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Reviewer: lisamichelle17 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:42 PM · On: From Good to Bad
Oh no. Jacob has Bella. I hope the FBI can get to Bella in time before Jacob hurts her even more.
Reviewer: SlmCandle (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:22 PM · On: From Good to Bad
lol Nice and I TOLD YOU JACOB RUINS EVERYTHING!!!!!!!! lol. Well I like and I expect another update soon cuz i'm like a gullible fool, hungry for more even when it sad. lol. Well........... is it the cabin they mentioned when they first met? lol. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ..... or else....... the dustmites will attack you!lol
Sincerely,
SlmCandle
Reviewer: Bella and Edward Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 05:52 PM · On: From Good to Bad
This is Great!! I like how you put it where Bella had just found out that Edward is the person playing for her then she gets kidnaped. I love this story!! Please write and post soon!!
Reviewer: EliseT29 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 05:42 PM · On: From Good to Bad
Wonderful chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 05:30 PM · On: From Good to Bad
umm.. hmm... I think this one for me just kinda missed the mark... it is a little far fetched that Jacob would have been able to stay on campus or even get back on after the little episode earlier.... that or there would have been a watch on his truck/liscense plate that is the biggest thing....
plus wasn't she assulted before.... I don't know with that as something in her history that she has dealt with before I just don't buy the stupidity of her actions especially based on the stuff that happened with him earlier in the evening......
this part just didn't flow with the rest of the story and was kinda contrived and way to convienient/predictiable.... I feel like I've read this story before.... and it was so good leading up to this part as far as being fun and different.......
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 05:25 PM · On: From Good to Bad
Argh!!! This ending was almost as bad as the last!!!! Thanks for updating! I still am in love with your story :)
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Arrivals
Oh, my fucking a duck!!!! AAHH Jacob....creepy....aaaahhhh
just ahhhhhh
Poor BElla Poor Edward just aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh
Reviewer: buckwheat (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 04:33 PM · On: From Good to Bad
wow dramatic!!!!! I love it. please update ASAP!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 04:14 PM · On: From Good to Bad
What the fack is up with asshat Jake! Omfg!! he better not hurt her! Edward will never forgive himself for not getting to her in time!! Totally liked Bella's reaction to Edward being the pianist she has shared gifts with! totally looking forward to more
Reviewer: princessitavalevale (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 04:10 PM · On: From Good to Bad
omg!! he finally told her and all this happen?
pls!! let jacob don't do anything to bella!!!
continueeeeee!!!!
pls!
XOXO
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 03:59 PM · On: From Good to Bad
GASP! oh no you didn't! haha. good idea. I had a feeling this Jacob would creep a little bit more, so it wasn't completely unexpected, but nice twist nonetheless.
Reviewer: Kim620 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 03:55 PM · On: From Good to Bad
Damn that Jacob!!!!!! Can Emmett kick his ass please? LOL.
How could Bella just walk away from Edward like that? And she knew what he must be thinking. I would have launched myself at him and kissed him all night long, but maybe that's just me? LOL.
Can't wait for more more more.........
Reviewer: Ellie is a freak name (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 03:55 PM · On: From Good to Bad
Updates = Love + Happiness
;) lol
Reviewer: claireo (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 03:28 PM · On: From Good to Bad
oh my god! my mouth literally fall open while reading this!
i can not wait until next chapter!!
do you have an idea how long this story might be??
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 02:34 PM · On: From Good to Bad
O_O oh god if he hurts her, poor Edward!
Reviewer: dazzeled (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 02:15 PM · On: From Good to Bad
OJ i new something was wrong in jacobs head hes a crazy CREEPER!!!!!!!!!! please dont let him rape him i will go die in a hole ok maybe thats a bit dramatic realistically ill probably just sit and cry in my room anyways update before i go INSANE
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 01:46 PM · On: From Good to Bad
omg this is so sad awww i mean its a really great idea and a really well written chapter but its soooooooo good =] i really really cant wait for the update =]
Reviewer: peachykeenbean17 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 01:25 PM · On: From Good to Bad
Sad day :(
I hope everything will turn out okay
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 01:09 PM · On: From Good to Bad
oh my goodness bella!
EDWARD TO THE RESCUE!
Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 12:57 PM · On: From Good to Bad
I can't belive he kidnaped her. Poor bella. I hope they find her before he does something.
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 12:41 PM · On: From Good to Bad
Oh my gosh! That sucks so freakin bad! Ugh! Jacob makes a good crazy obsessed guy though. Something intense had to happen right?! It's really good! Thanks for writing so fast!
Reviewer: kaystu (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 12:23 PM · On: From Good to Bad
gahhh im so excited to see what happens please update soon, i love this story, xox!!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 12:17 PM · On: From Good to Bad
Oh poor Bella!!! Please don't let her be ok and I hope they find her soon.
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 12:03 PM · On: The First Piece
**gives you medicine for your laptop**
:)
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Edward
This is very cute. I like how Bella is sort of falling for her sweet piano player, all the while not knowing it's Edward!
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