quite a delicious lemon.

and i agree with you on the whole idea of the two of them moving too fast...they story wouldn't be the same if the circumstances were any different.

love it, though. hope all is well with the work roject. hopefully another update will come soon. :)

Author's Response:

Ah the work project. It's taking up a lot of time, but it's nearly finished--my part anyway. So updates should come a little faster, soon. Thanks.

Glad you're on board for the reasons things are moving so quick. But now they're going to come to complete stop at least temporarily and they're going to have time to think. That can't be good. =D But, they will see each other again sooner than later. Promise.

Thanks for reviewing!!

Paige

You gotta get them together again SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Well, SOON, but not IMMEDIATELY. A few things have to happen before they see each other again. But they will see each other again. Promise.

Thanks for reviewing!

Paige

Okay, first of all, I let out a gleeful (really loud) FUCK! whilst reading this chapter. You know why? My real name is Molly Kate. So... I was really excited when I read the baby's name, thus prompting the loud expletive that probably woke my family from sleep. If for any reason you ever need a nickname for the little bugger, my family called me Tater Tot. And Thunderthighs, but that had less to do with my name and more to do with my rolls of baby fat.

E.J. is absolutely adorable. He was such a real little kid! Get little kids started on Pokemon... "And there's this one and he does this, and there's this one and he does this, and this yellow one does this..." but they're cute and adorable so you let them ramble. Will E.J. ever get revenge on Uncle Edward? The whole family scene was excellent!

As to the comment that some feel this is going too fast? In RL, it might be ill-advised and impulsive. But... this is teh Edward/Bella, and they just... work.

You are fabulous, and thank you for writing. If you put more of that baby in the story somehow, I may just run around my neighborhood in my pajamas at midnight. Geez this was a thoroughly useless review. you get cookies just for making it all the way through. ;-)

Author's Response:

This was so NOT a useless review! You made me laugh!  My best friend from high school named her daughter Molly Kate--that was the first time I had heard it and I loved it, so it popped into my head when I was thinking of a name for Kate and Garrett's baby. And don't feel bad--my family called me Butterball when I was a baby because of my fat little legs.

And the Pokemon Kid? That's my son and he is completely obsessed. He's the model for E.J. and his conversational skills. You're right about the rambling. Sometimes it's cute and sometimes I have to beg for mercy. :) Oh and E.J. did get revenge remember? He shot Uncle Edward with a Super Soaker full of ice water.

Well, I'm going to have to work Baby Molly Kate into the story some more. Be on the lookout and prepared to run around the neighborhood in your PJs!

Thanks for the great review!

Paige

OKay I am so hoping that this love thing is not over.   I am happy that Bella has found something in Edward.  I am one whos says Bring on the LOVE!!!!!

Update real soon.  I know it is going to be hard to see Bella leave, but hopefully Edward and her will be together in the end.

Author's Response:

Oh this thing between them is far from over, whatever they may think. There are too many things still tying them together. And a few good reasons why they might see each other again. Promise. =D

THanks for reviewing!

Paige

Yay. I love Eddie and Bella. So cute.

Author's Response:

I'm not sure Edward would appreciate being called cute after that performance, but I like it! =D Thank you!

Paige

It would be so awesome if Edward just happened to get a job in Seattle (hint, hint) :P  I love this story, keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

There's always that possibility. After all, Edward's professional idol is based in Seattle. Hmmmm. =D

Thanks for reviewing!!

Paige

I really love your version of edward even if he is a bit occ. 

loving the story...

next update?

Author's Response:

It's up now Mariecel! He is a bit ooc, but so is she. I'm just not in a angsty, melodramatic state of mind with this story. Plus they're grown-ups so...

I'm still loving the banner!!

Thanks! Paige

I love this story.  In my opinion you did the ONE thing that could make Edward hotter and that was give him a southern accent.  

fabulous...but my edward will always drive a shiny volvo.:) keep em cuming ;o

Thanks for letting me create a banner for your story!  I was actually concerned you wouldnt like it because I know you didnt like thinking about the actors when you write so I wasnt sure if you wanted a KStew Rpatz banner.  I'm glad you liked it though!

I'd love to see where this story will take them, and where they'll end up. Interested also in what kind of obstacles you'll throw their way because I know its not going to be fluff all the time! Looking forward to more drama, lemons and other citrusy good fun!

The ending of this chapter is adorable. I'd love for him to wiggle his fingers at me too (among other things...haha, yes im pervy)!!

Author's Response:

No worries whatsoever on that--I LOVE the banner with the actors on it. I have nothing against the movie--I just think of it separately from the books or my stories. Does that make sense?

You know it's funny, but I have my own versions of the characters in my head for the most part, except for Edward and Emmett. For some reason I can't shake the images of Rob Pattinson and Kellan Lutz for them. I think because I can picture them playing the characters my way. Or maybe just because my inner sixteen-year-old thinks they're pretty. =D

Obstacles will become more apparent and troublesome after the vacation is over--just like real life. But working around them will be lots of good not-so-clean fun.

Oh, and I just assumed you were a tad pervy or why would you like this story? A healthy amount of perversity is good for the heart...or brain...or one of those important body parts! :P

Thanks again for the sexy banner! Edward is waggling his long, sensuous fingers at you and calling you sugar right now...

Paige

 

OMG!!! You had me squealing and clawing for air at the end! OMG OMG OMG!

Where do I get me an Edward?

LMAO This chapter was so funny! I love Jasper in here. And wtf was Edward's last comment about? LOL ANd wtf is up with Jake? Grr. I want Edward for her, dammit! No messing with my couples! *GLARES... and then smiles* Sawwwweeeet story!

I loves me a playful Edward & Bella. Purrrrrr~!