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Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Love it! I'm really looking forward to finding out about Sam.
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
I hope Alice's comments will convince Bella to lighten up.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
Loved It!
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
Can't wait to see Emmett's reaction to Edward.
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
simply amazing.
Reviewer: jantanamo (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
Hahaha... I had a good laugh at the end of the chapter. Cute!
And that Chocolate Maple Syrup recipe you got going on there sounds awfully tasty :)
Poor Bella - her story of Sam is a tough one. Can't blame the girl for needing the time to recover. I liked the interaction between her and brother Emmett though.
Thanks for the update! I'm looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: EdwardsGirl1117 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
hey i love it!!! keep going!!!
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Hmm, I wouldn't mind waking up to a naked Edward. lol.
Reviewer: greenwoodmama (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
I love it! I live in SC! It's great to see the character's take on southern qualities!(Other than Japer) Edward talking with a southern accent is enough to make a woman swoon!
Reviewer: Kellansgirl123 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
Hahahaha! The ending made me laugh SO hard, i had to read it like 4 times over again.
I can't WAIT for lunch with his parents, Esme&Carlslie are sooo sweet!!
I kinda like the whole Bella Emmet= brother sister thing. It's new... and i adore Emmett...so you made me happy!!
PLEASSEEEEEEE make sure Edward still wants/ likes Bella in that way even after learning about Sam, that last line made me so giddy for the next chapter!
Reviewer: leeshaann (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
just found this story... I love it.... UPDATE SOON.... need more, lots more soon... can't wait...
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Great chapter...I only hope that the next time I have a sunburn Edward will be there to help me out...A girl can dream.
Reviewer: Dr Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Alice is a genius! I really liked how Edward handled the situation by confessing his feelings to Bella. And I really really really hope that grandma Cullens S.T.37 does the trick!!!!!
Reviewer: ShandyAnn (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
i cant wait tp see what emmett does when he finds them all cuddlely...<3
Reviewer: vampirechicksx3 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
i loved the whole chapter
but who wouldn't want edward's magic cure? ;P
Reviewer: vampirechicksx3 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
i loved the whole chapter
but who wouldn't want edward's magic cure? ;P
Reviewer: Kellansgirl123 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Haha. The title of this story still makes me laugh every time i see it!
Great Chapter, and yes, i know how much sunburns like that can hurt mostly becuause i have gotten at least 2 in my life. i could barely walk for about a day!
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
LOVE.IT!! OMG that was so amazingly HOTT! Even though they didn't get to have sex together, what did happen was just as erotic and fun. LOL Great job!
And thank god for Alice! I love how she set everything up for Edward and Bella to be able to spend time together without Emmett saying anything. She's so sneaky!! LOL
Great job with this, I can't wait to read more! :) ~Cat~
Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
OMG, an orgasm by edward mighte even cure the meanest of illnesses :) Such a great chapter. And, of cours,e I'd like to see big brother Emmett's reaction, and Jaspers. An I want to see them all at Esme's family gathering
Reviewer: mrscullen (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
That was wonderful. I love your story but I have to admit I'm trying to get used to Edward as a "southern gentleman"...Jasper I can picture..but Edward, not so much. Regardless, great chapter...keep 'em coming!
Reviewer: easilydistracted (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
I'm loving this :-D.
Thanks for the early reassurance about Jacob, though it seemed like Bella wasn't too excited about going on a "morning date" with him, regardless ;->.
I'm thrilled Edward fessed up to his attraction and Bella is taking a chance on him! And I loved the mini-lemon, definitely the best they could do under the circumstances and actually pretty sweet, in my book!
More more more! (please ;->)
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Wow...great chapter...where to start? Loved the bit at the beginning about Alice and Edward's reactions to her. It's so cute that Alice intimidates him. :) And then when she and Jasper told Edward he had a headache...priceless! I'm so glad he caught on and that Alice has manipulated Emmett into dropping the big bad brother routine for now.
Can't wait for the little gathering at Edward's parents. Sure they'll be pretty shocked to see Edward around Bella when they're supposed to only be meeting Jasper's girl. Loved that Bella was watching Top Chef reruns cause that show rocks! I watch it all the time, but I don't think any season will ever beat the first season of it. "I'm not your bitch, bitch!" hehe And Edward, poor clueless boy not knowing what Gladware is. I don't cook at all, but I at least know what that is! Fine china down here in the south! :)
Really proud of Edward for finally trying to clear the air between them and honestly telling her how he was feeling. I've actually never heard of S.T. 37....I usually use Aloe Vera gel for my sunburns and I can definitely empathize with Bella here cause I get awful sunburns. I'm terminally pale and if I ever spend too much time in the sun. Once it was so bad I actually had to go to the doctor.
So from my own experience I knew that it wasn't gonna work when they first started making out. Bless their hearts. Sunburns are definitely not conducive for physical contact. But I'm very happy they found a way to get around that anyway! And then they fell asleep together, awww! But I'm wondering how big brother will take that when the rest of the group finds them. Mmmmm...should be interesting. I have to confess that I think I'm beginning to like this story even more than Something Stupid.....but they're both still awesome!
Reviewer: lovely_penguin (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Sunburns are freaking horrible... but I'll take it if it means I get Edward's cure! Wonder what an overprotective Emmett will have to say? And I really wanna know what happened with Sam! The "not a random pairing" has peaked my curiousity!
BTW, I totally googled the ST 37. Maybe Grandmama Birdie was on to something.... =)
Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Lovely - as akward as the pain of sunburn, beard scruffing, uncomrotable from the night before situtuation was, you made it lovely. He explain that he wanted her rather than letting it go. I love that he shot down every argument and told her she'd have to be the one to admit she wanted to stop. He's a gentleman but wasn't going to say he didn't want her when he did but would have stopped. Putting himself outt here with the organsm cure? Yum. Hey orgasms release endorphins and those make you feel better and take away pain so it's a great offer (and who would turn down an orgasm offer from a gorgeous Edward?).
I think they're very sweet together and hope you find a way to work it out between them. Edward wants a new job . . . Seattle, for instance?
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