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Reviews For The Sweetest Thing
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

I swear I think I just swooned.  I don't even know how to swoon, but I am blushing - it's so lovely!

Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

I love  it when you write edward-you two are very witty!Great chapter, glad he went after Bella. 

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

Great chapter. So glad Edward went to Chicago. I liked the phone calls. Hope Bella will call Mike back and tell him she doesn't want to go back, instead of ignoring him. Encouraging Mike/Bella interaction? I know, I'm insane.

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: teenagain (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

Love this story! Is SOOOO good. I like this Edward..:o)

Reviewer: victoriajoy (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

GREAT fic! Just found this today, and absolutely love it. Can't wait to read the next chapter.....

Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

i fucking love this story. so glad its back.

Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 4: Things We Normally Do

Oh good God in heaven! 

Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 3: Stood Up

Holy crap.  I feel like I just read the alternate ending to 'Jerry Maguire!'  You had me at hello had NOTHING on that!!!

Reviewer: marteloise (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

I'm glad that Edward came to Chicago! Love how you're writing the characters. I wonder how she will deal with the Mike situation once back, especially when talking face to face with him.. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 2: Saints & Sinners

Ah, so nice.  I know everyone loves the lemons, but I swear the 'first sight' is my favorite part of any story.  (But I'll be happy to have a lemon slice in the biography stacks, too!)

Reviewer: famouslyso (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

Aw, I loved this chapter, Maggie!  Edward was beyond precious.  And your grammar was impeccable...no worries ;)  I can't wait to see what you've got in store next!!

Reviewer: euroweasley (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

Sigh...at last

Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

I just found your story...and I'm in love with it :D It's very well written and constructed.

Though I have conflicted emotions about unfaithfulness, I think in this case, there's no other way around it. If a stranger makes you feel more in a single conversation than 3 years of commited relationship... it's a wake up call, really, that something is terribly wrong.

I understand Bella and her commitment to Mike, he's been good to her (who knows how men have treated her in the past or how her past relationships worked), he's kind and "perfect", but she's right, if 3 years with him made her lose herself, I wonder what's marriage and life with him going to do to her personality, she's really not the kind of woman to become a Stepford Wife, sooner or later, it would all blow up in their faces, and not in a good way either ;)

For a while there I thought that she was going to choose Mike, cos I think she is, before everything, someone who keeps her word. But I have to agree with Alice here, it's a shot at love, not just secureness and feeling protected. Poor Mike...I feel for him, I really do (I don't hate him as most fans out there) ...maybe he's gay and it's a shot a love and getting out of the closet for him ;)

Wonderful wonderful story!! I can't wait for more!! I'm looking forward for their time in Chicago :D

Thanx

PS: sorry for the long review, guess I'm making up for not reviewing all of them :S

Reviewer: alicenative (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

Aw!!  I am so glad that he went to Chicago to be with Bella.

Reviewer: kazz68 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

I love this story and have been waiting for an update. Thanks so much. Please keep writing this one . I think it will be good

Reviewer: jessnab (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

OMG I thought you abandon this story! Such a long chappy too! I knew Edward would be in Chi town ,can they please "release" the sexual tension now ? You have a great AU story you deserve an award. 

Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

yay!!!! wait she did choose him right?? does that mean we finally get to c mike kicked to the curb??? 

i hope so.... :))

cant wait for more!!

<3's for you!!!

Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

yay keep going!!

Reviewer: kmad67 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 4: Things We Normally Do

'substance in his touch' ... writing perfection.

Reviewer: wwonder (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

The story is at a great pace. I can't complain. Keep 'em coming.



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I hope I can keep you complaint free! :D

Reviewer: AngelinaBallerina (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

Great chapter! So happy to see an update. :) Yay for Edward going to Chicago!



Author's Response:

*ducks head* Sorry for the delay.  Working on the next chappie! Thanks for the review... I hope to have something else up soon!

Reviewer: kmad67 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 3: Stood Up

dialogue perfection. bravissima.

Author's Response:

There is nothing I love better than good dialogue!  If I could write one lone conversation... well, that would be the best! Thank you for the review.  Keep reading! :D

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

I'm just waiting (and waiting, sorry) for the conversation where she says her final goodbye to *ick* Mike Newton *shiver*.  I'm SO glad Edward decided to go to Chicago and see her.  May Bella please find the courage (or whatever) to not screw this up! Thank you for writing this story.  I look forward to every chapter.  This Edward is amazingly HOT *pant* and yes, I've voted for you!



Author's Response:

Awwwww!  Thank you SO much!  It warms my heart to know that you look forward to my updates. :D  Thank you for your vote... I'll keep my fingers crossed that I've got more AWESOME readers like you that have done the same! 

Reviewer: loreleikate (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

Just read from beginning to end...I love it!  Waiting breathlessly for more...



Author's Response:

YAY!  Thanks for the love!! Hope to have a new chapter up soon.

Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Still

So happy he did get on plane and go see her. I realize she is still trying to figure things out, but she needs a friend. Or maybe more now. I guess we wil lsee. Thanks for the update. Do it again soon. =-D



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Next chapter should clarify where our 'couple' really stands.  Keep reading!  

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