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Reviewer: 4everintwilight (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

Bella needs to realize that Edward isn't Sam. He's not going to hurt her, but only after a month or so of them being "together", I wouldn't expect her to confess her love for him that she KNOWS is there.

I want another chapter! ASAP, love! This story is win.

Reviewer: Bella Landaeta (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

I MISSED THIS STORY SO MUCH.

Update soon, I cant wait to see whatever happened.

Reviewer: inlove22 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

i want more, and she didnt come after him, :( now i really hate her, but i understand to:( well well, cant wait

Reviewer: kassy723 (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

OoOoOooo I liked this chapter! cute and angsty but not tooo angsty haha excited for whats coming next!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

Well girlie, it's good to have you back in the writing groove.  Hope you are enjoying your new home.  How is the sweet tea?  God, I can taste it now...

Well, it looks like our girl Bella has a few commitment/insecurity issues to face.  Good for Edward that he put himself out there and isn't putting up with Bella's games.  She needs to put on her big girl panties and give in to her feelings.  Love to see how you get her to do that.

Of course I want to see Edward and Bella together- I just want them to be equally commited and secure in their love.  All forever type loves require this (says the person married for nearly 18 years). 

Eager to read more of this lovely story whenever you have to to write more.  I'll be waiting...

Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

That was just plain mean.  We have to wait all this time, and this is how you leave us!

I hope you get to update soon so we can find out what actually happened.  My first instinct is to say Bella should have had the balls to join Edward on the sidewalk.  I think she's still carrying around the fallout of Sam and is making Edward pay for it.  BUT, if something else happened between them before Edward had to get on the plane, I could be entirely wrong.  And I want to know!

I'm 46 and I've only moved twice.  It makes me ill to think of having to go through all my crap.  But, I do have too much crap, so I probably need to go through it anyway ;)  Welcome back :)

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

Argh!  So did she come home?  Did he go to a hotel?  Please update soon.

Reviewer: chbestcase (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

OMG...that was a terrible cliffie to leave us with after all this time! i hope that you update sooner!  hope your move went smoothly...i hate moving

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37

YES!! Oh I think I need a shower  mmm-hmm!

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)

*giggle* am SO freakin' glad she doesn't want Jake! & the sexual  tension between Bella & Ed...mmm yummy!

Keep up the awesomeness!!

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up

This is great, but ugh! Does Jake have to be in the middle of everything????

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)

We call lunch dinner in England too... and the evening meal is tea... go figure!

Reviewer: aylah50 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

Wow! This is a great story, but arrrrgh you have to update! I need to know what's going to happen next!!!

Reviewer: mrs_cullen26 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

Oh.... I didn't want Edward to leave.......

Reviewer: TheHarper (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

You ought to be ashamed of yourself for leavin' us all shook up like this!  I will say, however, I'm sick of Bella's insecurities too.  Bring it all home for us next time please.  We are all enjoying your style and the story you've penned.  Don't you tary too long on a comeback for these two.-TheHarper

Reviewer: honey swan (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

oOoooh! misunderstandings!!!!!

poor Edward though!

I wish Bella just mumbles in her sleep that she loves him! there seems to b no other way.........

Reviewer: craving2read (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

Ahh, their relationship has all gone to hell in a hand basket. Who will you have give Bella a Communications 101 lesson? Bruce? Alice?

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

I just love how Bella had a sense of empowerment and told Sam off the way that must of us have had a final word to an ASS who was in our lives at some point. Go Bella!!! I bet the phone sex over the next month is going to be great with E & B!!!

Reviewer: dazedx3 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

oh my god please update sooon! that was so itense. bella is an idiot just sayin

Reviewer: katydid (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

Nicely done!  Bella is always jumping to the wrong conclusions; well, one day she may actually ask a straight forward questions and get the proper answer back!

 

Thanks for the update-Kate

Reviewer: indianagirl (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

Bella needs to trust him. Yeah its hard but if she is going to get all pissy and not tell him why then she needs to get over it. He isn't a mind reader. And he can talk to women if he wants he had his hands across his chest i believe is what you wrote. That tells you right there that he was being guarded and standoffish to the girl.

Reviewer: kcull (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)

oh, yummy yummy. I cant wait for the fireworks... this is going to keep me up tonight reading!

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)

LMAO. I love your Edward!

Reviewer: kcull (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)

Ohhhh wow. I am aching for the next chapter. This is as awesome as I thought it would be. well done.

Reviewer: twi-addict (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

Well, not what I hoped for because I don't really understand what Bella's problem is.   I get the whole "I've been hurt, I don't like change, I have an inferiority complex" stuff she's got going on, but man, she is becoming more and more insecure!   Something's gotta give with her and I hate to see her blow it.   Both of them need to stop editing and just tell the other the complete truth.   They're playing silly games and stronger relationships have been done in by much less.   When's the next chapter coming?!   Still love the story, waiting for a happy ending (although don't want the story to actually end, ya know?)!

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