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Reviewer: DazzedByRob (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Trick or Treat
alice is so perfectly persistent and demanding. i love it
and the domino analagy... perfect.
Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Distraction
I love your story. Its so well written. You really get Edward!!
Reviewer: dropheart (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Heaven and Hell
omg! add more! lol. i love it! Great job!!
Author's Response: hee hee hee okay!
thanks!
blondie
Reviewer: Lily Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Heaven and Hell
you evil nasty horrible stepheniemeyerindisguise, how can you live with yourself after stopping it there?
GAH!
The only reason i'm not telling you to go DIE is that i want you to friggin' UPDATE IN A TIMELY MANNER THIS TIME.
Author's Response: Now be nice! I stopped this hugely long chapter exactly where SM stopped hers! The chapter will come when it comes.
blondie
Reviewer: DazzedByRob (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Distraction
ha. love Saleen Mustangs. fav.
Reviewer: DazzedByRob (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 11:15 AM · On: The End
so... sitting in an office with my freind... and people walking in and out.. and my tears are fighting the urge to spill over...
the worst parts was when he was saying goodbye to esme and carlisle and calling thme mom and dad. i was like. GAHHH...
so good. you really get his head well.... so pianful
Reviewer: One crazy monkey (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Heaven and Hell
more please! I loved it!
Author's Response: thanks!
blondie
Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Heaven and Hell
I just read the author's note & had to say that that alone was brilliantly funny & woth the update alone!
Now I'm going to go back & read more from angsty Edward
Reviewer: DazzedByRob (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Domestic Disturbance
gahhh... i loved the way you described his inability to move while in the woods just listening to her sleep.
so good... im excited to continue this. =)
Reviewer: DazzedByRob (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Separation
so.. painful.
Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Heaven and Hell
Holy Cow! What an amazing and excruciating story! I didn't think Edward's story could be more sad and tragic than Bella's, but knowing what was really going on the whole time made Edward's pain that much more devastating. I loved how he also had delusions of Bella talking...but they only repeated things she had previously spoken to him. How clever! Also loved the whole Victoria hunt. It was very chilling at the farmhouse woth the girl who looked like Bella. This story is unbelievably well written and so true to Stephanie's Edward. Also completely addictive...I could get NO work done today after I discovered your story last night! Thank you for writing this, and I beg of you not to torture us with too long of a wait for an update!
Reviewer: jct2004 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Heaven and Hell
Loved how you convinced Edward to reveal his side of the story!! That set the stage so well for this chapter--it was such a reminder of how heartbroken Edward was when he went to Volterra to die. This chapter, like each one before it, has brought Edward to life so vividly for me! Thank you for staying so true to the characters. I'm telling you--I am so addicted to this story! I check Twilighted everyday in hopes for a new update from you. Thank you so much for your brilliant perspective on this story--it complements SM's perfectly. I'm constantly amazed by your talent!
Author's Response: I've always wanted to have a conversation with Edward - it was a surprise that it came out with THIS chapter. But, he's most intense when he's in pain, poor guy!
I'm glad he sounds 'right' - I've said many times that that's my goal, and with every word I write, I ask myself if I think I've achieved that. It's great to hear I'm doing alright!
thanks so much for reading, and for your patience!
blondie
Reviewer: DazzedByRob (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Decision
I just love emmett so much.
the way you describe things... amazing. i love it. love it
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:43 AM · On: Heaven and Hell
Well I'm glad you and Edward came to a understanding cause I loved this chapter. Please Please update soon
Author's Response: Thanks so much! He's still stubborn, so hopefully he'll see that it'll be over faster if he helps rather than fights!
blondie
Reviewer: christianec (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 05:25 AM · On: Heaven and Hell
Ah I love it! Even better than the AN haha... I really love how you write Edward, descriptive and angsty but not overdone.. You are a genius blondie! Well Done!
Author's Response: My goal is to make Edward sound like SM's Edward - which is quite a challenge. I'm glad he sounds right! Thanks again!
robin
Reviewer: christianec (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Heaven and Hell
before I start reading the chapter i just have to say BEST AUTHORS NOTE EVER!! I love you just for that! Now back to the chapter. Talk to you after :-)
Author's Response: Hee hee hee - your pre-read reviews crack me up! Thanks so much for such love! 8-D
blondie
Reviewer: Amy x-x (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Heaven and Hell
Wow. Just wow! This story is fantastic! Its always the one I look out for, you've just captured Edward so perfectly! I can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Sorry for the long wait for the reply - but the next chapter is FINALLY off to beta! More coming soon!
blondie
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Heaven and Hell
I always wondered what was going through Edward's mind during this scene. He was so quiet, it was impossible to tell. Great chapter!
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: Yes, he was exceptionally quiet during that walk, and figuring out why was quite the challenge! I'm glad it came out right!
thanks!
blondie
Reviewer: DazzedByRob (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Party
okay. you are seirously good... seriously... seriously... good.
Author's Response: 8-) Thank you! Buckle your seat belt, you're in for a wild (and possibly tearful) ride!
blondie
Reviewer: IluvRobandEdward (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Heaven and Hell
OMG there are back together I missed Bella and now Edward is sort of happy. great chapter My patince for Bella and Edward to meet has come. THank for respond to my e-mail. Molto Bene ragazza!
Author's Response: Sort of happy is right...and he's not going to be really happy for a while! 8-)
thanks so much!
blondie
Reviewer: DazzedByRob (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Birthday
yay!
Author's Response: Thanks!
blondie
Reviewer: nan_ok (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Heaven and Hell
I love your story! You are an extremely talented writer. I have been just as depressed as when I read New Moon8-) Thank you for Edwards's POV. You truly seem to capture his essence.
This is only the 2nd story I've read on Twilighted, so I forgot to check if you were finished. I hope not and that you follow until the end of the story- and soon!
I look forward to reading more of your work - you're in my favorites!
Author's Response: hahaha - sorry to make you depressed! 8-) There's more to come - 4 or 5 more chapters, I think. Thanks for reading (and being depressed!).
blondie
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Heaven and Hell
Brilliant! So good! This story is the perfect accompaniment to New Moon! Every Twilight fan should read it! *nods head in agreement with self*
I loved being able to finally read what Edward thought of the reunion because it really does feel like it's Edward. He's perfectly in character. Scarily so.... in fact the men in the white coats will be here any minute now! *looks around nervously* XP lol No, I actually loved the heart to heart you had with Edward at the beginning it was so funny! lol And it obviously did the job, helping you understand him better, because that chapter was fantastic! I loved his reaction when Alice was telling him all about Bella! >.<
I can't wait to read more! Please tell me that you're giong to continue it until the end of New Moon!? *looks hopeful* Anyway, I hope you update soon! :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad this chapter came out right to you. I hope the guys in the white coats are here for Edward - he's the real looney!
I am going to continue to the end. I'm estimating 4 or 5 more chapters, but won't know till they're written. Thanks for all your reviews!
blondie
Reviewer: 2footprints (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Heaven and Hell
Please please don't take so long to write the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Unfortunately, it comes when it comes 8-). Savor this one for a bit longer, kay?
thanks so much for reading!
blondie
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Heaven and Hell
So happy to see a update, this is still one of my all time favorite stories on here. You capture Edward so well and I look forward to more :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much - I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
blondie
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