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Reviewer: Reiko Katsura (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2008 12:36 AM · On: Playdate
Ah... simply incredible. I cant wait for the next installment of this story!
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2008 12:25 AM · On: Playdate
EEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! I hope they take the next step!!! >:)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! :)
Reviewer: Reiko Katsura (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2008 12:03 AM · On: Dinner Drags On
Ok, I've only read the first chapter...but this was magnificent! Ah~ I utterly adored this fan fic! It's interesting, it's fun, and to top it all off; its beautifully written! On to the next chapter!
Reviewer: cdunbar (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 10:34 PM · On: Playdate
This is a really great story. I haven't seen one yet where Edward, Jasper and Alice keep their powers in human form. It's unique and I'm really enjoying it. I can't wait to see what you have planned next. And Bella should DEFINITELY choose the 'or' option. :)
Author's Response: Of course I would choose the 'or' option, but you never know what Bella might do! So glad that you are enjoying the story so far. Having their powers and being human at the same time is bringing up all kinds of issues that didn't seem so important when they were vampires.
Reviewer: colourguardqueen (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 07:49 PM · On: Playdate
lol. wow making out wit random guys. thats funny
Reviewer: twilightgab (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 06:13 PM · On: Playdate
MORE PLEASE!!
Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 02:16 PM · On: An Interlude with Alice
great chapter, i really love where you are taking this story. you write everyone so well! what was jasper trying to keep to himself as he recited the declaration of independence? And WHO actually has that memorized?? LOL. I'm looking forward to reading more!!
Author's Response: Who has it memorized? Jasper! Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: twike (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 02:13 PM · On: An Interlude with Alice
Great story!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: smileon (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 12:55 PM · On: An Interlude with Alice
Loved Alice in this chapter. That whole coffee shop scene was wonderful, haha. I can't wait to see what happens on the playdate, haha. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the coffee shop scene. That was one of my favorites to write. Thanks!
Reviewer: EmeraldLily (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 12:49 PM · On: An Interlude with Alice
This is a really good story so far. I like the way the characters are developing and what seems to be an original storyline. Update soon
Author's Response: Thank you, the next chapter will hopefully be up tomorrow.
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 12:36 PM · On: An Interlude with Alice
Very cool premise to this story!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I hope you still like it as it continues.
Reviewer: CallistoLexx (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 12:14 PM · On: An Interlude with Alice
lol. I have a feeling that the meeting between Alice and Edward ended in her favor. She kind of steamrolled him. It was a very good chapter. I'm glad Jasper will be the one accompanying Edward to the playdate.
Author's Response: Alice really is kind of a force of nature, isn't she? Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: shwriteme (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 11:28 AM · On: An Interlude with Alice
Wow, this chapter spanned quite a bit of time and a lot of events. Great stuff. Can't wait to find out more. I'm really liking the characters you are developing. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you like the characterizations so far. :)
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 09:08 AM · On: An Interlude with Alice
Very Cool! I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Twilight_Momma2three (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 08:56 AM · On: An Interlude with Alice
"Maybe Bella's a freak magnet" I love it! That's so funny!
Author's Response: Haha, that was my favorite sentence in this chapter. I'm glad you liked it too. Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: twilightgab (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 03:12 AM · On: An Interlude with Alice
LOVE IT...CAN'T WAIT FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER !!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: It should be out tomorrow-ish, hopefully. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: rocketqueen11 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 03:04 AM · On: An Interlude with Alice
I'm so stoked that human Alice and Jasper have their powers as well! This is really good so far, I can't wait to see how the playdate goes.
Author's Response: It wouldn't be fair to give Edward his mind reading but leave Alice and Jasper empty-handed, would it? Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 02:02 AM · On: An Interlude with Alice
WOW! this is a really interesting story! interesting in a good way! i love how you took Alice and Edward specialties and moved them into an all human story! so cool! i can't wait to see how the play date turns out!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far, thanks for your review.
Reviewer: -le jen- (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 01:24 AM · On: An Interlude with Alice
ah ha mazing. loves. please continue
Reviewer: JustJo94 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 01:06 AM · On: An Interlude with Alice
I really like this story! It is a strange combination of their talents while being human. I like it!
Author's Response: It is a little bit strange, but I am glad you like it. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Kelly (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2008 08:25 PM · On: Dinner Drags On
Good start. Makes me wanna read more. :) I've never read a ff that has human Edward reading minds. Creepy, but interesting. I likey a persistant Edward though.
Reviewer: CallistoLexx (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2008 07:20 PM · On: Dinner Drags On
I really like the beginning of the story. I'm sure Edward will be able to speak with her again...he's a smart guy. He also knows Alice's name, so he can appeal to her. If he's brave enough. For such a small person, she can be intimidating!
Reviewer: kirbko (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2008 11:12 AM · On: Dinner Drags On
I like the story concept...you're a wonderful writer...can't wait until update. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent:)
Reviewer: smileon (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2008 08:52 PM · On: Dinner Drags On
I like it so far. It's different that he has his mind reading ability as a human, but it's a good kind of different. I'm excited to see how he uses it as a human that functions in the everyday world. Post more when you can. :o)
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon.
Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2008 07:15 PM · On: Dinner Drags On
Fantastic! I love where you are taking this story and I cannot wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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