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Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 13
O.O PLZ PLZ GOD UPDATE SOON! I love this story to death!
Reviewer: elizabeth2323 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 13
Great chapter---looking forward to seeing how their evening progresses. I would have liked to see a bit more grovling from Edward as he did not attend the luncheon--more of him giving into Bella needs/wants as a new bride. Killing her with kindness instead of relying on his dazzling abilities to keep her off kilter.
Reviewer: iluvthecolts (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 13
Just read the first 13 chapters. Love it! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 13
just how long can that pleasurable thing work ? we know thats not enough :(
Reviewer: Lacey0186 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 13
Awww Edward is finally giving in to his needs.... Glad that he and Rose had their talk, it appears as though it helped him quite abit;)
Can't wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: redbean (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 13
Oh my lord...this story is just fantastic. I can't believe how hot and wonderfully written this is! I love it love it love it. You have managed to change the time period and keep it coherent and so believably cute. Love it.
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 13
Woo hoo! Best chapter yet.
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 13
I was very surprised that Edward didn't take Bella on their wedding night. I guess Rose's challenge got him thinking and he decided to be smart about things and not force her. I'm glad, really. I'm also glad that Rose eventually apologized and things are better between them. Considering how this chapter ended, her suggestions were obviously helpful. I did think it strange for Edward to leave Bella the day after their wedding, no wonder she was pissed at him... at first. He's being nicer and more intimate with her now. We'll see how things go. Next chapter, please!
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 8
A beautiful kiss!
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 13
Okay, this was great, but you cut it off at the wrong time. We have been waiting for when they got together, and you leave us hanging! What's up with that? I want to see what Bella will do, and Edward's reaction to her. Please don't take to long to update. =)
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 5
I LOVED your Sadistward!!!! Does it make me a perv? LOL
Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 13
Hmmm... I'm glad he's starting to treat her better. I knew he'd come around...
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 13
Dood.
That humbles me to silence.
Awesome!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 13
Just found this story yesterday, and I love it! Love Darkward here as he strived to become more Loverward and less Monsterward. And now, Bella's had some...awakening of her feelings, shall we say. Now, it's Edward's turn...
And at SOME point, she's going to figure things out...
Reviewer: stupidlamb79 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 5
I've been reading this story today and shamefully haven't been reviewing but I must tell you that I loved this chapter. It's so nice to finally see Edward really let someone have it when they do something like that. I always wished he would have done the same to newton in the books even though he wasn't actually bad lol. great story and I love your darkward.
Reviewer: Lauribella (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 13
this was awesome!
Well written...I liked the smooth transition for them..not to sudden.
The Lemons are written so as to elicit feelings from the reader...you feel connected to both of them as they make their way through this romantic encounter.I can not wait to see what Edward was sayin at the end..and what he is thinking.
Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: naeo99 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 13
Wow! more lemon please!!!
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 13
Wicked, lovely chapter... More?
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 13
Hey there! I'm new to your story, and it's an enjoyable one! :) Looks like Bella got the Big O there. And somehow the knowledge that bloomers back then were crotchless seemed very kinky, and it's weird considering how shy and bashful women were in those days. *lol*
And I have an "uh oh" moment because considering Bella's a virgin, won't her hymen blood send Edward into a frenzy? It'll be interesting to see the lemons unfold...
I just want to tell you you're doing a rocking great job and it's a real pleasure to read. Please update soon!
Reviewer: crazygreenfrog (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 13
Wow! Great chapter! I loved the Edward and Rosalie moment. It really helped to shed light on both their characters. And, of course, the end was HOT! Can't wait to read more. :)
Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 13
Wow, that was a chapter full of lemony goodness (lol). I swear, every time I read about your Edward the Katy Perry song "you're hot and your cold" plays in my head - think it fits him to a tee (hehe). Glad that Edward patched things up with Rosalie and had a bit of a chuckle when he needled Charlie. A good chapter. Can't wait to read what happens next.
AliciaZA
Reviewer: xmouth (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 13
sooo love it as allways!!!!!!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 13
Monsterward may hate human food, but he loves humans for food! God, he's so seductive, I can't believe she has kept her wits this long! That was really nice of Rosalie to risk being ripped to shreds to explain to Edward why she was being so, um, bitchy. I can't wait till the next chapter-or will Bella pass out from ecstasy and not surface for 24 hours?
Reviewer: MarathonKeyGirl (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 13
Best chapter yet!
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 13
I love this story. Your Monsterward is so dark and yet so hot. I hope he learns from his mistakes and starts treating her better. She deserves it.
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