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Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 07:09 AM · On: Dinner Drags On

Are you going to finish this story? Or update at any time soon? I would love to read more. :)

Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2008 11:16 AM · On: Too Much

This story is fantastic. A few changes and you should be able to get it published as a book. And no, I'm not just saying that. =P

Reviewer: Agnus Bimbal (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 11:53 PM · On: Possibilities

Emmett and his one-track mind *giggle giggle*

Reviewer: Agnus Bimbal (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 11:38 PM · On: Playdate

Me likes the playdate!

Reviewer: Agnus Bimbal (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 11:19 PM · On: An Interlude with Alice

Bella the freak magnet? This chapter was sooo funny. It seems Alice and Jasper have their talents as well. Can't wait to see their playdate. Moving on.

Reviewer: Agnus Bimbal (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 10:54 PM · On: Dinner Drags On

Great start! I love mortal Edward with his mind reading capabilities. I know this is considered fiction but my mother raised nine children and she always knew where to find us. She obviously has some gift. I loved that Edward got rid of Lauren and had a second dinner at the same restaurant and even the same table!! Ten points to Edward and the maitre d'. Now on to chapter two.

Reviewer: bluebrise (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 03:59 PM · On: Too Much

I've gone through the 12 chapters in one sitting since I was so intruiged by it! The story is fantastic and I love the characters that you've made them out to be; you see all of their strengths and their flaws and it meshes together so well.

The sex tape thing didn't really throw me off since we are in such a digital age and Edward was a bit of a ladykiller before, but he definitley didn't deserve a setup like that. My money is on James being behind it - the right lighting and a little breaking and entering is a bad combination, but you add in a jilted ex, it just makes it worse!

I hope you update soon! I can't wait for the fallout and I hope Bella won't give up on Edward, especially in his time of need, because of her insecurities about Tanya.

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 01:47 PM · On: Too Much

Please, Please, Please keep working on this story!!!!

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 01:21 PM · On: Fame

HOLY CRAP! Sex tapes! This is not good...
And I just noticed, you haven't updated since September! I really really hope you continue to work on this story!

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 12:53 PM · On: Margaritas

:) Off the market? I have a feeling bella isn't happy about this!!!!!!

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 12:15 PM · On: A Rose by any other name

Emmett is a fireman!! LOVE IT!!! I liked that Emmett took control and taught Rose a lesson! :)
I wonder where bella's taking edward?
Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 11:13 AM · On: Too early

The battery dying was brilliant!
And Monkey Man made it! Hurray!!! :)

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 10:30 AM · On: It's all in the leading

I'm so happy they went on a real date! I'm hoping Esme will meet bella soon!
I'm loving every chapter! (Jasper sending out lust was awesome!)

Reviewer: jdsk (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 12:17 PM · On: Playdate

Edward does not waste time. I like this. A lot.

Reviewer: jdsk (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 10:03 AM · On: Dinner Drags On

This is going to consume my day. I just know it.
:D

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 12:27 AM · On: Lust

:) Loved it!!!

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 12:21 AM · On: Too Much

Please tell me your going to finish/update this one soon. I want to see where it is going to go... :)

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 07:28 PM · On: Dinner Drags On

Ooooh! Great first chapter. I can't wait to come back and read the rest after my kids are fed.. LOL :)

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 04:55 PM · On: Possibilities

crap, I got logged out and combined my chapter 3 and 4 comments... again, loved emmett!

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 04:52 PM · On: Playdate

Amazing! Loved this chapter! The date was awesome and I loved Emmett in this chapter!
I told my self I wouldn't comment on every chapter, but I can't help it! :)

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 02:21 PM · On: Playdate

AWESOME CHAPTER! Your Alice is brilliant! Loved it!

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 01:33 PM · On: An Interlude with Alice

I really enjoy your writings. So far you are doing a great job with all the characters!!! :)

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 11:12 PM · On: Dinner Drags On

I really like how your wrote Edward. He sounds old fashion.

Reviewer: Jaydee (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 11:27 AM · On: Too Much

After reading Hiding in Plain Sight, I was ithing to read more of your writing and so here I am! Thought I'd let you know that I sat up til 3:30am reading this. Again, it's such a page turner (or would be if this was in the form of a novel). Ever since that James incident, you've had me at the edge of my seat, anticipating something big to happen. Can't wait to read the next chapters of this story either!! but I am partial to Hiding in Plain Sight a slight bit more :)
Awesome work!

Reviewer: pipergirl (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 01:49 PM · On: Too Much

I want to thank you for writing characters who can work their way through issues in a mature manner. Overreactions have been written ad nauseam, so it's refreshing to see Bella and Edward being honest and not jumping to conclusions.
I'm loving this fic, btw, and the blossoming romance developing.

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