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Reviewer: labellamafia (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
oh I've seen those half-naked pictures of Rob. they're inspirational in more ways than one i'm sure.
but i'm very happy the turn edward and bella's relationship has taken ;) great job. hoping for an update soon!
oh and good luck with the move!
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
This chapter was fantastic. The 'I love you's' were great! I can't wait for more!!!
Good luck with the move!
Reviewer: morjin (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
so glad i stumbled across this story! cant wait for more =)
Reviewer: progressiveprincess (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
I agree with the "ill-advised fling" comment. They are good when single and safe. I like the "fast moving" smut between Bella and Edward. It's a breath of fresh air compared to the ones that take a million year for a kiss. Great lemon, thank you!!!!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
That was so sweet. Everything...the proposal, Bella and Rose consoling Alice, Bella and Edward's declaration of love and the following Volvo action. Great chapter!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Ceradee22 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
Aaawwww! So sweet! I was really excited to see the update alert for this story, and it did not dissapoint! I can't wait to find out what happens next; it would be nice if everything stayed sunshine and suger, but i have a sneaking suspicion that angst is on the way. Please update soon, your story makes me smile!
Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
awwww
love it
cant wait for more
Oxo
Reviewer: Heather U (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
So far this is good.. looking forward to more chapters
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
Sweet! Delicious! Wonderful! Wish it was me...
Reviewer: accsmom (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
that was a nice chapter...good one to stop for awhile if needed while you move!!! Where are you moving from/to??? We did CA to FL 18 months ago with 3 kids.. not something I would wish on anyone!!! (oh and we arrived DAYS before christmas..ugh).
Have a safe move.
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
oooh that was so cute. I'm a sucker for fluff. another great chapter from a talented author.
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)
poor edward ;-)
but he'll just have to be patient.
I love the way you portray the charaters in your world they are as canon as they can be. And I love your writing stile.
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
Awesome chapter! So much happened in such a short period of time. I'mwith Bella - it will just take a bit to sink in.They are in love! Yay! I was suprised that Alice is moving to HH and R & C are going to Florida. That is a lot to deal with. An interview in Seattle tomorrow - good stuff. Happy moving! (If there is ever such a thing. GAHHH)
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
loved it. very interesting end ;-)
Reviewer: lskmom (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
oh my, so romantic, so sweet....boy do I hope Edward gets the job offer.
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 10 Panting & Painting (V)
so emmet has now accepted edward. now all they've gotta do is admit that they love each other and want to have a relationship (well more of one) shouldn't be too hard, right? right! I wonder what you will bring on next.
keep on writing. good job with this chapter
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
ooops just noticed I forgot to comment on the last chapter. sry.
Alice is the most interfering little pixie ;-) loved both chapters. great job.
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
Safe journey!
Reviewer: SarcasticGirl (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
Another excellent chapter. I am glad to see them having a real conversation about their feelings, and that Edward came clean about the interview. HOORAY for honesty!!!
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
*sniff* that end made me a bit teary eyed. I suppose now comes the "new moon" phase. Pleeease make it be over quick!
Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
Woot....thread girls rule!!!!
We all understand Paige, well the thread girls, that your RL is extremely crazy right now, we'll be patient. Ok, now that I finished reading the chapter I can go check out the updates to the thread today!
Manda
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
You describe Bella's inner turmoil great. love the end ;-)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
I HAVE A QUESTION?????DID SHE (OR WILL SHE) GET HER LOCKS CHANGED SO SAM CAN'T GET IN AGAIN?????
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
Oh Ya! finally the I Love you is out of the way. I was waiting for that. Thanks . I'll looking forwrod to the update.
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