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Reviewer: orion0511 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 11: Good Girls Go Bad

Your story is great!! love it! and congratulations on your pregnancy!! that's great!! and no worries you are going to feel better, first 3 months are the worst...anyway, good luck and take care!

Reviewer: UrbanAngel (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 11: Good Girls Go Bad

just wanted to say that i'm still reading and thinking about this story regularily (well, there is a reason why it's on my favorite list) and hope that you'll come around to writing the next chapter sometime (maybe/hopefully soon) :) hope you're doing well! nora

Reviewer: jennspooningrob (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 11: Good Girls Go Bad

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loving this story!!

loved that she was able to pleasure him and only do that!  they're slowly building their intimacy and that's great.  Sometimes we rush straight to sex instead of savoring the pleasures of bases 1, 2 and 3.

hope your morning sickness eases up soon!  it can really disrupt everything else in your life.

Reviewer: UrbanAngel (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 11: Good Girls Go Bad

i think i already reviewed but since i decided just about now to finally add you to my favorites, i'm going to do it oce again! i love bookward and how fucking sexy and brilliant and did i mention sexy he is?!i loved what he said to her in the beginning at the pizzaplace and i love what he continues telling her. jeez, if only i could meet such a guy - i'd start smoking again in a minute ;)

hope you're not feeling too bad any longer and you didn't have to set up permanent residence b/w bathtub and toilet!

update soon, i need more sweet stuff!

 

Reviewer: AngelinaBallerina (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 11: Good Girls Go Bad

Great chapter! Looking forward to more. :)

Congratulations!

Reviewer: guccisassy (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 11: Good Girls Go Bad


Reviewer: guccisassy (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 7: Air

I just can't believe it!  I feel like I just woke up, confused, and not too happy I was dreaming!

 

Well, there is no way their meeting will beat that dream...

 

You are a trickster!

Reviewer: michangelina (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 6: Falling Slowly

Love this story.. N I love your banner.. I think she is so beautiful.. Rachel Bilson right??

Reviewer: nothing2do (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 11: Good Girls Go Bad

Congratulations to you!!  Babies are such fun :)

So what is this like day 2 of the trip for them......there will definitely be a fireworks show before their week is done.  Great story.

 

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 11: Good Girls Go Bad

Great chapter. Can't wait to read more. Congratulations with the baby! Hope you feel better soon.

Reviewer: Princess (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 11: Good Girls Go Bad

I was very excited to see a new update for this story.  I was afraid that you had stopped writing.

Reviewer: Tarbecca (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 11: Good Girls Go Bad

Congrats on the pregnancy!  I sucks!  I puked for 5 months, but I swear it does end!  Stay hydrated!  Love the story!

Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 11: Good Girls Go Bad

FUCK!!! so hot!!! lol

i really liked this chapter... happy to read edwards pov as always and still LOVING this plot! i am getting kind of anxious for her too finally realize that she doesnt want mike though... BUT the journey is half the fun so im hanging in there :P

congratz on being pregerz! just remember when the hormones kick in that u do love your readers ;) 

cant wait for more!!

<3's for you!!!

Reviewer: deebes80 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 11: Good Girls Go Bad

Just wanted to tell you congrats on the pregnancy!  This is my favorite story, I was happy to see it updated. 

Reviewer: Calling_Siren (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 11: Good Girls Go Bad

Well, congratulations, Maggie!!! That's a really great news!!! And yes, morning sickness will go away! :) Kisses!!

Reviewer: WouldYouLookAtThat (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 11: Good Girls Go Bad

Kinda sad story, really. Waiting for update. Well written and everything, and I'm too tired to give a nice review.

Reviewer: JaJiTaXx (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 11: Good Girls Go Bad

it's an awesome story.... mike's an as$hole... 

poor edward... so in love....

congratulations on your pregnancy....  :P

Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 11: Good Girls Go Bad

Loved the chapter.  Take good care and congratulations on the pregnancy. 

Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 10: There Goes the Fear

Love 2nd base--it's been a long time.

Edward is so sweet there's no way Bella can't fall in love with him!

I love how they can talk about anything/everything and just seem to click.

Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 10: There Goes the Fear

I like the uptight Bella.  It's a nice change from the cliched "free spirit."  Same is true with your Edward.  I like that he is laid back and cool.  He seems genuine and a kind soul.  Love the story!

Reviewer: cassandralee (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 1: Church Goer

I love this so far. You have a great start and I find Bella's thoughts very funny!

Reviewer: Kassiah (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 10: There Goes the Fear


Reviewer: spuntinsel (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 10: There Goes the Fear

Whew! Very steamy ending. Love

Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 10: There Goes the Fear

I don't think Bella is uptight. I think she is being cautious. She doesn't want to make the same mistake twice. Love this fic by the way.

Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 10: There Goes the Fear

hahaha! i looooved second base

this story is really progressing well!

i cant wait for more!

<3's for you!!!

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