I cant wait for the next chapter

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FABULOUS! Absolutely, incredibly, irresistably fabulous! Takes me back to a not-quite-the-same situation I found myself in a 'few' years back between my now-husband and my ex-boyfriend. You MUST keep writing! I'm not sure if you've moved at this point, but best of luck with everything!

Go Edward go!

The nerve of this Sam!! What a SOB! I oved the fact that Bella has decided to have some fun for once! Ans the way she stood for herself and Edward. Very different from the depressive and pessimist behavior we've seen a couple of chapter ago.

Great!

 

Great Chapter, love your Edward and Bella.  I do not think they are moving to fast, I think this needed to happen for the connection between them to be so strong that when she leaves to go back home, they find it almost impossible to be apart.  Can't wait to see how this progresses.  Please update soon.

OMG!  you did it again.  That bit with Jasper and the "coke" brilliant!

When you grow up a certain way it's always kind of amazing when you realize just how odd your little "isms" ended up seeming to everyone else.

Just know that you keep impressing the hell outta this little geechie.

Bar fight! I usually miss those by being in the bathroom. Glad i didn't miss this one. Bella has to call a locksmith right now. Sam's a meddling jerk. Love the chapter btw, Please update soon.

OH!!!! why u leave it hanging like that???? ugh!!!!! loved it still cant wait for the rest!!!!lol keep it coming...

Oh man. When you said they "danced awkwardly" I immediately thought of the Elaine dance from Seinfeld. If I that had been the case then Sam would have been totally justified hahahaha.

Oooh, totally didn't see that coming. I just knew that one of the friends didn't ask Bella about the interview. Awesome chapter BTW! Need more already!!

No, no, no, no! We need to see Bella's reaction to Edward kicking Sam's ass. Personally, I abso-fucking-lutely loved the shit out of it, but I am dying to know if Bella felt the same way. Did it make her all warm and fuzzy when Edward stood up for her, like it did me?

Anyway, I think this may have been one of my favorite chapters so far. I counted at least 4 times where I caught myself giggling and bouncing in my seat! Awesome, awesome, and awesome-that was this chapter!

I definitely felt bad for hungover Edward....I know how that feels, but it was cute that Jasper can still make him succumb to peer pressure. And I do believe I must agree with Edward about Rose-I like her better when she's drinking too, lol.

I really, really loved the guys going out for lunch. I could just imagine the hostess and waitress. I mean if I saw those three walk into where I was working for lunch, I know my jaw would be dragging the floor and I'd have to have someone wipe up the drool, lol. I so loved that the hostess thought Jasper was from Alabama. I know we Alabamians have such cute accents! Lol.

And I am so glad that I wasn't drinking anything when Jasper asked for some "swate tay, plays" cause I would have definitely had drink coming out my nose! I had already spent about a minute trying to figure out what the heck the title of this chapter meant and when I read then, I burst out laughing. Then I was gasping in disbelief when she said they didn't have sweet tea. All restaraunts are supposed to have unsweet tea and sweet tea, aren't they? Lol, well at least they do around here cause pouring packets of sugar and Sweet-N-Low into a cup of unsweet tea just ain't the same at all!

And I was laughing and nodding and bouncing when Jasper didn't get to tell her what type of Coke he wanted! That's another thing from home! I wasn't surprised that Emmett couldn't understand what was going on though. For years my cousin and I have had the same argument. For her coke is just coke, but for me it could be Dr. Pepper or Mt. Dew and she thinks it's hilarious. But I get back at her West Virginia butt cause she calls all soft drinks "pop".  We always tease each other with me saying "Ya'll want a coke?" and her saying "Yen want a pop?"        That part definitely struck home with me and I loved it!!!!!

I was bouncing again and screaming "Yay Brother Bear!" when Emmett got Edward an interview with "Tom"! Yay, yay, yay, yay, yay!!!!!!!!

Loved, loved, loved the lemon. Edward in the shower.....always a nice image! Loved even more that Bella took off work for Edward! Seeing them falling for each other more and more is awesome! And the club was great...other than Sam of course, but Edward took care of that nasty little problem. :D

Can't wait for more!!!!! Thanks so much for sacrificing sleep to get this chapter to us!!!! I promise it was greatly appreciated!!! :D

I was looking for something new to read tonight and found your story and have to say I am really liking it so far.  I find this one to be fun since I live in North Carolina and most stories take place in Forks so I am relating to the location of this.  Looking forward to see how this develops. 

Nice story here... I enjoyed reading it... Had some really funny scene's in some chapters..

I reallu enjoyed the Coke comment,, I have had that happen to me on more then one occasion... I live in Illinois and moved to Texas... First time i order a soda they looked at me like i was nuts.. LOL.. So that made me laugh..

I hope he moves to seatle or she moves by him... Either way they should all meet in the middle..They seem to have a better time when there all together...

Iam glad Edward punched that fool... Yeah Edward.....Cant wait for some more juicy lemons.. I'd be jumping me  some bones if my man was only in town a few days.. LOL....

Plz hurry and update... Iam looking forward to the next chapter....

Take Care

Mari

Gah, cliffie!

Jasper's put-on accent is hilarious!

I surprisingly wasn't frustrated with Bella for once, lol.

Douche-hitting Fightward is too yummy for words.

MORE, please?! :D