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Reviews For Monster's Serenade
Reviewer: debs2crazy (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 5

I agree, off with Henry's head. I am sure that was not the first time he did something like that.

Reviewer: debs2crazy (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 4

I knew he was no good. Wonder who going to save her??  LOL

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 16

Awesome, as always! :-)

Reviewer: cag4288 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

I am pretty much obsessed with this story!  I would try to love it even more if you update quicker ;)

Reviewer: marie-jo (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 16

Oh I love this story so much: you are such a talented writer! The new chapter was amazing. Edward is so diabolical: toying with Bella like that. He knew ezxactly what he was doing. I cannot see what is going to happen between those two. They have grown more comfortable with each other which is a good thing. I do wonder if Jacob has a little crush on Bella and I'm intrigued to find more.

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 16

i'm new to this story and i love it so keep on writing but what's wrong with you you always have an problem with updating your story

i'm not trying to be mean just caring, like bed rest do you have a problem/disease i hope you get better

anyways i love the story but when is he going to find out

ooooohhhhhhh did she just get dazzled lol

until next time

Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 16

I am sad that I have come to the last chapter currently posted and anxious for the next one.  Update soon please!

Reviewer: Gras (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 16


Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 10

yea angela is a shitty friend who never listens to bellas worries and treats like a naive idiot half the time, alice doesnt get involved enough with the right things like she goes for the fashion shit and wedding planing full tilt but backs off when she tries to figure out her brothers selfishness, edward is a complete asshole with no redeeming qualities  and bella has no backbone, its weird i really like the storyline and plot set up i just dont like the characters i'm going to continue reading  though because your writing is good, you take the time to convey as much historical accuracy and im invested in knowing where this goes, plus you made me feel passionately about the characters you've portrayed so my apologies for sounding like a jackass about them! *continues reading*

Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 16

great chapter.

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 16

Fantastic work, although I wanted more Edward/Bella action! Hopefully next chapter?

Please update soon!

Reviewer: cornel (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 16

I'm sorry to hear you had health issues. I hope you're feeling better now. Hopefully New Moon has made every Twi-hard feel better and forget about their health issues. I had the fever and still went and watched thee movie twice!

I really like reading your Darkward. He seems dark, but in reality I think he's just pretending. Bella has cracked his armor and the feelings he has for her are starting to show. I loved how sweet and tender he was to her and how he rubbed her foot. And I also love how perceptive Bella is. Tha is so in character.

I'm a team Edward (or rather Robward) girl, but the part with the Quilettes was very interesting and I wonder what is going to happen that they had to get so much involved and so thoroughly mentioned in this story.

Edward is a very mean man. He left her all hot and bothered! I hope he will make amends in the next chapter...

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 16

Devy, I fricking love you girl!

Awesome chapter!  I love the slow progression of Bella's feelings for Edward!

Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 10

I'm loving your story!  I have a quick question though.  Edward introduced Carlise and Esme as his aunt and uncle and Alice and Emmett as their children making Alice Edward's cousin.  Why does Alice frequently refer to Edward as her brother?

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 16

the way you wrote the legends was awesome....I could clearly see my self there!  I think it would be awesome if Bella took things by the horns and if she wants some intimacy then she needs to tell Edward, Love me like a husband should!.........That's what I would do, but then again, that is why I don't have EDWARD!

Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 16

I just adore this story!! It is so very enticing to me.  I love Darkward.  He's not too dark, just the right amount.

Glad to know there are only approx. 10 chapters left.  Can't wait to see what happens.

Sorry to hear about your health failing you.  I wish you the best and a fast recovery, if you haven't already.

Sorry to hear we won't be hearing from you until January.  Poopie!!  Oh, well, have a great Thanksgiving and a wonderful holiday season!  Take care.

 

Reviewer: Angel Wings 113 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 16

poor bella.... edward just leaves her wanting more and more.

Update soon!!!

Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 16

That was a good first half. Part of me though he would have told her the truth right away, or changed her right away. I enjoy how you are doing things though.

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 16

Wow, boy have I missed your updates! :) Was so excited to log on and find the latest chapter and it was well worth the wait....well except that of course it's left me longing for more.

 

Damn that Edward is such a tease....

Reviewer: esmie3 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 16

Darkward's the best :D Muahaha...he's evil leaving her like that.

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 16

Mean naughty Edward...dazzling her, then leaving her wanting...thats just cold-blooded.  ;-)  ha I made a funny

Reviewer: LoveSunshine (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 16

I'm on ADF! Love that place. Another great chapter. I hope you are well!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 16

Awesome chapter!

I think that Bella is getting to used to Edward...:D Yay! I knew it was only a matter of time.

Looking forward to the next chapter! (I know it will be a while, but still...I will look forward to it.)

Reviewer: The Old One (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 16

So glad you're back and plan on continuing!

Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love the periods setting for the story.  You set the scene perfectly.

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