Thanks for updating!! I can't wait for bella to find out that it is Edward that is playing. and I hope you dont make jacob to evil, but he did seem a little creepy!

Great chapter. Poor Edward. Hope he'll get to ask Bella out eventually. Wish they could have had a moment in the clearing. Damn Jacob.

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Another great chapter.  Damn everyone interrupting Edward and everytime he wants to ask her to dinner or lunch.  JUST YELL IT EDWARD - ASK HER THE NEXT TIME SOMEONE INTERRUPTS YOU! lol

I'm not gonna lie, I'm a total Jacob hater!  I can't stand him! So you can do whatever you want with him as long as he doesn't get Bella or even the chance to kiss Bella!  j/k... you can do whatever you want with your story and I'll still read it!

So good... When is poor edward going to get a break???

Please don't let Jacob come between Bella I don't mind if he is the bad guy that way Edward can save Bella

I like Jacob, but I like Edward more.  Jealousy is a fun emotion to play with though ;)  But I like the idea of Jacob being the bad guy.  Stirring up some jealousy perhaps and what have you. 

I think it'd be nice if Bella surprised Edward by asking him to dinner or something since he chooses the wrong moments to ask.  Keep him on his toes with her surprising him.

aww jacob the bad guy..i cant picture it !! but as long as edward and bella get together im happy!

Make Jacob be the bad guy! Let him know this is a completely Bella and Edward love-love romance fanfic and he isn't allowed to be a love interest. lol OKay I am biased but still! He's ALWAYS a mood killer and ruining EVERYTHING!!! I don't like him times Infinity cuz hate is too strong and caring for him. lol. 

 

OMG Universe.... could you interefer any more in Bella and Edward advancing in their relationship or are you just mocking us for hoping he'll get to ask her just to shoot us down??? lol. I want him to ask her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

Bella is sooooooooooo cute in her sweetness. lol. well time for the good authoress to update! 

 

Love,

SlmCandle

 

(P.S. You're climbing my favs list now lol. I think you're somewhere around in the top 100 but consider that I've read thousands of fanfics so you're doing pretty dang good!)

very cute story

Awww! I love it!

poor edward. will he ever get to take her out? jacob is really creepy. so if you decide to leave him out or make him the bad guy that's fine.

ugh..poor Edward. He always tries to ask her out and somethiong comes up! haha well yayy! i was so happy that this updated! can't wait for the enxt chappie!

-riddiculusvampire

Great chapter! Of course Jacob always has to show up in one way or another, but I like your idea of Jacob being the bad guy. I just love bad Jacob, because it gives Edward the knight in shining armor label when he gets to come in and rescue Bella. Can't wait for the next chapter and keep up the great worK!!