Reviewer: keepingupwiththekids (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
I love this story!
Reviewer: edward-bella70 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
Great chapter! You know, it's actually sunny here in the northwest today. Shocker! Please update again soon. Loving this story! Hopefully they can get this relationship thing figured out.
Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
You naughty girl leaving me hanging.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: TochuNadu (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
Lovin the story!
The south??? The people are as warm as the weather, the iced tea is always sweet and you'll never have to look far for a friendly conversation... Com'on back, ya know ya missed it!! ;)
Reviewer: Boom_Ox (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
Youu just have to lovee Alice for excelent ideas loool...
lovee this storyyy :)
updateee soooon, very sooon. xD
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Reviewer: CherBella (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
“Hey, sugar,” I said quietly, holding out my hand to her. *SWOON* LOVE Southern gentelman Edward!! :)
Not much to say, really like this story so far... think Edward needs to find his new job in Seattle. ;) And I LOVE your banner--gorgeous!
I have never lived in the south but do live in the midwest and after the sun FINALLY breaking through here after THREE days of cold rainy weather, I would say one of the (hopefully) good things about living in the South would have to be better weather!
Reviewer: adream (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
I feel silly just saying thank you everytime. But I do truly enjoy each chapter! So, thank you!
Reviewer: kissyourself (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
they should be eternally grateful to alice. :)) i can't wait for the next chapter...
Reviewer: Just Peachy (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
I have read random reviews and I must say to those who cannot picture Edward as a Carolina boy... I feel sorry for you! As soon as I read the synopsis of the story, I was in hook, line, and sinker! And I immediately thought how adorable a certain British actor would be portraying a Southern man, with a syrupy accent - BE STILL MY HEART!
I had no problem with Edward being Bible-belted. Your story may have actually hindered some aspects of Edward for me - I enjoy this version of him too much!
One of my favorite things of the South, if not THE favorite...
Sweet tea (all the time, 24/7, year-round, and you don't have to order it "iced"!)
Reviewer: adream (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
Thank you! I'm still enjoying this very much. I'm looking forward to reading more!
Reviewer: Bluenoserbaby (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: adream (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
I really love this so far. I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
That Alice! I know I would've killed her, but Bella seems to be able to roll with it! I love the ending-more natural and less trampy! Relocating sucks, I've done it too many times and have finally put my foot down on that! Good luck-join something quick to make new friends for you and the family!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
Just got to love sex dreams. Alice that little devil she is so coniving. Love update soon please!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
Haha:D it was about time Bella wasn't the sleep-talking victim:D though there wasn't exactly any talking, but still...
loved it, very good chapter;) looking forward to more! :)
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
I'm so glad that Edward went with Jasper to visit the girls...and just like when they were in Hilton Head...Edward and Bella are still so crazy about each other. The next five days in Seattle should be interesting! Can't wait!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
How wonderful! They're back together and now on Bella's home turf. I've been to Seattle but didn't get to do the touristy stuff. Not even the Space Needle. Anyway, poor Edward and Bella's signals. I feel sorry for the guy.
I live in Atlanta and I'm trying to think - If you're going to Florida... The humidity is good for you? Good seafood? Lovely sand? You didn't say where exactly you were moving, It depends on where you're going...
Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
That was a good chapter. I figured he was dreaming lol. Very funny.
Reviewer: Dena (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
Very cute...I love the whiplash comment.
Reviewer: aerosoldoc (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
Ah! You tease.
Can't oblige you on the reasons to give up the Midwest...I love it here!
(Damn Northerners!)
A darn fine chapter, once again, please, please, please keep them coming.
Tinkerbelle = Alice Just Too Perfect
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
Hey, that was not nearly enough for the lemonade I wanted to make! More Lemons Please!
Reviewer: violin3679 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
Girl, I LOVE this story! I live in Atlanta and visit Hilton Head every summer :) I giggle my brains out every time you say something about Sea Pines or sea grass because I can picture it perfectly. Man, Edward and Hilton Head. I think I love you!!!
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
It was so great to read that Edward made a trip to Seattle. I just wish he would realize that he could find a job there and make a commitment to bella. He obviously is in love with her.
Can't wait to read another chapter.
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)
Urgh! Sam is horrible! You know I was hoping so much that you'd do the cheasy chic flic thing and have Edward waiting for Bella at the door of her appartment. So I really didn't think it would be Sam! But it's still a great storyline so I can't blame you for it! lol
I love this story! I love Bella and Emmett's brother and sister relationship, I love how in love Alice and Jasper are but most of all I love Edward and Bella of course! I hope you update soon and reunite Edward and Bella together. It's only been one chapter and yet it's already been too long! X( Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
Awww that was so sweet! I have tears in my eyes! It was so heartbreaking the way Edward pleaded with Bella not to regret him. *sigh* I hope he follows her back to Seattle or something happens to cause her to stay. This is too good to end! >.<
Author's Response: Just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying your reviews! I'm trying to finish the next chapter now and I don't have much time, so I haven't been answering many, but I had to say thanks!
As for the personal experience: I'm very lucky. The first chapter is loosely based on a personal experience from when I was younger and completely single (I'm not saying how similar my experience was to Bella's) but the Sam experience is based on something a good friend of mine is dealing with now. Only she was already married to the cretin and he had us all fooled. I have no tolerance for that kind of selfishness so I'm punishing him in my imagination.
Glad you're enjoying it! And thanks for taking time to review!
Paige
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