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Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
BUSTED!!! Poor Bella - I bet she's blushing. But who cares, when you're blushing because you've been pleasured by Edward??? Bring. It. On.!!!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
Hey, is that ST 37 stuff real? :)
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
Poor Bella! Cockblocked by a frisky Edward and now fried in the southern sun. She's gonna be toast - a million years ago when I was a kid, we went to RIver Country in Disney - I spent 6 hours in the water playing volleyball, and I STILL remember the disgusting size of the blistes on my back! And my legs peeled off in sheets. It was nasty! I had to spend the entire vacation in my bathing suit, because everything else KILLED me!! It was brutal!
I love Jasper, and him with a mighty southern accent....sheee-it, darlin'!! That jus may keel me!!! whew!!
Enjoying the story...enjoying that ALice isn't shopping too much....wondering how Edward will cure her burn? >:>
Reviewer: Sarah Peachel (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
You're an incredibly talented author. I know it's completely sacreligious but it's also the undeniable truth: you're better than Twilight's original author, Stephanie Meyer. You're far better. Stephanie has an unbelievable imagination but nothing could compare to the way you develop the plot and describe each moment the characters share. Sweetheart, you'vre got an inredibly powerful gift. You have the power of words. You can manipulate a persons thought completely and transport them right into your stories. I know it's happened to me. God... I felt like I was right there in bed with Edward and Bella (and come on, who doesn't want that?) This is the only AH story that I've liked so far. No, liked is NOT the right word... loved. That fits nicely. All joking aside though, I'm addicted to your writing. Please continue to write and know that you've got you're own legion of fans eagerly awaiting your newest works... and I'm one of them.
Reviewer: Scarlett_Letters (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
Fantastic. Followed a rec from caren @ fictionators.blogspot.com - so glad I did.
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
A few things. First, Sam is the devil. Ew. Second, dominating possesive Edward in bed is insanely hot. Third, when Jasper and Edward call each other "son" it makes me giddy like a school girl. And........ for the relationship skelaton, I'm going to go with Edward cheating on someone. Not that he seems that type, but men can be dopes and make mistakes, and after everything that happened with Bella and Sam, that would totally make for some good drama and make Bella think twice about taking a chance on him.
Reviewer: meyerjc2002 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
He's been engaged. No married! To Tanya! :)
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
Yay!!Looks like Bella is really opening up...Please update very soon.
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
Shit fire and save the matches! There's a little southern cussing for you for that cliffie. No idea what Edward's hiding in his closet, but I can't wait to find out.
I love that Bella got turned on by ProtectiveWard....I quite enjoy it when the characters feel the same way as I do about things.
LOVED the convo with Alice and Jasper, especially Jasper realizing how nervous Edward was and asking Bella not to be mad at him. Emmett was cute trying to find out what Sam said, but they defintiely made the right choice to not tell him cause he would have been tracking Sam down, though I'm not sure I would have really minded. :)
All the hot, spicy, and sweet Bella/Edward stuff was fantastic! But this story is seriously making me develop a fetish for the nickname 'sugar', lol. Bella telling Edward all the things she trusts him with and Edward dropping hints about moving to Seattle were definitely some high points.
And Sam being at Bella's apartment after some hot and heavy elevator making out was not cool, but that conversation was one that definitely needed to happen, not so much for Sam but to fully help Bella put that part of her life behind her so she can focus on moving forward with Edward. Hopefully that's the last we'll see of the dick named Sam! :D
And that incredibly hot sex at the end almost, ALMOST, makes up for the horrid cliffy! J/K. :D Can't wait for more Southerncomfortward!!!!! I think this may just be my favorite version of Edward ever, but then again I might be a little biased about that! :D
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
UGh!!!! Ugh!!!! I think I might burst from frustration... I am way too angry! (Not your fault...just pent up frustration!) Bet her damn name is Tanya!!! Bet I'll hate her as much as I do all the other ones.
I give sidelong looks at the girl named Tanya at work because of this! I hope it's just a story and she doesn't fucking appear... I might die if she does...really! It would be so hard on Bella :( I'm not sure she would deal well after Sam with another girl in the picture. I didn't know there was a thread for this!!!! When did I miss that!!! *tears*
I am so happy she's letting go...that she trusts him (hint hint lets not even give her a small reason not to) Lastly...that was some goood lovin! I swear I might cum if a southern man calls me sugar anytime soon....or begin planning our wedding! LOL J/K
Reviewer: labellamafia (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
Hot.
And I'm thinking there are way too many things in our darling little Southern boy's closet. So much so that I really can't even name one.
Waiting for the next chapter, per usual.
Lovelovelove.
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
Protective Edward is swate! Bella was too kind to allow Sam that conversation, IMO. But enough with the evil cliffy!
Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
Uh, oh. This does not sound good. More please.
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
My fingers are crossed that Edward is going to get that job and move to Seattle...or Bella moves to NC with Edward! One way or another I hope those 2 are together.
I agree with Bella...Edward can't call her Sugar enough!
And now Edward skeletons...hmmm can't wait to see what comes next.
Reviewer: irishwitch (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
I am loving this story. Your characters are great and it is just the right mix of Lemons and sugar! Thanks...and please update soon!
Reviewer: jasleenkaytina (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
AHHH, damn these cliffies! :(
Tanya perhaps?
Keep these chapters coming, woman! I love your writing. :)
Reviewer: AlwaysHave (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
Southerncomfortward! I love it! There aren't a whole lot of things that are sexier then a southern accent. I'm excited to see where this story is going and I'm rooting for a move to Seattle!
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
WOW!!! Inspired much??
This chapter was incredible! I am speachless! I have NO speach!!
Gosh! You managed to combine two of my favorite positions in the same fuck with Sugarward!! That was heaven!
I am sorry but I cannot offer any guess on the contents of Southerncomfortward’s closet right now because I am still high on this chapter. I will have a cig and come back to reread the chapter!
Thanks and I hope it was as good to everybody as it was for me!! *sighs*
:-D
Reviewer: Dena (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
must be a lurking tanya or victoria story out there....
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
hmmm where is this going to lead us!?!?!?!?
Great chapter!
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
Hey it's ok. I am glad Bella is asking and I hope Edward tells her about his past. I am glad Sam did come back and tell Bella he was sorry. Anyways love your Southern Edward and can't wait for of the story. =)
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
such an intense little moment there with sam...he is such a prick....
glad to see that bella and edward can be so comfortable together....well except for the silence there at the end....
can't wait for more
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
Oh God. I hope there isn't a Tanya lurking there. gack! Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
that was mean :) Update soon please!
Reviewer: StephanieCullen (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
I am still getting the biggest thrill out of Southern Edward!
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