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Reviews For The Sweetest Thing
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 1: Church Goer

I just started this story and I like it so far. Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: The_Reader (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 4: Things We Normally Do

Love this :D

Edward's one mighty fine temptation!

 

Reviewer: The_Reader (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 2: Saints & Sinners

"I felt like anytime I was in a bookstore my IQ shot up like 75 points."

ahahhah

I tried giving up cussing once but shit, fuck, and bitch are all natural in my vocab.

OoO and I loved all the innuendos!  Ahah good shit!..I mean stuff :D

Reviewer: acjklb08 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 4: Things We Normally Do

OK so it's a giving that we love Edward, but your Edward is all LOVE. I would faint if he was trying to sell me books and go broke...LOL

Bella is in such a hard spot. But she will never be happy if she can't be herself with the man she loves.  

I'm loving this story and I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: twilightjie (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 4: Things We Normally Do

edward is really temptation personified. but when would bella realize that mike is not the right guy for her.

Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 4: Things We Normally Do

have this! have this! lol

Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 3: Stood Up

wow, this story is excellent, and i love edward even more now. ive been there..trying to be someone your not for someone you want to love you for who you are instead of who they want you to be. its hard, and eventually you have to lay it out, that maybe the love isnt enough, and you cant pretend to be someone else anymore. you cant be who they want you to be. and either they accept that and love you for who you actually are or despise you for not being who they want you to be.  i had it the hard way, and i decided i was going to be who i am, and find someone who will love me despite the fact that i am a walking talking contradiction. thats life, and we have the choice not to settle for less than we want, or deserve. and no one deserves to feel like they have to be someone else.

Reviewer: queenboogie21 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 4: Things We Normally Do

Oh my gosh. I've passed by this story so many times and I don't know why I haven't added it yet! It's so romantic and the emotions are so raw. I felt Bella's pain and hopelessness with her not being herself. Anyways what Edward said to her in the pizza place was one of the most beautiful and romantic things I've ever read. I wish I had a guy like that. Anyways as much as I love to see Bella and Edward happy together I just wish them making out would have happened AFTER Bella told Mike how she felt. And that way he would reject her or something. So then technically Bella would have no fault or whatever in them breaking up. But whatever. Either way this story is awesome. Plz update soon and keep up the good work! :)

Reviewer: orangecosmo26 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 4: Things We Normally Do

Hmmm, can't wait to see who she chooses..... *cough* Edward *cough*

hehe

 

Can't wait for more! :)

Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 4: Things We Normally Do

All I have to say she NEEDS EDWARD.  To hell with Mike boring boring boring, she needs a real man.  Did I mention EDWARD!!!! Great story I can't wait for more

Reviewer: lmr14 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 4: Things We Normally Do

I'm pretty sure I said it after the last chapter, but just in case, this is one of the VERY BEST facfic stories I've ever read.  I just can't get enough!  You are a wonderful writer!  I held my breath the entire time they were in the apartment.  I love your Bella and your Edward. 

Also, I LOVED EPOV at the beginning. 

Does this story have a thread on the forum?  I didn't see it, but I didn't dig real hard.  I would be happy to start one...everyone should be reading this!!! 



Author's Response: Wow!!! Thank you so much for the compliments! I am trying so hard to make it realistic and palpable. As for the forum... I don't have a thread. I'd love to hear what you guys want from this story. Thanks again and keep on the lookout for upcoming chapters!

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 4: Things We Normally Do

Ok, I'm going to forget that this chapter ended here, as long as you update REALLY SOON, because that was just a cruel place to stop! Great chapter, but GRR!! Cliffhanger.



Author's Response: I am sorry. That cliffie was cruel. I am already working on the next chapter. Thank you for your review. It keeps me motivated.

Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 4: Things We Normally Do

This is my favorite.  I love your Edward.

I hope Bella picks him.

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 4: Things We Normally Do

This story tears at my heart strings.  It's so moving.  If she can't be herself with a man, she shouldn't be with that man, no matter who the man is.  I am hoping the next chapter has Bella in a heart to heart talk with Mike.  Why do I think she's going to end up with Edward no matter what?  Please update ASAP!



Author's Response: We'll just have to wait and see... ;> You keep reading and reviewing - I'll keep writing. Deal?

Reviewer: orangecosmo26 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 3: Stood Up

Oh my, Edward is so sweet!! He seems a more perfect match for her than Mike.  She can completely be herself around him from the get-go and Edward's response to her was absolutely perfect!!!  

Reviewer: orangecosmo26 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 1: Church Goer

Haha Bella's thoughts in this are hilarious!  I am so interested to keep reading... and see where Edward comes in perhaps??

Reviewer: twilightjie (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 3: Stood Up

i love your story. i can really feel bella's conflicted emotions.

Reviewer: lexluthorxiv (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 3: Stood Up

AHHH Loved the chapter, but there was one thing that bothered me. Smokers don't have perfectly white teeth. They just don't. Assuming he's been smoking for a while and hasn't just started, he won't have white teeth. I know it a picky picky comment. But, yeah, it just doesn't happen. Smoke stains your teeth.



Author's Response:

I appreciate the comment.  I've got something worked out for this one tho.  A silly little personal issue Edward has regarding his teeth. :D

Reviewer: mllesinistre (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 3: Stood Up

It's a little frustrating that I can't hate Mike as much as I want to in this story. He doesn't seem like such a bad guy, but I have to wonder why exactly Bella agreed to marry him when she can't be herself around him. Why hasn't she talked to anyone else about this? It already looks like Alice is concerned about Bella not being excited about the wedding, but are they close enough that Bella can confide in Alice? Does she have any other friends?

Edward is such a sweetheart, especially after responding to all of her fears like that. He'll charm the pants off of Bella in no time.

Great story. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 3: Stood Up

wow...very original.please keep going!!!!!!!!!!SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 3: Stood Up

GAH!

This chapter was oh-so-good! I am loving this story and I am just dying for more B&E interaction. They need to become friends so they have a reason to see each other - and I suspect they've begun. What a cool Edward, and what a sweet, confused Bella. I love listening in to her thoughts, and I very much wish we could listen in on HIS. :)

Looking forward to the next update!

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 3: Stood Up

You know what I'm thinking.  Get her the hell away from Mike!  It's not good for him either if he's marrying someone he doesn't really know.  Bella should always be with Edward.  Your story just proves it... but you know that, don't you?

Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 3: Stood Up

excellent.  why do I have a feeling that she was speaking to Edward and not about Mike.  I love it. They would be great together. I see very hot passionate kissing in the very near future. 

Reviewer: lmr14 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 3: Stood Up

I LLLOVVEE this story!!!  I can't even think of enough good things to say about it!  I love this Bella....not all weak and self conscience, but she doesn't have it all figured out either.  I love that she thinks and says stuff that my friends and I would think and say.  And I ADORE this Edward.  And honestly, I don't even hate this Mike.  I think he loves her....or who he thinks she is.  The best stories (to me, anyway) are the ones that the writer doesn't go out of their way to make someone a one dimensional bad guy. 

And by the way, the end of this chapter made me cry and I'm at work...people are starting to think I'm nuts....but it was totally worth it! 

I can't wait for the next chapter!!  AWESOME job!



Author's Response:

Awww, you're too sweet.  I've been there too, crying at work over something no one else would get.  You've made my day!  Stay tuned!

Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 3: Stood Up

THIS IS GREAT!

 

I love Edward, what a cool guy.

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