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Reviewer: Enya (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

=]  Mmmmm.... I'm still all hooked on southern edward.  keep going please!

Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

I like this!  Obviously Edward needs to move to Seattle and work for T.K. Frank and be with Bella happily ever after!  See, I have it all figured out, if only Bella would figure it out too... I'm excited for the next chapter!  xoxo

Reviewer: achelle131 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

Rawr, he's yummy. SO glad Edward's back!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

I corrected a word on your banner and was able to replace it in photobucket so it would automatically replace here on twilighted! yey!

Reviewer: TwilightRoxMySox (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

Eeeek! I can't wait for more. Why should they wait anyway? I mean, come on. It's Edward. She's Bella. They need to be together! ASAP! =] Lovely chapter, dear. I love Bella's shyness.

Reviewer: cbremer (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)


Reviewer: kellyliz82 (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

A southern Edward.... it is this southern girl's dream come true! Thank you for a great story! All the sugars and honeys have me going crazy, I love it! Looking forward to more of Southern Edward and Bella!

Reviewer: uscfbfan (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

Southern Comfort is the best - I was born and raised in Charleston now I live in Charlotte, I really do miss good ole shrimp n' grits.

Reviewer: kkroonie (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

Well, I go to college in Alabama (Roll Tide!).  I'd have to say the best things about the South is the sweet tea, barbeque, sport fanaticism, and the manners.  I hope the move goes smoothly!

Anyways, great chapter.  I agree, as much as I would've liked a lemon in this chapter, it wouldn't have fit with either Bella's nor Edward's character. 

I can't wait for the next installment!

Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

I love southern Edward! Almost more than the brooding vamp! Absolutely adore this story!

Where in FL r u moving to? (if ya don't mind me askin') I live in GA now but lived in Orlando for 18 years. The beaches on the west coast of FL put the ones on the east coast to shame. I miss it sometimes :)

Reviewer: jess25 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

Love it

Reviewer: Alverdine (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)

Ahahahahaha this is fantastic! You, lady,  have a way with words. I love your subtle and snarky humour. I love how this story flows. And definite kudos for originality.

I will admit, at first I thought Bella was dreaming lol. Loved the surprise that she wasn't. Hmm...dying to read everything you have up so far, but need to hit the books again. Oh well... I'll work it like a reward system lol. Five chapters equals cookie.

Thank you for writing this. I can already see it's going to be marvelous!

Eva

Reviewer: labellamafia (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

looking forward to the yummy lemon. :)

and speaking as a south carolina native?

one word.

beach.

i'm afraid that's something the midwest isn't too great at offering, my dear.

Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

Haha, I can just imagine him telling her he has "imprinted" on someone!!!  ASS!

Love this story.

Reviewer: bellasunderstudy (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

Well honey first off welcome back to the Dear Old South!!!! I don't remember exactly which part of the midwest you live in now and since I haven't ever lived anywhere but here it's hard for me to tell you what will be better in the South. Unfortunately Southerncomfortward probably won't be waiting for you, dammit, if he were could you send him on up here to Georgia when your finished with him in Florida? Don't think my husband will share either but never know, always worth a try? LOL. If I had to pick something that was really great about the south it would probably be the weather. Here you really get all four seasons although we don't get much snow we still have cold weather without all the heavy snow of the midwest/north. And the food, can't beat a good home cooked southern meal! Anyway, good luck with your move and be safe traveling!!

For the chapter, you are all kinds of awesome! Loved that little pixie meddling in the lives of Bella and Edward. That was awesome. The really do seem to have great chemistry. The "sugars" and "honeys" dripping out of Edward's southern mouth are just....I don't even have words and for this southern woman to be speechless is, well, it's something else.;-)

I loved the dream Edward was having while waiting for Bella, that was great. Southern Edward is all about the flirting, that's just too cute. I love it, he's a little more bold in his innuendo and outright suduction though it's so endearing and just damn sexy. Great Job! Love it and can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: PsychWardSiren (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

LMAO poor Sexward... Great chapter!

PsychWardSiren

Reviewer: Dental Diva (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

In the South my friends and I would call Edward a PIE as in cutiepie!!! I love your story. Please don't keep us hanging too long.

Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

hahhahaha
i love it!!! seriously, amazing.
cant wait for more
Oxo

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

Fun chapter!

Reviewer: nyynkgrl21 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

I cant wait to read more!!

Reviewer: treeclimber (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

My family moved from Alabama to St Louis recently.  I'm from here originally and was happy to move.  While I dont'miss the humidity, discrimination against women and minorities, bass-ackwards politics and social views... I do miss the incredibly nice people, the wide open space, the laid-back environment and real grits!!  I love your story.  Please, please update soon.  I just found it and am dying for more!!

Reviewer: amandahugnkiss (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

It's not good for the baby? EFF YOU Sam :) LOVE your story!!

Reviewer: xoTinyxo (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

HaHa!!!!! That was 2 funny!! =)  Poor Edward getting outted by his dreams . lol . can't wait to read the next chapter

Reviewer: twilight34 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

Can't wait to see where this goes.  I wonder whats up with bella. 

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

lol. llooove it . please update soon!

Reviewer: easilydistracted (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

Yay!!!  I see more conflict and negotiation and compromises coming up, but also more sweet lemons and the wonderful things they add to each others' lives.  Pack a box or two (Florida is gorgeous!  I'm jealous!) then come back and write some more!!!

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