You know how crazy I went when I saw this was updated? REALLY crazy. I was so excited to read this *squeals*
Anyway, I listened to the song at the start as I read. I'm still listening to it again, as I put it on repeat :P It is really good. I'll look up the band once I'm finished. The lyrics really fit with what happened. Reminds me of Jalice in this story.
I loved how you wrote the meeting between them. He had his eyes closed and was thinking about Alice, then she comes up and kisses him. He doesn't have time to move away beforehand, and then he catches her.. scent :P
There are lots of little hints here and there. Like how he said he never cared about anything, but with Alice, he felt something different and actually wanted to do it. I liked that. It's like they both knew, in some way, who they were.
I remember now that James drugged Jasper, I remembered that the moment James said 'just one drink'. Even if I didn't know that he'd drugged him, I'd still have picked up on that.. good job James did that, huh?
It said 'outtake 2' at the top. Have I just forgotten about other outtakes? I'm trying to remember.
Is there anything else to this story? Please say there is! *gets down on hands and knees and begs*
Really? That is so awesome. And thank you so much for such a wonderful review. I'm over the moon. :) Really.
I am so happy you like the song. The band are a favorite of mine and I needed to include one of their songs, and this one fit so well. I always think of Jalice when I hear it now. :)
Thank you! I am so happy you like that.
I tried to include some and I'm glad you caught them and liked them. I think what James did was super wrong, but I can never really blame him either. Cause his actions had some pretty good consequences.
Oh yes. There is one more chapter, but it is not about Alice and Jasper and it wasn't written by me. Another reader wrote a scene with Maria and Nettie. I'm sorry to disappoint you in this way, but if you want to read it, here is the link:
Once again, thank you so much for your kind words and reviews!