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Reviewer: usagicullen (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 13
Love the story thus far. Hopefully this makes Mr. Masen less cranky, now that he is able to get some ;)
Can't wait until Bella really finds out about her husband.
Reviewer: poo235 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 13
Nice. That was an intense way to leave us hanging though!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 13
Oh thanks for the long, wonderful chapter. I think its hot that she calls him Mr. Masen.
Reviewer: TLee (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 13
Wow, I have thoroughly enjoyed reading all your chapters in one hit!
I love this dark, not so perfect Edward. His luring in of Bella you have done so well. I am trying to imagine where their relationship is going to go from here. I do think she is going to have her eyes opened soon, in more ways that one.
Can't wait.
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 13
Good lawd that was hot! :-)
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: PulpAddict (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 13
Fun fun fun!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 13
Love the story. You need to update soon as you left us unfulfilled, so to speak with the ending - lol!
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 13
Wow! Esp. loved the ending! :)
However, somewhat impatient for Bella to face up to some type of conversation with him over his moody, swinging behavior. That would baffle me to no end. Hopefully they can work through this together and he doesn't go running off again without any word...
Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 13
What a tease! Update soon :(
Reviewer: sabr101 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 13
good chapter!
Reviewer: Tudor1 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 13
Update! Yay lemons!U should put this on fanfiction!
Reviewer: Tudor1 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 13
Update! Yay lemons!U should put this on fanfiction!
Reviewer: SophiaJ (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 13
I liked it...I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! I keep watching and waiting for updates all the time!
Reviewer: crazyaboutcullens (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 13
*comes out from the lurkdom, blushing and fanning self*
Wow, um.... when you wrote that tutorial at the beggining I was so happy-- I was thinking hmm, why do we need to know that?
Fantastic chapter once again, super hot and I can't wait to read more...
I <3 Darkward!!
P.S. Going off to vote for you now... ;)
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 13
hehe...great chapter..please update again very soon...I can't wait for more...btw,nice lemon cliffie.
Reviewer: Jynxx (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 13
I really like this story and I'm glad Rose and Edward made up. He needs more confidence and by the last events, he seemed to have received it.
Reviewer: Tabby (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 13
HOT!
I seriously squeeed when I got my update notification!
I cannot wait for the next update it just gets bettter and better. Cannot.wait :D
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 13
I am just wondering how many males, vampires or not, at the time this story happens, thought ot plasuring their wives before they took their own pleasure.
I suspect not many, so here Edward is scoring high, despite being a monster. I am sure that Bella is going to be very well disposed towards further advances, now....
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 13
Oh come on! You expect me to vote for you on only HALF a lemon?
Lol, just kidding. I already did.
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 13
finally! next chapter will be amazing, I can tell!!!!!!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 13
Hmmm...pretty toasty stuff. think i may need a cold shower ;-)
Reviewer: crazinessignored (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 13
good job...keep it coming
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 13
ahh cliffy no fair .. lol love your story
Reviewer: Roosickle (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 13
ya gotta love darkward LOL keep going !!!!
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 13
Oh thank goodness, we're allll-most-there!
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