FINALLY she admits that he's her boyfriend! It's about time!

I don't think they are moving too fast.  Okay, I have never had that sorta fling, but the way you have crafted these characters, there is nothing OOC about their actions.  Just my two cents on the subject, but I have an opinion on everything, so...yeah.  It's good.  Hell, I was cheering them on the whole time and wishing that they went further that first night, but that is just me. ;P

There is an awful lot that I loved about this chapter, but in particular, I loved the humor of this chapter.  Emmett's response to the house, and how the boys were waiting for that; both Edward and Bella having condoms with them; the interrogation of Alice and Bella.  Esme was exceedingly funny. 

I also loved Jasper's backstory.  I loved that you included that adoptive notion of the Cullens that family is more than just blood.  It has always been a beautiful part of the Twilight universe, so I am quite plesed that you carried that over into this story as well.

ahhh omg!!!! this story is pretty flipping greatt. cant wait til the next chapterrr(:

I think you had them be intimate in the perfect way for such a situation.  Those sunburns do hurt like a mo-fo!  Indeed, they will get to more sexy times, but this was excellent.  To be honest, it shows another level of caring and their deeper feelings that they worked with the situation at hand and wanted to make the other feel good.  I loved it!  Very well done!  :D

I dig it.  I especially like the explanation of the difference in Jasper and Edward's accents.  That is only too true.  I kept wanting Edward to do something to really stake a claim to Bella in front of Jake and/or the others, but I suppose it is too early for that.  You had me rooting for him, though. :)

I heard about your story from a friend, and I love it.  This is an excellent start.  I too have unfortunately been the fifth wheel a few times, but I never got to meet an Edward Cullen because of it.  Alas, maybe next trip, right? ;)

I particularly liked this bit, "I froze with mortification. He was asleep? Was he dreaming I was someone else? Did he have a girlfriend? He was sorry he started this? Oh god, please kill me now. I’m lying naked and sweaty in a stranger’s bed, desperate to fuck him senseless and stupid til dawn and he’s sorry he started this?"  There are a lot of emotions in this one paragraph.  I connected with it when reading.  :)

I LOVE THIS STORY WRITE MORE SOON SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD I MEAN THIS AS A THREAT BYE..... ,L,OL BUT SERIOUS WRITE MOER SOON AND ITS PERFECT AS I S LOVVE IT DID I SASY THAT ALL READY ANY Way bye

This story is just awesome!  I absolutely love it...can't wait to see Jasper propose to Alice.

hes the perfect man and i hope his skeletons arent too damn big ! i think i would forgive him just about anything he had done in his past i hope this aint a buzz kill  

i read this whole thing

UPDATE SOON

ok, i had to stop reading to ask this question b4 i 4got, is edward ever going to tell bells, the truth about his relationships? ( now back to finish the cahpter) ok, i like this chapter alot. i cant wait for the next one. please dont let it be too long b4 its up here. lol

Author's Response:

Yes, he will. He said he won't lie to her, he's just putting off the inevitable because he's afraid of her reaction. Plus, Jasper's going to "out" him, accidentally. =D

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Paige

Fantastic writing, and I love that the chapters are long!! Keep it going so I have something to read in the next week or so!!

I won't be surprised if this story ends up getting a recommendation from the PPSS. I love it! I am bummed that I caught up to the story. I can't wait for the next update! I am really loving this.