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Reviews For The Sweetest Thing
Reviewer: SleepyValentina (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 2: Saints & Sinners

“Twat was that? I cunt hear you,” I snapped smartly.

 

Awesome. Finally, a Bella like me.

Reviewer: SleepyValentina (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 1: Church Goer

TG the priest who did pre-cana for my husband and I didn't ask that question - and also that we hadn't yet discovered the godliness that is Rob Pattinson. Fun first chapter. I liked how you kept her fiance's identity unknown until the end.



Author's Response:

Lol. I pulled that question from my pre-cana.  It was rather enlightening to say the least. :D

Reviewer: elemirehum (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 5: No Envy, No Fear

im intriuged because for some strange reason i feel like this will be a bella nd mike Happily ever after story, coz there is no reason for bella to even choose edward apart from her want to be touched coz mike has been waiting for after the wedding, and she clearly loves mike...its really sad coz i feel like edward will b left heart broken in the end =[

i really wanna know the ending so you have a devoted reader in me =] x



Author's Response: Without revealing too much, I'll just reassure you that there is no Bella without Edward. :D

Reviewer: zahir (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 5: No Envy, No Fear

wow. this story is great!!! i can feel Bella issues and confusions and i wonder if she really ever loved Mike, or if she loved the person that Mike made of her... sometimes we blame other ones instead of the us... i know her felling and i know very well what is she feeling but is that real life...can you really feel so much for somebody that you just met????????

great history , can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Dramatic (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 5: No Envy, No Fear

Im loving your story! I just read all of it in one sitting! Your doing wonderfully well, the mike/bella relationship was totally a surprise, and the Edward/ bella chemistry is totally hot!! I have to say i dont really like Jasper yet though in your story, hes seems like a bit of an ass, i guess he just needs alice to keep him in line! Anyway keep up the good work! I cant wait for the next chapter so hurry! :)

-Erin

Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 5: No Envy, No Fear

I just started this story today & it is fantastic!  Its so original & well-written. Plus I like a Bella who drinks wine in the bath & swears-very relatable!  Great kissing scene, definately left me wanting more...

Reviewer: Cristen (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 4: Things We Normally Do


Reviewer: PsychWardSiren (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 5: No Envy, No Fear

I love this story so far, I'm hooked! Can't wait for more!

PsychWardSiren

-addy-

Reviewer: PsychWardSiren (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 5: No Envy, No Fear

I love this story so far, I'm hooked! Can't wait for more!

PsychWardSiren

-addy-

Reviewer: The_Reader (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 5: No Envy, No Fear

EDWARD!

ahah aw!  I love Jasper too!  He's a riot in this one!

OO and I liked the mental picture Edward took of Bella when she left his apartment!  Niiiiiice :D

I shall be anticipatiing the next installment :D :D :D

Reviewer: lmr14 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 5: No Envy, No Fear

I was so excited to see this update! Great chapter!  Mike surprised me - this is one of the few Mikes that I've read that I can't just out right hate yet and thats a good thing...makes for tougher choices for Bella and more drama!

I still love this Edward!  I love that he is not all "Eagle Scout" all the time...I like my Edward with a little edge!

Reviewer: iyaaan (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 5: No Envy, No Fear

update soon. please and thank you:)

Reviewer: jewelryjunkie (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 5: No Envy, No Fear

I can't believe I'm just now discovering this story. It's fantastic!!! Your writing style is great, and I love the plot. I'm a sap for HEA and I hope Edward & Bella get theirs! But I'm sure there will be a lot of obstacles and maybe some angst before we get there. I can't wait to keep reading!

Reviewer: CandaceC (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 5: No Envy, No Fear

Hello! Just wanted to say I discovered your story today and absolutely love it! I work at a bookstore and wish my boss was as yummy as Edward LOL. I love the connection your Bella and Edward have from the onset. I look forward to seeing where their relationship goes.

I don't mind drama, but definitely want her to drop Mike already! I may sound cold-hearted, but I don't feel that bad for him. I hope Bella leaves him and spends some time on herself then officially get with Edward. Just my two cents! Hope we don't have to wait too long for an update!

-CC



Author's Response:

LOL.  I would hate to work for someone as hot and spicy as Edward!! I wouldn't get anything done.  Well except maybe staring at him!!! 

Thanks for the review!  Keep on the lookout for the next installment.

Reviewer: Augustus Snodgrass (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 5: No Envy, No Fear

I just started this last night, and am absolutely in love! Bookward might be my new favorite. Please come back with more soon!



Author's Response:

Bookward... I love it!

Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 5: No Envy, No Fear

I just found this today...and I must say...your Edward is YUMMY! :) So was that kiss they shared. I'm curious to see how her relationship with Mike crumbles(hopefully soon!) and how her urge to be with Edward progresses(once again...hopefully soon!)

Love this story!

Reviewer: twilightjie (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 5: No Envy, No Fear

as much as i love bella and edward, i kinda pity mike here.

Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 5: No Envy, No Fear

i really want her with edward.

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 5: No Envy, No Fear

Im really enjoying this so far.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 5: No Envy, No Fear

Great chapter. Damn Mike saw. And Jasper! They weren't very smart when it came to choosing a location to kiss were they?

I don't know if a break is really a good idea for Mike and Bella. She isn't gonna change... is she? I like Bella's idea of how to fix things. Move in together! Then he can see what she's really like.

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 4: Things We Normally Do

Wow. That has got to be one of the best kisses I have read about in fanfic. I was looking forward to Bella telling Mike everything. But the kiss definitely makes up for it.

Can't wait to read more. What will Bella do? 

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 3: Stood Up

Omg I started crying through Edward's speech. That was so sweet. Someone needs to put them on the internet as wedding vows or something. I love your Edward. (And his clothes!!)

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 5: No Envy, No Fear

Humph.  I don't know what to think now.  This Mike (not the vile creep from the books) seems like a decent guy, just a little uptight.  I don't think Bella is the girl for him, and always want Bella with Edward, but I dunno about this time.  I guess they'll figure it out.  If she doesn't want Edward, can I have him?

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 2: Saints & Sinners

Great chapter. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 5: No Envy, No Fear

I wonder who we could be getting some one on one time with...? lol. Great chapter!

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