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Reviewer: idyllic world (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Love the chapter! I was so excited to see the update, I do so love this story. I was just as bummed as Bella that the gang watched Iron Chef without her. I definitely would've liked to hear more about the show, but what you included was definitely great! I hope things are going to be okay with B&E, I'm sure they will be, they just need some alone time... and Bella just needs to figure out that it's okay to lean on her man sometimes. Despite that, I am glad to see that she's been consistent throughout this story, and hasn't suddenly become a different person now that she and Edward are so serious, she's still got her dependency issues and it makes me like her and this story even more!
Definitely looking forward to the next chapter with the newest addition. :)
Reviewer: ELLC (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
I am thrilled to see this chapter up! I have always enjoyed this story and can't wait to read about the little tornado that is Alices' offspring.
Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
It sure has been a longtime, but a most welcome surprise. Thanks. :) Nancy
Reviewer: so into it (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
YOU GOT SOME EXPLAINING TO DO!! why do you keep us readers waiting so long? lol but it was worth the wait!! emmett's butt passing by them was the perfect touch lmao!! can't wait for the rugrat(s) to come!! =)
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
And I bet an Edward/Bella rugrat it next.
Reviewer: kisbydog (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
I was so excited to see you'd posted! I love revisiting this story. I usually have to go backand review the last few chapters, and I get sucked in every time.
I love reading about these characters - they're so vivid, and the relationships are so close, it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy, even when they're going through a tough spot.
Hope life's slowing down for you a bit, an that you're enjoying your new home!
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
thank you so much for this chapter. Love this story!!! Your awesome and so happy that you are working on this again. Life happens and I for one understand and appreciate that you had time for this latest chapter. Your writing and development of the story as well as the characters has been awesome. Keep up the Fantatic work and have a great day!!!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
yipee
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
baby on the way.... Edward being protective (again)....Bella over-reacting to Edward (ya think?)..... I am glad everyone is doing well and hasn't changed......hahahahaha!! great chappie
Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Yay! Baby on the way! Is Bella pregnant? I know you can't tell me. Just putting it out there.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Really, at times like that Bella should strip Edward of his pants and spank him soundly, setting up her supreme dominance. I don't even think he would mind so much.
Reviewer: mom23xx (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Thanks for the update! Great chapter. Bella is struggling but I lok forward to what Happens.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
All of the stresses of finishing jobs and selling a house in one location to moving across country starting new jobs and full responsibilities. Bella supervising over renovation plans for the restaurant, hiring staff, and managing staff personnel. Edward getting Cullen's Projects set up and flying with all their added functions. Both Edward and Bella working crazy hours and hardly any time together. Bella is irritated by male staff workers not taking her authority seriously. Edward mostly jokingly suggesting he come down to the restaurant and do some serious (threatening) talking to them. Knocking them over the head so to speak. Bella frustrated with all her life up in the air. All new nothing familiar. Only constant is Edward and Bella resenting that she is becoming dependent on him. She feels her independence and control over issues slipping from her. Edward was just being a man trying to fix things while Bella really just needed someone to vent her frustrations, fears, and irritations. Bella wanted to apologize to Edward but phone rang. Not going over to Alice/Jasper's for food, need to head to the hospital. How exciting Alice is going to have her baby. The whole family (gang) will all be there waiting for the baby. Celebrating with the family on the new addition. Looking forward to the following chapters. Edward's great and understanding with all Bella's moods and snappiness.
Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
yaaay! he he. loving the way this fic has turned out. Looking forward to the next chappy and some lemons soon too would be fantabulous!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
that what i love about this story its a constant all stored away in my little favorite place with an update just when you least expect it, i was hoping to see some of the mad passion between these 2 seems they are having trouble getting there can't wait to see the new baby, seem to me she been having some rug rat signs of her own???? or maybe its just my imagination and wishful thinking
Reviewer: twilight fan (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
I have a feeling Bella's pregnant.
Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Good chapterm - but I felt so lost, I had to go back and read previous chapters to kind of stay withthe characters and where they were going. Lovethe story - maybe update sooner if possible at all. ?? :)
Reviewer: seekingbecca (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
YIPPY!!! How many chapters do you think are left? I would guess 6!?
Reviewer: Cailley Rachelle (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Yay, loved it! Have been waiting for another update~hope there is more soon~ i thought you had forgotten about it! When there is another update I am sure it will be really good :)
Reviewer: aerosoldoc (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Yay! I'm glad to see you're still posting! :)
Reviewer: Angel_on_Wheels (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Great chapter!!!!
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
oh the baby's coming, this should be fun alice the ever organised person that she is lol, nice chapter looking fwd to bella cutting some balls in the kitchen to show them exactly who is boss, thx for update, glad u r finishing story & every one understands r/l has to come 1st, we are all just thankful that u take the time at all to write a beautiful story
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Poor Bella is having a rough adjustment. I have every confidence that your Bella will find her way. Meanwhile Edward needs to be extra careful of his caveman tendencies.
Baby Coming!!!!
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Oh yay!! Can't wait for the baby...great job Paige. I completely understand the feeling of being inconsistent with updates, it just took me almost 2 months between BU updates. We know you'll finish the story, and we'll patiently wait for every update!
Reviewer: krakengrrl (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Can we get a scene where Bella tells off those southern boys? That would be golden. Glad to see you're still updating! You keep writing, I promise to keep reading.
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