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Reviewer: helenareject (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is great!
Reviewer: Hayliz94 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
You are incredibly evil...but somehow it was a good place to end.
Reviewer: Run_Joanzie (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 2
Whew! Wow, that was great... Ok, I'm off to bed! Fabulous story!! I loved it!
Joan
Reviewer: Run_Joanzie (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMG! It's suddenly very very VERY hot in here!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 2
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I do hope you continue. It was so beautiful.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 2
Love it
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 2
I like this. please continue wih it.
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 2
I have no idea why you wouldn't think people would like this story! It's beautifully written, very much IC (if Edward had acted on his feelings, that is) and deliciously smutty. Edward and Bella together, being sweet and romantic and intimate. What's not to like? I, myself, thought they should have shown this type of passion in the books long before they actually did. I mean, come on, Edward would kiss Bella to the point of making her dizzy and/or pass out and he never once had an erection? Right.
Reviewer: jemimag (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 2
great story!! Hope you write more!!
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 2
Really beautiful. Thank you!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 2
I TOTALLY LOVE THIS!!!!MORE PLEASE!!!!!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
Evil doesn't even begin to describe it... LOL I'll keep watch for another chapter. Please... hurry!!!
Joan
Reviewer: Katrina117 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 1
This was a very good drabble, I can't really clasify it as a story because it didn't really have an ending, but it was still really good. A proper conclusion would, of course, improve it.
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 1
i dont hate you, but i do think you should write a sequel. really good story!
Reviewer: AnaPrintemps (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 1
Most unsatisfying, but very well written. It's harder to believe Edward pov and you did well channeling him.
Reviewer: IluvRobandEdward (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
...........No comment..........
Reviewer: windchime (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 1
I agree. In many ways this is more erotic than a blow by blow description. Beautifully done.
Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
Seriously hot and beautiful one shot.
The cliffie kinda sucks..but I can see why you would end it here.
AWESOME!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it and hopefully you don't hate me too much for the ending. ;)
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 1
That was really good i really injoyed it great job
Reviewer: graceisgone (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
hot!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh this was so very erotic. I don hope you are going to continue with this scene. You are doing a wonderful job with it!
Author's Response: I tried my best to make it as such. However, I don't think I'll continue it. I like it as it is...but I will never say never. I do have some ideas for more...
Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
I think that was a fine place to stop- Give 'em some privacy already!
Nice take on New Moon- Edward owed Bella a little action after leaving her like that! And I never thought about it, but Jake could've been outside Bella's house that night- what an interesting turn to New Moon!
Author's Response: I know right?! If people want to think more into what they are up to, then the more power to them. I'll let someone else's imagination take it where they want it to go (haha).
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
Lovely! They are so perfect!
Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
Aw, man! Evil place to stop, but you're right. It was a good place to do it.
I loved this story! Steamy and sweet and great. You used the crooked grin an awful lot, but hey, who can resist that smile? :-)
Author's Response: Well I hope you don't hate me too much for the ending, but I couldn't bring myself to write more. I'm glad you liked it though--even with the excessive crooked grin. :-)
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was great. I figured when you said ite or nibble you meant that he just applied some pressure. That or didn't break the skin. YOu did a great job on this. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you understood the nibbling part. I just figured I should clarify because I someone brought up the point of biting when I posted this on my fanfiction account.
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