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Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)
Oh my. Good stuff!
Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)
Oh my, sounds like a lot more surprises to come! YAY! I can't wait to read more!!
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)
AW! what is up with Alice's parents? I want Jaz to propose to Alice, and really who care what bones are in Edwards closet? I'm sure Bella will be fine with that. I really love this story sugar, I can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)
mmm....i'm glad to see that jasper is going to propose...thats so sweet....
i'm glad charlie took to edward...and i hope that he sticks around and moves to be with bella....that would be wonderful...
can't wait for more
Reviewer: violin3679 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)
Bwahahahaha! Jerk whisperer.... Oh that cracked me up! Girl, I LOVE this story. I know that's not a terribly original thing to say, but it's just so good to read a story that mixes God's country with Twilight. I just get weak when Edward says y'all. Hot. Interesting that Alice is the one with the crazy religious fanatics for parents when Jasper comes from the very buckle of the Bible belt. Looking forward to seeing what else comes of that. Can't wait till next update!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)
I was so excited when I saw that this story had updated- my heart jumped! I was not dissappointed! As usual, the complexity of the story line and the thoughts and feelings of the characters pulled me into the story like a magnet. Next chapter please!
Reviewer: jdogggz (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)
Great chapter! I actually squeed out loud when Jasper said he was going to propose to Alice!!! "No Skeletons but a lot of bones" - nice analogy! And it was really nice to learn more about Alice's background too.
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)
Such a great chapter! I love how you don't leave anything out! I feel like I am there with them! I can't believe Edward didn't go to that interview! I don't want him to leave....
Author's Response: I have to clarify: Edward didn't skip the interview. This chapter takes place on Sunday and the inteview is on Monday. He just meant that he hasn't told Bella about it, because she looked freaked out when he mentioned moving to Seattle possibly. Don't worry, be happy!
Thanks for reviewing!
Paige
Reviewer: Princess Le Le (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
OMG!!! I love this story... I just started reading it last night, and I couldn't stop reading... I can't wait to find out what you have in store for Edward's past relationships!!! Keep writing the awesomeness!!! :)
Reviewer: TwiDi812 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
Have to tell you a love Southern Edward! Can't wait for your next update, I love this story!!
Reviewer: kathat (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
Maybe someone named Tanya? lol! Hey, how come they're not using condoms anymore?
Reviewer: damlanrrr (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
what a cliffhanger.. I'm guessing it's something to make bella upset, like cheating on someone or being married before. Or maybe edward is being edward and blaming himself for something that isn't his fault and is afraid of bella finding out because he thinks she'll hate him but of course she won't. and that would be the edward&bella we all love:))) love the story..
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
Edward is a horny little bugger in his sleep[. : )
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
That is so funny yet mortifying all at the same time!
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Sleep sex, I've heard that excuse before!
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
what a cliffhanger! i just began reading your series about 2hrs ago and i couldn't wait to finish and catch up to the whole thing. this is a great story you have here! =)
i wan wondering what could be on edward's past. i think so far there was no mention of anything really serious.. not one particular person specifically. i just remembered vaguely that he's had 3 serious relationships..
and this is a small thing but i noticed that they no longer use condom when they have sex.. she's not gonna get pregnant right? although that would be ok if it's integral part of the story. keep it up! good job!
Reviewer: weirdstar007 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
hahahah thats funny
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
It's probably a Tanya, lurking in his closet! Can't wait to find out! Sam is an idiot, but Edward gets to reap the rewards. Lovin' it.
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
A cliffie? Um yeah! Please update soon. I can't wait to read how well the interview Edward has coming up will go. ;)
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
I am glad that Edward is there for her and Sam needs to stay away now since they have talked. Hopefully Edward doesn't have any physco skeletons in his relationship closet.
Reviewer: Deex (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
I am guessing there is either a Tanya or a Lauren in the closet???
It would explain his total understanding of the Bella/Sam situation if perhaps he'd been through something similar... girlfriend shacking up with someone else??
Deex
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
love it, love it, love it, I can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
Eek, the Midwest sucks! (granted, the South is worse.) Move to the NORTHEAST, home of all things magical, baby!! ;)
OK, here's what I know that's good about the south:
Mild winters - the midwest's can be brutal.
Sweet tea, year round. AMEN!
Some great arts down there - quilts, textiles, glass.
Beautiful mountains AND beautiful beaches! with dolphins and pelicans
Amazing produce and oranges that are actually sweet!
Amazing old towns with beeee=youtiful architecture. (Ed would approve)
Mardi Gras!!
Cajun/Zydeco/blues music - doesn't get any better than that
Some AMAZIN' food. Try some Creole and slap yo momma!!
Lots of guns, everywhere, to kill the BIG spiders. :)
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)
I'm with you! Sam is a total douche. Have you read "when you're broken" on this site? It's from Leah's perspective, and man, she tears Sam a NEW one!! Very good reading!! :)
Wow, that was some delightful Jerry Springer moment in the hallway! Good for Bella for blasting that jackass. What a shithead. Seriously! "waa, what could I do, seeing as I have no brains or balls? waaa!" Sniveling men make me ILL. eww.
Bella's brain nuzzling Edward is...gross, I guess, but sweeet too. :) (I just picture a brain oozing across the sand, getting all gritty and nasty...ick.) haha!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
Bella needed wipe-off-the-cheating-fiance's-cooties sex, and Edward provided. I'm glad he knew of her breakup, so he didn't feel used if he found out later. Sometimes, gettin' busy with someone else - someone new, lighthearted, fun - helps you move on. I'm thinking (since Edward's fave architect just so happens to live in Seattle....) that he should head out there for some sort of interview, ya know? ;) And of course, more good hot lovin'!!!
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