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Reviewer: Chelle (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2008 06:33 PM · On: Dinner Drags On
I had to register so I could log in and review this. I like what you've started here. It's very well written and a lovely twist on the usual all human idea. Looking forward to seeing how and where you take this.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review. I hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters as much.
Reviewer: dramaqueen192870 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2008 04:52 PM · On: Dinner Drags On
Aw that was really well done. I love how Edward is human and can still read minds. I can't wait to see what Bella has against dates. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter will hopefully be up soon, it just needs polishing.
Reviewer: kedawen (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2008 04:23 PM · On: Dinner Drags On
I really like this! VERY well written, and definitely a nice twist on the AU Human genre. I can't wait to read about why Bella isn't dating! Great start.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm having fun with this.
Reviewer: Debussy_This (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2008 03:38 PM · On: Dinner Drags On
Oh, I really like it. I love that she didn't give him her phone number. Is this all going to be from EPOV?
Author's Response: Thanks! Initially, that was the plan, but in the end I decided to write from whomever's point of view I thought was the most interesting for the scene. It is primarily Edward & Bella's story, though, so even if other people narrate occasionally, it will always pertain to our Edward & Bella.
Reviewer: rocketqueen11 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2008 01:39 PM · On: Dinner Drags On
This is a good start. I haven't read a fanfic thats AH and Edward can read minds, so I'm looking forward to see where you go with this.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review.
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