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Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 6
Why does he think she'll be saying yes, and how does he think that he'll be able to keep all his secrets from her.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 5
Smart girl. Be quiet about it. I thought Edward would have not left such evidence behind.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 4
I'm sure Eddie doesn't like other people touching what's his.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 3
I'm loving the story.
Reviewer: saritat (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 17
I loved how you worked the feathers in. I just loved that part in Breaking Dawn, where everything had to be so understated and..."clean". Good work :)
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 11
Wow!!! He definitely put his foot down!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 10
She has no idea how close to the truth she is. Great chapter.
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 9
Your Cullens are adorable. I can't wait for Alice and Angela to join forces.
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 8
I think we're all a little frazzled....
I'll get back to you in a bit....
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 7
Totally delicious! I can't believe you left a chapter there!!
I am seriously in love with your Angela. She's incredibly well-spoken and sweet like in-canon Angels, but pretty forward thinking for the time. Great job!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 6
Fabulously wicked!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 5
I like hot-and-cold Edward. His awkwardness that bordered on hatefulness to Bella was so amusing in Twilight. I think you're nailing it.
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 4
Hurry up Edward!!! Mr. Crawford is going to regret this, I do believe.
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 3
Maybe reading about haughty Darcy will give her some idea of how to deal with Darkward....
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 2
Why can that boy not resist the urge to sneak in windows at night? Always spending the night in someone else's room....
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great set-up. I like your characters and your changes from canon.
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 17
Well done!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 17
Yay girl! We finally got a lemon! I am so happy, and it was perfect. I really did love this chapter- I'm glad that it kind of brought us back to Edward and Bella, I've kind of just missed the developing relationship between the two of them. Great job!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 17
I'm re-reviewing because I was so exhausted last night that there was no way that I could have written a decent review, if I was even awake enough to write one!
I loved the mention of Edward's heart! And the lemony moment was probably one of the sweetest that I've ever read!
Although it ended on a slightly depressing note, I'd love for you to update as quickly as possible!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 17
i think their first time was perfect. loved that you added the feathers in there. can't wait for an update.
Reviewer: marie-jo (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 17
Love the new chapter. It is nice that this chapter was more focus on their relationship. I like to see Edward become more and more in love with Bella and I am glad that he was able to control his predator urges.
I do wonder when will Bella discover the truth about Edward: that he is a vampire and that he killed Henry. How will she react?
I must say that I love this story : it is unique and beautifully written. Thank you for posting.
Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 17
Just discovered your story. It has been a pleasure to spend my Saturday afternoon catching up with the characters in a more traditional setting.
I have added the story to my favorites so I don't miss any updates. Cheers!
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 3
Interesting...I love seeing how they are getting to know each other, and how Edward can't interpret his feelings yet.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 17
THIS NEEDS TO GO ON IFIC
Reviewer: debs2crazy (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 17
I thought the lemon was good, for being old timey. I wonder how Bella felt about Edward ending her little visit?
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