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Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)

LOL I love everyone's characters. They're very true to character but are different at the same time. I don't know if that makes sense but I like the way you've written them neverthless! lol

I hope things don't cool down for too long between Edward and Bella. Poor Bella, what a horrible way to be cheated upon. I certainly hope that wasn't from personal experiance!

Anyway, great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens at Edward's parents. :D 

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37

Aww bless them! lol They made the best of their situation though, that's for sure! lol I can't wait to see what the morning after brings! Great chapter! I LOVE the way Jasper and Alice helped Edward escape! XD

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)

Oh poor Bella. I have sympathy for how sore she must be. She should use Aloevera, that works brilliantly for sun burn! lol

Anyway, Great chapter! Bella and Edward are so sweet together......and I'm so glad Bella didn't have a good time with Jake! lol. I can't wait to read more! :)

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up

I love the fact that Emmett is Bella's cousin in this story! It's so great to see him so protective of her. So sweet!.... but Edward better watch himself. lol. Like the way you've worked in the Jacob/Bella/Edward love triangle in as well, however long it lasts for.

Oh and I also love the way Edward can read body language, like his description of his non-verble conversation with Jake, that was great detailing! I loved it! Well...I loved the whole chapter really. Can't wait to read more! :)

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)

lol bless them. What a way to start things off! Great chapter! This is very well written, I can't wait to read mre! :) How are they going to get past this? lol

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)

Wow great first chapter! I can't wait to read more....and I have to wonder just how much of this story is based on your personal knowledge! ;) lol

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

i totally hate, i mean, HATE Sam! what an ass. i understand the falling in love part, but like bella said he could have done tons of things before shit got out of hand (understatment of the century) loved the line when bella said that the thoughtss+ipod was a slideshow with a soundtrack. loved all the chapters. can't wait for more. you've got a fan here.

Reviewer: Kat N Hat (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

Just found this story. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: kkroonie (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

I can't believe Sam!!!  What a douche!

Anyways, I am loving this story.  Hilton Head, SC is a gorgeous island, and I'm getting to semi-relive some of my memories from there while reading this fantastic story.  I am eagerly awaiting your next update!

Reviewer: astargoddess (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

Awww, poor Bella! I hate to see her hurting like that, but in general, I'm loving this story! I think her relationship with Emmett is great and I hope to see more of it! And get Edward to her so she can be happy again soon! (or not, since I suppose waiting makes a better story...sigh)

Reviewer: okgrdnfn (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)

Great story!  Will be waiting for more!

Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

I don't know that I agree with you about imprinting, but cowardice is another matter intirely.  If Sam knew that he was not in love with Bella anymore (if he ever was), he should have been man enough to tell her and never have been intimate w/Emily until he and Bella were broken up.  Period.

Cannot believe that Bella did not call Edward..or vice versa.  Maybe that can happen?  Not sure what you have planned, but will definitely stay tuned..

Reviewer: Boom_Ox (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

ohhh i hate himm alot lol, just hate men that cheat on women cant they ust be happy with onee!! ahh lol yehh i def understood why you sued sam good choicee :)

update updatee wannaaa readdd moreeee! :D
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Reviewer: easilydistracted (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

*sniff* Southerncomfortward is just about perfect.  *I* want to crawl in bed with him and have him say sweet things like that!  

So... Edward's architecture idol is in Seattle.  But Charleston is an amazing mecca for restaurants - that's all we do when we go visit our friend there!  I don't know anything about the restaurant business, though, but how hard would it be for Bella to get to be a sous chef at one of those places?  I know Edward and Jasper agreed not to take their parents' money, but if it was an *investment* in a restaurant for Bella...  Sorry, I love Charleston, and that's so obviously that's where *my* leanings would be, rather than amazing but cold and wet Seattle...  And Charleston is so close yet far enough from Hilton Head that Edward could find another architecture firm to work for there - someone just mentioned a builder I like is doing some work around Charleston right now!

But there I go, getting too invested in your story again!!!  I don't care :-D!  I'm loving this one just as much as I love Something Stupid! 

Reviewer: Icydgirl (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

I like how Bella handled Sam...he needed to be verbally bitch slapped.  He was spineless and a coward...and I couldn't have said it better. 

Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

Found your story on the forums and once I started reading I couldn't stop until I finished.  Your Edward is lovely.  I am from the northeast and not used to the southern accent...but I must say it makes him even sexier than he already is.  Especially when he calls her Baby or Sugar! Yummy!

Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

Hah! I love that you used Sam that way, perfect!

Some frustration is a good thing... it will make future meetings that much more enjoyable... :)  I am enjoying yoru story, I hope you update soon!

Reviewer: VampGirl_777 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

I really really really can't wait until Edward is with Bella again!!!!!     Please don't keep me waiting please please please please please!!!!

This is such a great story so far, I'm really loving it. please hurry with the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)

Sorry I haven't been reviewing after each chapter. My bad.

I felt that I had to comment after reading your author's notes about how some were saying they were moving too fast. I admit I thought the same thing at first and then I thought back to my *cough* youth *cough* and who am I to pass judgement when I did recall doing the same thing once. LOL   No regrets! 

I really like this story and the accent is no longer bothering me either. In fact, it totally grew on me and I'm over it now. Again....a great story and I can't wait to see where your going with this.  

Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)

Just found your story and I am really enjoying it.

Reviewer: twiighter143 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

PLEASE UPDATE SOON, I AM SO HOOKED ON THIS STORY...ALREADY :)

Reviewer: twiighter143 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)

I understand what you are doing with their fling. It's that instant attraction that so many people try to deny. Great job!!

Reviewer: Bluenoserbaby (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: G1175 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

This story is awesome. I can't wait to read your updates!

Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

Loved what Bella said to Sam. Great chapter. Can't wait for more Edward and Bella interaction.

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