Great chapter! I totally loved “She didn’t ask me what kind of coke I want.” I had to work very hard to explain that to my Midwestern husband when we first got married.

I love the progress Edward and Bella are making, and I LOVE semi-caveman protective Edward I guess I really am a Southern Belle, wanting to be rescued by my own Rhett Butler.

I thought it was fantastic! I love that he's considering moving to WA but I'll be honest, I almost wish they'd all end up in the South.  They need to relax! Loved that Edward punched Sam, the asshole.  Prick deserved it!

As a former Southerner who moved up North, I learned the Coke thing the hard way. Also people got confused when I asked to borrow a pen, because up here people pronounce "pen" and "pin" differently.

Nice chapter, nice writing! I'm really enjoying your story. Edward teasing Alice and getting into a fistfight with Sam, and trying to prolong the magic of a bj in the shower by bonking his head- these are a few of my favorite things. I wish everyone's Edward could be as fun as yours.

One tiny thing that I wouldn't bring up if I didn't like your writing- I do think that the term "bridal style" is getting a bit overused in twilight fan fiction.  I know, that's tiny. bah.

I LOVE Protective Edward!!! What a great chapter. So much awesomeness...the interview, the "boyfriend/girlfriend" titles, taking time off of work., etc. Super-Southern Jasper is yummy. Thanks for a fantastic update.

Go Edward! That showdown was worth the wait! Nice cliffhanger too.

Nothing better than a gallant man...

omg
AMAZING
really!
go edward! HAHA
loved it!
cant wait for more
Oxo

Well I really cant wait to see if he goes to the interview. He is looking for a job right.   And loved the fact that he hit Sam.  That Sam guy really is a jerk.

Cant wait for another update soon please.

Stay awake at work.  We all appreciate that you were up so late writing for us!

 

"Yes I guess he is." -- what is it? That he's cool or that he's her boyfriend?!? Gah!

I always love it when you update. I worry that James is going to be a problem. Sam really did a number on your Bella -- she certainly has intimacy issues (and really, how could she not?). Edward has his work cut out for him and his 'sugar' (I can just hear his voice in my head calling her that -- *thud*).

Lots of love :)

You are offically required to have Edward say "sugar, baby, and darlin" at least twice in every update. Oh how I love my southern jasper and edward.

great update, bella does need to work on staying out of her head and living in the moment. and lightening up a bit because a little jealousy isn't always a bad thing.

can't wait for more.

Aww yay! I'm so glad that Bella's accepted what Edward s to her now. Edward is so sweet! I'm glad one of them is willing to just throw everything in and have faith... but I guess Edward didn't have a nasty relationship with Sam. *sighs* Is he going to become a problem? Is James going to become a problem for that matter? He certainly looks like he will be.

Anyway, great chapter! I'm glad you threw them in together. They don't have long this visit, after all. Gotta make the most of it! he he. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you update soon! :)

please hurry with the next chapter!!!