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Reviewer: themrs (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Too Much
I need less angst and more answers haha! I hope you update soon! :)
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Too Much
You haven't seem your gorgeous boyfriend for a whie and he had a crap day, perhaps one of the worse days of his life. he needs you. On top of that his Russian ballerine ex-girlfriend calls him, probably to reconnect.
You, of course, excuse yourself, put on a nice lingerie, comes back to him and have steaming hot sex in every single room of your apartment. You also mark his neck so every bitch in town -- including the Russian ballerine ex-girlfriend bitch -- knows he is taken and very well taken care of.
No, of course not! If you are Bella, you burn the dessert and throw him out of the house!
I will say no more!
Monis
PS- have you given up on this story? I hope not...
Author's Response: I haven't given up, but I am going to finish HIPS before I finish this one... so I hope to pick this one up in October.
Thanks for reading, your review cracked me up.
Reviewer: bothen (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Too Much
It's really good. I loved it. <3
Uppdate soooon :)
Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Too Much
What?You are leaving us hanging here?I had better go annoy you with a PM,we need more,we have to know how this ends!!!!
Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:52 PM · On: Fame
Poor Victoria,so forgetable!I always wonder why people are more intimidated about guys who date loads of women casually,surely a few steady,longlasting relationships would be more threatening?An old one dater is hardly going to turn up out of the woodwork...tho lets see who this Victoria is.I know,hows about Edward rips her to shreds and burns her body?Oh no,that was another story......
Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Fame
Hmm,off the market?Soon will be,we hope.Ah,that Mike,he turns up everywhere,never gives up,he should get points for persistence.I wonder if anyones ever written a Mike/Bella fanfic,probably not,would be too boring?
Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:07 PM · On: A Rose by any other name
Haha,I can well imagine writing a lemon for Rose and Emmett would get way out of control fairly easily.You did a good job.Now,on with Bella and Edward.....
Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 10:24 PM · On: It's all in the leading
Why yes,yes it would.
Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 09:38 PM · On: A slice of pie
Nope,not seeing him is not an option.Not with those piano playing fingers and all.You had better be planning a lemon for these two...dont care about Princess and the bear,their lemon would scare the children!
Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Lust
Oh yes,the lemon was well worthwhile.lol.Loving Jasper and Alice, lucky Alice,how cool to know for sure you were not with the right guy so you could just quit and move on,no drama,and know immediately when the right one turned up,from day 1.Something many women wish they knew.
Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Possibilities
Emmett is so Emmett!Rosalie aka Princess is so cool,In love her!
Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Playdate
Or,or,take her or!
Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:47 PM · On: An Interlude with Alice
Oh,a playdate with Edward and Jasper,who could resist!Love Alice!I hope she plays nice.
Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Dinner Drags On
Wow,I just found out you had written this story as well,its really good too!I hope you are going to update it and keep writing,you have a great talent for describing characters and making us immediately feel either love or hate for them.Love Edward,Bella,Emmett...hate Lauren!
Reviewer: simbi (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Too Much
GAH! This story is great! Looking forward to seeing how it plays out. You so a great job with all six characters. Thanks!
Reviewer: TwlightQueen17 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Too Much
Make the next chapter soon!!
Reviewer: lydchil (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Too Much
I love this story! I haven't read any others where any of them have their talents, it's cool! Can't wait for an update!!
Reviewer: possession (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Too Much
I hope you update soon. I'm enjoying the story so far. PS...I hate cliffhangers!
Reviewer: possession (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Fame
Holy Orgasm Batman!!! I wasn't expecting that one.
Reviewer: possession (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:22 AM · On: A Rose by any other name
Hell yeah, that was a good scene. Go with the flow girl. You rated it NC-17 for goodness sake. I loved it. I'm enjoying all of it!
Reviewer: dspring (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Too Much
Love it, love it!! I NEED more. LOL. Please continue when you can. :)
Great writing! Thanks for sharing it with us. :)
Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Too Much
I'm loving this story!! You Rock! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: fr33bird (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Too Much
I've just finished reading all of this so far (and not gone anything useful done today as a result!). Another great story, I really like the way you write.
Looking forward to seeing how this one turns out too :) (have also read HIPS) well done!
Reviewer: fr33bird (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 06:57 AM · On: A Rose by any other name
great chapter - Rose has met her match at last in Emmet!
She cracks me up with her confidence. I loved the line about her 'seemingly endless supply of sexiness' :D
Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Too Much
WOW!! I have blazed through both of your stories in the past several days and really, truly loved them. Thanks, I had so much fun!! I'll be eagerly watching for the new chapters. Also, it is so sweet that you reply to your reviews. That is such a nice and personal touch, although it makes me feel a bit like a stalker - which, I guess is OK, since it seems I have an unhealthy addiction to whatever you write. Thanks again! :)
Author's Response: Stalker? Nah. You're just a nice person. I try to reply to people as much as I can. I love hearing what people think about my stories.
Merger of Two Hearts is probably on hold until I finish Hiding in Plain Sight... something I am trying to do as fast as possible, but it will probably take me until October.
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