, a dark version of Edward. sigh...
you'll actually laugh when you read the first few lines of the next chapter. It's total nuttery in there. hope you enjoy it. :)
BTW, this fic got nominated for the Indie Twific awards. So please vote for it if you think it makes the cut.
link - http://theindietwificawards.com/vote.aspx
Reviewer: marteloise (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 11
Well, I have to say that I'm glad Edward told them to leave after the wedding. I also can't wait to see the wedding, wedding night and life as newlyweds. How is Edward going to pretend to be human? Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Edward is very single minded about this wedding, so he takes no shit from anyone. (dont we like that?) lol
The wedding night might not be the usual kinda thing. So dont get upset over that, kay? They'll get there, slowly...
next chapter (wedding!) coming soon! :)
BTW, this fic got nominated for the Indie Twific awards. So please vote for it if you think it makes the cut.
link - http://theindietwificawards.com/vote.aspx
Submit a Review
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
|
