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Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

I just started your story today.  Love the HHI references- heaven on earth!  Love that Edward got to punch Sam - he'd better get some ice for that fist!  Please let him get the job in Seattle!!!!  Oh,.....and don't wait too long to update!  I'm dying to know what Bella's reaction will be to the fight!!

Reviewer: msdenisetexas (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

Oh goodness.. First off, being from Texas the whole ordering a Coke and then having to state what TYPE of Coke it SO true.. and hilarious!!! LOVE Bella relaxing a bit! LOVED protective Edward!!!! Can't wait for an update!

Reviewer: Katiedid (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

Great story! Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Lorimoon (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

What an asshole!  I'm so glad Edward got to hit him.  You're awesome and you're story is fucking awesome.  Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: butterfly_kisses (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

OMG!!!you are the bomb!!!!i loved this and something stupid!!!!

Reviewer: Stephy B (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

lol awww :)  I loved it!  I am so excited to read more and so excited someone punched that idiot!  He deserves worse lol 

Can't wait to read more!  Have a fabulous day!!! :)

Reviewer: PsychWardSiren (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

Love the confrontation between Sam and Edward but I hope Em gets to get his hits in too eventually...More soon please!



Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

I would love to hear Jasper and Edward...especially when he calls Bella "sugar".  So glad that Bella has taken time off to be with Edward and love how he took care of Sam!  I hope Bella doesn't freak out with the "I can take care of myself" stuff.  Edward was very honorable in what he did to protect his girlfriend and deserves a thank you!

Crossing my fingers that his job interview goes spectacularly!

Reviewer: kellyliz82 (Anonymous) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

Ooooh, ending on a cliffhanger. I can't wait to see Bella's reaction in the nxt chapter. Glad to see that sam got what was coming to him. Maybe he'll back off now.

Reviewer: G1175 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

Wow she's not going to like this or is she?

Reviewer: karilyn_yvonne (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

I love it and I cant wait for more chapters. I just read 1-11 today and I'm hooked.

Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

Just caught up to this story and it ROCKS!  I've seen stories with Jasper and the "southern accent" before, but not Edward, it's so cute! 

I love that Edward beat the shit out of Sam...WHAT.AN.ASSHOLE!  I mean, seriously, who the hell does he think he is talking to Bella that way?  GEEZ!  I wish Emmett would have heard what he was saying...DAMN! 

I can't imagine Bella reacting badly to that.  I mean, he tried to reason with Sam first, and Sam kept insulting Bella.  If anything, Edward was just trying to protect her honor and stick up for her when Sam was badgering her.  UGH!

I can't wait to

Reviewer: elinana (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

You should totally keep your work up.!! It's great :D

Reviewer: justareader (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

I kind of love aggressive Edward and Sam definately had it coming. I hope Edward doesn't hurt their relationship by not telling Bella about the job opportunity. Please update soon, I am thoroughly hooked on this story!

Reviewer: astargoddess (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

Awesome chapter, made all the more so by the fact that you wrote it at 3 am!  My 3 am writing rarely even includes complete sentences.  Like most of your reviewers, I also really enjoyed seeing Edward get a little agressive, especially in defense of Bella's honor.  I like your story a lot - especially your skill at capturing the different voices - and can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

AAAAaarrrrrrggggg!!!  I lost track of the VERY maddening fact that I have caught up to the latest update and so now have to wait!  I think I'm gonna cry!  I'm still staring at the spot where that lovely "next" link usually sits feeling like somebody shot my puppy!  lol  (alright, maybe not that, but I'm really, really bummed!)

If you can't tell, I've been really enjoying your take on our favorite couple.  I have to say you are the queen of the wicked cliffie!  :)  Keeps us coming back for more, no doubt, but it's just about evil!  :D

Nice end with Eddie going all caveman on dumnass Sam!

I keep picturing Ratauille when Bella's in the Kitchen!

Does James get to be really wicked later?  Does Edward get to be the knight in shining armor?

What ever you decide to do with this story, I'm thoroughly sucked in and panting for more!  (I feel for you having to move--I loath moving!  Must be how often I've had to do it.  Best wishes on satisfying the writing bug (and our addiction to your story) and keeping up with your RL demands!

Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

Edward to the the rescue how honorable. Southern men don't joke around when it comes to their women.

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

wow....intense chapter at the end.

i sure hope he gets that job...that would be awesome.....

can't wait for more

Reviewer: mrscullen (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

great chapter! can't wait for more!

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

I cant wait for the next chapter


Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)


Love it

Reviewer: kamilynne (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

FABULOUS! Absolutely, incredibly, irresistably fabulous! Takes me back to a not-quite-the-same situation I found myself in a 'few' years back between my now-husband and my ex-boyfriend. You MUST keep writing! I'm not sure if you've moved at this point, but best of luck with everything!

Reviewer: meyerjc2002 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

Love the story.  I hope Bella reaction is good and not to crazy!

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

Go Edward go!

The nerve of this Sam!! What a SOB! I oved the fact that Bella has decided to have some fun for once! Ans the way she stood for herself and Edward. Very different from the depressive and pessimist behavior we've seen a couple of chapter ago.



Reviewer: slavestorome (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)

please hurry with teh next chapter!

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