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Reviewer: Tannis (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

please tell me u r going to write more???? pleaseeeee??????????!?!?!?

Reviewer: Lyta7 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 11 - VJGM

Aw, so bittersweet. A great chapter, and I really can't wait to find out if he'll find Bella or not.

Reviewer: Lizababy (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 11 - VJGM

You know...this was very enjoyable for me to read. Also, I'm quite happy that I didn't read it from your first conception after reading your author notes and seeing that you had some long awaited updates in between. =)

Your story in very interesting, the only thing is that I'm just getting comfy with your chapter and then it comes to an end. But, no worries...I will follow your story.

Charlotte is such a nice character, a well rounded teen. I see the goodness of her heart with telling Edward the truth. I know it took a lot for her to send him away for 2 months to find Bella, but, I thibk she did the right thing and that will play a very pivotal part in your storyline.

I'm not sure what Edward will find with his time in Forks, and if he does connect with Bella will it be a hit or miss?

I know we all love the B/E romance, but, right now I'm favoring your character Charlotte by a very long shot. I wish Charlotte, only the best!

Good luck with your story. Please don't give up and keep on writing. You'll have accomplished so much once your story is complete. It's so very fulfilling to look back and know that "you did it!"

Hang in there and I'll be here, looking forward to all your updates. Just one request? Please don't leave us hanging to long between updates.

Thank you!

Reviewer: Rainbowbrite89 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

yes an update! i love this story its so good.

im not gonna lie the first thing i was saw was that it was set in Charleston, Sc and thats where i live and then i read it and loved. cant wait to read more :)

Reviewer: Lyta7 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 10

Great chapter! I really like that he can read her mind, that she isn't really a Bella replacement. And then the last line? Hmm, I wonder where this will take us...

Reviewer: Lyta7 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 8

Hmm, so is she Bella or is Bella out there somewhere? I'm going to have to keep reading to find out. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Lyta7 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 6

Loving this story so far! Can't wait to keep reading. :)

Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 7

You're story is great can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Cassie Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 7

That was amazingly amazing! I'm so freaking excited for the next chapter it's not even sane, haha!

Please update soon! Your story is one of the only Edward/Other Character fics I've seen -- which truthfully, I've been searching for for freaking ever -- and I'm 100% hooked and addicted!

- Cassie

Reviewer: z-miler (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

wow! that was amazing. i'm so glad you finally updated. this was the first fanfic that i read and it has me hooked. i can't wait till the next chapter!!!!!

Reviewer: Several Ways (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 7

That was amazing! i think the long wait made it more amazing actually...but that doesnt mean you can abandon us for 3 mnths again!! one week is quite enough

keep up the excellent job! btw when is jasper appearing?! he's my favourite cullen!! (excluding edward, obv) :)

Reviewer: CoyotegurlNikki (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 7

I am SO glad you updated. I really like this story. Actually, I wish I would find myself meeting Edward one day. Although I'm not sure I could remain as calm as Charlotte. I hope he climbs into her window LOL...

Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 6

Gah!! Damned cliffhangers!

Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 3B

Hey- my only criticism on this chapter is that there seems to be question marks after each paragraph. There might be a meaning behind them, but its just something that you might want to clean if unintentional.

:)

Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

Gah! If only...

Reviewer: Twiliision (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ok I just have to say that I love this story soo much, it was a similar idea I fantasized over! I wish the chapeters were longer and can't wait for more!

Reviewer: asrial (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 7

i just found your story today and i think it is really a fun plot! i love how edward is "real" because man, i would give anything to run into him like that, LOL! :) I hope you update more often!

Reviewer: Sophz456 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 7

This is something new and unexpected! What a cool idea to make the vampires actually exist!

I really like what you've done so far - I was about to go to bed (It was 3.40AM here at the time) but I saw this story and thought I might as well read it, thinking I'd read one chapter and then stop. Yeah, that failed.

So now it's 4.10AM, I've read all of your chapters so far and I'm absolutely hooked!

I hope you can find the time to write another chapter soon - I can't wait to see if a certain gorgeous vampire puts Charlotte's open window to good use!

Reviewer: Several Ways (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 6

*probably*

sorry, bit of a perfectionist

btw the reviewer before mine is one of my bfs at school...coincidence much?! I had no idea she reviewed it...and then I saw her user name and I thought "NO WAY!" out of all the net, and I find HER?! its fate! We share the same first name and initials too

but she is way nicer a person than I am...she'll def go to heaven! Me? maybe Mount Purgatory first!

Reviewer: Several Ways (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 6

OMG I've been wanting to review this story since...too long for me to remember! I've finally got an account and have just submitted my story. Yours was the first I read on Twilighted and I love it!! It's such a dream come true to be able to meet THE Edward...and so romantic!! It'll be very interesting to see what happens! But hurry up with the next chapter! Don't tell me you've abandoned it!! well, of course, you have to get on with your everyday life too, but don't be too long!

Oh and btw, the grammar, vocab and spelling is porbably one of the best I've read in terms of fanfic...at least you bother with commas!

Author's Response:
Thank you SO much! You have no idea how great it felt to recieve your review! I put so much work and effort into my stories, especially the grammar and spelling (i have the best beta EVER!), that it's really nice to recieve positive feedback! Sadly, I hadn't abandonned this story as much as just put it on hold for a while, and because of your fantastic review it is officially off hold! I'm putting the next chapter out tonight and will hopefully have the chapter after that out in a week! Thank you so much for helping me get another jump start on this story - your review means so much!

Reviewer: mysticwarrior (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 6

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is so awsome! I know its mean to bug you about writting more chapters, but its so damn addictive to read!!!!!!! please write some more~~~!

xxx

Reviewer: RunsWithVampires (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 6

I just read two other cliff hanger stories in a row! Well since it seems to be an addiction of this writers I won't hold it against you but please update soon!!

Author's Response: Ha ha, I felt so bad about leaving you hanging there! Don't worry, I'll update ASAP

Reviewer: CoyotegurlNikki (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 6

NO! Oh man, I was so wrapped up in her speech I didn't realize I was at the end! HAHA. I can't believe Edward left. I want to know where he went...

Reviewer: Djanga (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 6

I'm enjoying it so far, and looking forward to more!!!

Reviewer: elphabacy35 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 6

well, I am liking this a lot! can't wait to see where it is going...

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