I personally love the lemons in this chapter so don't apologize for not deleting it!

For future reference, I love lemons more than Alice (in any fic - I just can't stand that girl - grrrrrr, lol) so always feel free to soften me up with an E/B lemon before putting her in the story. It worked well this time cause I found her tolerable (which is a complement cause I find her untolerable in most stories, lol - or maybe I am making no sense).

I apologize, it is late and I am typing this out on my phone. Just know that I LOVED the chapter (and the lemon) and I can't wait for an update.

HENCE, I am off to bed now (if I can sleep) and I am 99 percent positive I just missused the word "hence" but I wanted to use it anyway since it's my favorite word in this story. ;)

Night my dear!

Author's Response:

Hi BB,

Long time no see. I'm in the middle of a laptop crisis. Mine died and a new one is taking ages to deliver. (Insert a big wail)

I'm certain my Alice will be tolerable most of the time. She's not there just for shits n giggles. There's her part of the puzzle to the story as well, which she herself doesn't know yet. (OMG I sound so ominous. haha)

But yeah, she won't be jumping around like a damn monkey or vibrating 24/7 a la energizer bunny. She's been tame and sedate so far. y/y?

I'm planning more lemons anyway, because my characters are basically in a honeymoon hornball phase.

Will be updating in July, when my Dell studio xps blah blah finally arrives.

Love you. (And <3 S&D.)

another wonderful chapter. i think the smut is in perfect proportions and I'm wondering if anything horrible is going to happen at this birthday.

What a "romantic" proposal, poor Bella has been blackmailed. Edward has such a devious mind.

Great chapter.

by the way another quote would be "you are the only thing it would hurt to lose"-edward if he ever has to convey his feelings to bella or "sleep, my bella dream happy dreams you are the only one who has ever touched my heart it will always be yours"-edward again like right afer he finally tells her he loves her or sex or right before she goes to sleep you don't have to use them at all but i like these quotes from the book and i think you could use them
o and again fave story so.... :)
well until next time

Now that this is my 2nd time to review...as soon as I hit submit over an hour ago and left my computer the "oops! This link appears to be broken" sign flashed across my screen.  I didn't realize it until now.

 

I like this quote......I really think it is great!..........."Never expected such a draw from a mirror,"......................."When does it end? Will I ever stop craving you?"................those are really good ones from this chapter!

 

I don't think, nor have I ever thought that this was becoming a smut-only story.  I have always loved your writing style and the way you express the characters!

That thought never came to my mind until you brought it up and even then I totally didn't register it!  You are doing great!!

What a well written chapter with strong character development.  Angela's viewpoint gives me hope for a somewhat happy-ever-after conclusion.

OK...now I admit that I am a sucker for the Beauty and the Beast plot line, but I really do hope that Darkward has a kind side Bella can tame.

I love that Bella is starting to really trust Edward and put her faith in him.  I'm curious to see what happens when Jake finally comes across Edward though...

I don't know why people are so nervous about lemons.  It makes things more intimate for me in regards to the story.  I seriously doubt that a good lemon here and there won't hurt the plot of this story.  In my opinion, it would add to it.

Have a great week.

MMmmm Edward and Bella seem to be havin some good lemony times...

I wonder who in the world the wolves tore apart and just what was he doing there. Edward would have flipped if that one got to close to Isabella. Good thing the wolves took him out.

LMAO...oh the idea of Rose, Emmett and Jasper having to eat real food is just to funny.

You are an evil person!  How am I suppose to stop reading and go to sleep now?  Ok...just one more chapter!

Ok!   This story has me hooked and it is already close to midnight!