Damn, stupid insecure Bella!

Great chapter. I'm guessing she didn't show up. What is wrong with her? Why didn't she just talk to him?

Please update soon?

I like these two.

So far, my favorite part about this story is your character devepment.

This Edward is , as always handsome and confident.  Is there something you're not telling us about him?

This Bella is definitely not naive, but that fear of change issue is a huge emotional hurdle to overcome.  However, there is nothing like having a good loving family and especially a big brother to give a girl confidence.

If they are truly leaving, I'm going to miss Alice and Jasper.  There is something so much more real (Other than they are obviously not vampires.) about this Alice.  I guess letting us know about her childhood has made her more softer, more likeable, and even a better friend to Bella. 

Jasper is so sweet.  He's hot.  He's a southern man.  Enough said.

I'm so glad you decided to make Emmett  hunky and smart.  Dumb,  goofy Emmitt definitely fails over  hunky busnessman Emmitt!

Thanks for such an enjoyable read.-TheHarper

 

 

im enjoying this .

Im in the UK its pouring down with rain ,but my imagination is on a sun kissed beach

Awww!  I loved it! 

I'm so sad and happy for Alice at the same time, and the news from Renee and Charlie was shocking too.

But Edward and Bella are just the best.  They need to sit down and spill it.  Let it all out.  Tell every little secret, every little thing.  And fall more deeply in love! 

nice update

I ADORE your story!  Thank you!

loved the proposal and then edward and bella declaring their love and consummating it in the car...sigh...so lovely!  great chapter!

I absolutely LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think your Edward is my dream man!! not that I don't love my hubby, but WOW, just WOW!

Lots and lots happening in this chapter. Alice and Jasper were definitely too sweet and made me cry more than once in this one. I also loved Emmett's obnoxiousness and Rose's bluntness. I was thinking, trying to figure out which one of those two would be my favorite couple but it is really hard to figure out cause they're all so great. I also loved Charlie and Renee and the fact that none of Bella's family seemed to realize it was going to rain or that no one had even started fixing lunch until she told them so. It definitely did explain a lot about Bella's personality.

I know there's been a lot of conjecture about where they will settle down at eventually and to me with this chapter it seems like the South may be winning, lol. Alice moving to SC and Charlie and Renee going to FL....Bella's getting fewer and fewer reasons to stay in Seattle, especially if Edward doesn't get his job there. But then that would suck for Edward to not get his job. Oh well, I'm sure it will work out one way or another. Maybe he'll get hired but they'll want him to work in SC, lol. And then Rose and Em will move there too so everybody will be together and happily ever after! :D

Jasper's proposal and Alice's response, Bella's admitting how much she cares for Edward and that she could love him, and Edward telling Bella that he is in love with.....all things that melted my heart in this one.  Also loved Jasper and Edward's conversation and Jasper being worried about Edward getting his heart broke.

Thanks for getting us this one, especially since I'm sure things are horribly busy for you right now.  Good luck with the move and the drive! Ya'll be careful! :D

Great. Just what I need. Complications.

AWWW  SWEET THERE ADORABLE F SAM....YEP TEAM EDWARD ALWAYS THNK GOD THERE NO JACOB NI KID I LIKE TAYLOR LAUTNER BUT JACOB ANNOYING