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Reviewer: Tasia32 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Revelations
Yay, he found out! I also think it is a great idea for them to get closer to each other before he lets her know that he is the piano player. It will make things much better. Great chapter, update soon!
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Revelations
Great chapter. He now has to leave things for her outside the door. Letters, stories, books, poems- something that defines him.
Very sweet and romantic. Loved it!
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Revelations
I think u've dome really well without mu suggestion, lol. but maybe e can reveal that with bela in such a romantic ways.. yeah we are all sucker for mushy mushy romantic stuff i guess, lol. pleas update soon!
Reviewer: EliseT29 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Revelations
Great chapter!
Reviewer: Jordanthegirl (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Revelations
Im SO happy he found out it was her!!!
Reviewer: riddiculusvampire (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Revelations
haha he knows!! yayy. sheesh Jasper had to come and ruin the mood between those two -.-
haha i found myself sympathizing with bella when she lost her book...im a huge book worm and im very protective of them XP great chappie!
-riddiculusvampire
Reviewer: Naymee (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Revelations
Yay! I love a little reveal in the middle of a good story. Now that Edward knows what we know I can stop being so frustrated while I wait for Bella to know what Edward knows what we know. You know?
Ace chapter. More please!!
Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Revelations
This is such a sweet and delicate story. I'm enjoying it immensely.
Reviewer: BRANDY_D (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Revelations
I love your story, I wish the chapters were longer though.....
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Revelations
Yes! He knows!
Can't wait for Bella to find out.
Please update soon.
Reviewer: khhc (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Revelations
sweet, really.
Reviewer: JeannieRoss (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Revelations
I loved this chapter. Such a great story.
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Arrivals
LOved this chapter.
Something small I've wanted the WHOLE story is for Bella to wake up happy on morning and go out to Emmett jamming and start rocking out with him (to an oldie preferably) then everyone come out and get in on it! I don't know, I just think that would be extremely cute! Making reakfast and rocking out!
Reviewer: _LuvTwilight_ (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Revelations
Great chapter, I am so happy that he knows! He should leave a rose on the steps for her... oh, and start discussing books. LOL!
Reviewer: SlmCandle (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Revelations
Wow! This is a very nice fanfiction and it's very unique. I really like it. Can you update for me and make my day? I promise I'm a good reviewer and I get back to you within 3-4 days of the notice coming to my inbox. Update soon and I'll be happy. Maybe Bella would fancy a good mood in the morning? Like jumping up and down when she thinks no one is around but Edward is there and she's caught jumping?Like in the commons area or the kitchen to relieve some of her intense stress at getting the book or something like that? lol. =)
SlmCandle
Reviewer: Kim620 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Revelations
I am so glad that Edward knows. I was afraid you were going to drag it out. It felt like it was time for one of them to know. I agree that it needs to work itself out. He's already confused about his feelings. Might as well have him figure them out before he gets all confusing with Bella. It would be cute if when the time comes and he's ready to start revealing himself that he leaves her little clues/presents on the stairs.
Reviewer: childrenwith4legs (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Revelations
So he knows. I think that was the best thing. Bella has lost A LOT in her short life and to lose that book that was obviously so dear to her, was another 'valuable' thing that broke her heart a little more than it already is. Him giving that book back, brought more hope back to her.
Great chapter, I'm loving how this story is going!
Reviewer: TwilaEveningStar (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Revelations
Yes, it would be nice if he keeps it a secret for now that he knows it's Bella. I bet he's going to compose her lullabye later in the story. Your story is lovely and I hope you come out with more amazing chapters.
Reviewer: peachykeenbean17 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Revelations
awww so cute. Your story always puts a smile on my face :)
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Revelations
I'm so glad at least one of them knows! Hopefully this will help Edward change and grow in his understanding of relationships...seems he didn't have much use for girls other than a quick "dip and go".
It's time for him to take her out on a real date. Eventually, when he wants her to know, what if he took her somewhere that has a piano and proceeds to play all the pieces she's left for him...
Reviewer: lisamichelle17 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Revelations
Oh heart. I love that Edward knows. I don't know if you are planning any type of drama but every story usually has some alas. Have you thought about maybe bringing a little bit of jealousy into the story? Maybe even a little bit of jealousward :-)
Reviewer: JennahRenesmee (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Revelations
I just had a very interesting idea, that she could accidentally find out that Edward is her player without him knowing. So he knows that its her and she knows that its him, but neither knows that the other knows. I think that would make for some really crazy plot development. Food for thought...
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Revelations
I was right, Edward figured it out...I have to wonder if Bella ever figures these things out in any story that needs figureing out...more romanitc this way i guess. ok, More plz!
Reviewer: babylou23 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Arrivals
just started your story and your writing is very capturimg with the details. great job going to read some more now i think i'm already addicted
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Revelations
hey i am happy that he was gonna take bella out anyway even though he didnt know i hope she shares her past with him as well =]
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