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Reviewer: coveredinfeathers (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

good luck on the move! i am hooked on this, update soon :)

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37

I love the grandma cure all! My grandma has a couple of those and still tries to force them upon me anytime I visit. It was really funny. I also love how Jasper is assisting Alice in her sneaky little plans. Emmett is going to have a duck fit I think.

Reviewer: hgarisue (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

I loved that chapter and just when i thought they were gonna get some you tricked me (lol) I cant wait to read more and please post more very soon you have my heart pumping very hard and fast.

Reviewer: Sasha Rose (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)


Reviewer: Sasha Rose (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up

Wow...you're completely got me hooked on this one! Keep up the GREAT work my dear! :)

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)

Sweet I can't wait! All I want to do now is get out of this dreadful midwest I'm stuck in and back to my south topped with a big southern beach vacation!!!

Reviewer: SarcasticGirl (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

I have been avoiding this fic because I hate reading stories that are incomplete.  But, i got sucked in, and gladly.  I am LOVING a Southern Edward.  My husband and I have vacationed a couple of times in SC and I love reading about it - I can totally picture the scene you have set.  And, I just have to say that your AN reasoning for choosing Sam as Bella's ex had me totally laughing out loud.  :::loves it:::

Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

Hmmm what's wonderful about the South? The hospitality, the accents, and warmth of the summer sun....You'll have a blast.

Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

Your story is entertaining. I totally agree with you on imprinting. Ew. And on children? Double Ew. You've done a good job with Sam making him have a story that makes him look like a complete jerk, but you can also see why he didn't say anything. So I'm loving how I'm hating Sam. :) Books

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

Ha! totally can't wait for more :D

Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

more please!!!!!!

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up

HA! I love it I'm a southern girl from Tennessee and I love SC! Edward with a southern drawl of anykind! You have made my dreams come true at least partially! I love this foot in is mouth thing too by the way! Hope he fixes it soon though.

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)

Way to go Edward! So funny. What's more is that sometimes that stuff really happens (personal experience) Good writing though.

Reviewer: clumsy like bella (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

I adore this story!  It's really well written, well done!

Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

I love your story.

It has me laughing and blushing, making me so glad that I am reading it while hubby is at work.

Looking forward to more.

Let me know if you do move....and good luck if you do.

My hubby is military and while we are currently living in CA, we've been looking for the excuse to be transfer to Florida or S. Carolina.

B. Quinn

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)

Nice is about all I have to say about that! What I would do to land myself in that particular strangers bed! I know that's naughty I'm sorry.

Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

LMAO that was awesome, suhhhnn! I love how she's so carefree when she's working. She's a free spirit in the kitchen - it's completely her space, man. It's awesome. I like that Edward saw that too! And the little surprise was interesting. The reactions are realistic, not too OMG OMGOMG OMG jumping and screaming - though I kinda did want that lol but I like that you kept it realistic. thankerrs. Let's continue with the story, shall we? = ] I hope they really decide to start something serious.

Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

Good luck with the South... i guess the moisture if good for your skin and hair?

 

Thanks for updating, even though I missed the lemon (sigh)... I know it will happen :).

Reviewer: Amaterasu (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

HA HA that was funny! Can't wait to see what happens next, although i think i have a fairly good idea.

Reviewer: GoldenGirl115 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

Fantastic chapter! Can't wait for more! Remeber coming back to the south is always coming home because there's sweet tea and people with manners who will welcome you with open arms.

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

Yes I agree on the lemon at this point!  Ok so here is what I could "see" happening.....Edward gets to marvel with and around all the architecture he is excited about seeing.  He stumbles upon a job offer and takes it....Everything is going to be great there on out! 

Sam comes back around being hateful to Bella in a drunken rage after he finds out that it isn't his baby that Emily is having and Edward protects Bella from him.  It is that point that she completely lets go and 150% gives not only her body to Edward but her heart and soul as well!  TAAAA DAAA!!!!!!  (ooohhhh that is good!!!)

They fall harder in love and live happily ever after!  Too much too soon?  Wishful thinking on my part?

Tell me what you think?

I know this site doesn't allow you to get alerts when there is a new chapter being posted so I was wondering do you have set times that you update?  Like every weekend or on Mondays?  Let me know!!!!!!!  Thanks again for the great and happy chapter!  Keep up the good writing! :)

 

Reviewer: msrsEdwardbrooks (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

I love alice in this story and need 2 see next ch.

xoxo-msrsEdwardbrooks

Reviewer: twilight34 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)

love it already!!!!

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37

I love seeing Edward as a southern gentleman!  Great Chapter!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

I am so excited about her telling Sam off...I just knew he would be there to interrupt her or something along those lines!

Like I said before...I really hope that Bella and Edward can get together!!

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