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Reviewer: azitram (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 06:26 PM · On: An Interlude with Alice
I'm enjoying your story
Reviewer: azitram (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Dinner Drags On
I loved how he dumped the first date for Bella.
Reviewer: um_oops (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Dinner Drags On
brilliant story will you be posting anymore chapters
Reviewer: 10of15 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Too Much
Hi, I know you haven't worked on this since September but it is a great story and well written. It would great to see it finished. I have some ideas - Bella taking charge - the 6 coming clean with each other and setting up a sting for James. Hope to see more updates
Reviewer: TeamJasper (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Too Much
When are you going to update i need more. why is victoria saying they made a sex tape? did edward really make a sex tape? WE NEED MORE!!!!!
Reviewer: Kalle (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Too Much
Cliffhanger much? What do Mike and Tanya want? Is James behind the scandal? What does Alice see? gah, I need answeres. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: MrsCullen_887 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Too Much
heres when the problems come oh man lmao cant wait to see wat else happens and how things fix up =]
Reviewer: AmyO (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Too Much
I really dig this story, but this last chapter does not sit well with me. Bella is brave if a bit overly cautious. Therefore, she should pick up Edward's cell phone when it rings and go all Rosalie on Tanya. Other than that, nice mix of romance and lemons which are always the same thing at all.
Reviewer: daisy3853 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Too Much
please update this one! i just read the whole thing and i am hooked. i know you are so busy... but you are so talented. the way you write edward is wonderful, in this story and HIPS. and i definitely admire your bella. she's not quite as "damsel in distress" as she can be. i don't know which story i like more, but both of them are so captivating... you can really feel the tension and emotions.
Reviewer: Charly (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Possibilities
You really nailed Rosalie!!
Reviewer: arfalcon (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Too Much
Yikes, this is an Amazing story: intoxicating, sexy, scary and so well written. And I know from the thread on your other amazing story that you're really busy, so we'll have to wait for updates, but man, can you spin a story. Your Edwards are so cool and detached until Bella comes along, and I love that she's a little bit more sophisticated and in tune with her emotions, even if she is still full of all those insecurities. Wow, can't wait for tax season or whtever to end, so yo can write, write, write. You are really good!!
Reviewer: mcape (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Too Much
Love your story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Too Much
So much drama all at once, you're killing me here!!
Keep it up.
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 01:52 PM · On: It's all in the leading
Arrrg, you cockblocked your own characters!
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 12:35 PM · On: An Interlude with Alice
You make me wish I was a freak magnet too. Oh wait, maybe I'm the freak. Hmmmmmm .
Well keep writing, I'm lovin it!
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Dinner Drags On
So sweet for a guy that just blew another girl off five minutes before. You are a great writer I am enjoying both of your stories.
Reviewer: lauras1sttime (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Too Much
That is so not right that you stopped adding chapters at this point! OMG...I just read all 12 chapters today, and it gets really good the updates stop! : ( I hope you decide to continue w/ this and HIPS when you become less busy! I love your stories!!!
Reviewer: kimber_dh (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Too Much
I am fricken pissed at Victoria in this one. That just sucks!!! Anyway, I think Edward and Bella are cute. I really hope you don't plain on to much drama/agnst, because I think it would be to emotionally tiring to read something like that. Of course, that's just me, so whatever. I really can't wait until you update furthur.
---Kimber----:)
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 06:10 PM · On: A slice of pie
funny! i like this story :)
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Lust
good stuff!! keep the lemons coming!!
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Possibilities
haha, i love emmett in this one!!
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Playdate
interesting! a little surprised by bella's reaction but definitely a fun chapter :)
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 05:26 PM · On: An Interlude with Alice
some of that was really funny!! good stuff
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Dinner Drags On
Huh - definitely interesting start!!
Reviewer: edward-bella70 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 05:44 PM · On: A Rose by any other name
I love that you made Emmett a fireman! That is just perfect! Please update soon!
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