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Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)

My, my, pictures of a half naked Rob.  I'd love to come to the thread to see that but I've been waiting for 3 weeks to get a validation message to get on the forums.  I'm feeling as frustrated as I do when I see photos of a half naked Rob LOL!!!

That was such a great chapter.  I'm loving Southerncomfortward.  He's so smooth and sexy.  You must have experience with Southern men to write them so well.

I hope your move across country has gone well.

Reviewer: Eliza Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

Ok..ay...WTF is Bella thinking?  Letting her insecurities take over is completely asinine!  Man up already and talk to Edward.  She can't keep running away when things get complicated, and even though she's been through a lot it doesn't excuse treating Edward like he isn't important to her when it's obvious how much she does care about him.  He doesn't deserve that and she needs to grow up.  He's been very clear about how he feels and he's considering moving to Seattle for her.  Hello!

Sorry, for the little rant!  I do really like your story, but after this chapter I just want to slap Bella.  I guess it's a true testament to the story if people get all worked up over it  ;)

Keep up the good work.  I look forward to your updates.  Cheers!

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)

Mmmmm Rob Pattinson with a Southern accent.  How sexy is that???  Even though I have to really try really hard to imagine the accent being an Aussie.  BTW I have 2 boys nearly 8 and nearly 11 and I just had to read them your Pokemon references.  Of course, they were amazed that there was any reference to Pokemon in one of "my stupid stories" LOL!!!  For some reason they have some hostility towards Edward, Twilight and Rob Pattinson - go figure.

Yes I've had the crazy, too fast, ill-advised fling and it is a wonderful thing.  I love your story because it is something that would happen in RL.  Also great to see that they're not having simultaneous orgasams.  I'm sorry but I don't know too many people that that happens with.  Good to see some reality.

I know I'm behind in the story and I've only started reading it but I will keep reading it.  LOVE IT!!! 

Reviewer: WhisperingWolf (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

I love this story! I can't get enough of it and I certainly am waiting anxiously for your next chapter! Good work my dear, and I hope to see more very soon! ^_^

~Wolf

Reviewer: prettykisses (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

GAH! I was spoiled that last couple of days, I had several chapters to read through and now I have to wait for an update.

I really like that we have this change in events.  It was hard to believe that everything would run so smoothly.With that said...

Stupid Bella what the hell are you thinking!?  You are letting Edward Fucking Cullen slip out of you effing little hands???  What the hell are you thinking?

AND...

Edward Fucking Cullen you better man up and call that girl before she feels like you just let everything go.  Just like Sam did!

 

Ok. I feel better now that I let that out.

Reviewer: D Pattinson (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

Well for once,  an author is not allowing poor Edward to make all the mistakes.  This one is all on Bella.  Poor, dear Edward!  Can't wait to keep reaing!

Reviewer: thegirlcanthelpit (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

cant wait for the next chapter!! really good story! :)

Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

**Le Sob**

OME!!! (insert fangirl squeeing here)

She did not go there, did she? 

She did!

Gasp!

Reviewer: Kris Butter (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

wait!! does that mean she never showed? or did they argue?! you can't just leave it like that.. why the hell is he going home anyway? he said he would go get a hotel room... this is not cool.

Reviewer: lea2009 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

uh oh  that doesnt sound good!!!   im so addicted to this by the way!  so in love!!!  just read the whole thing in like 2 days...now im bumming cause im all caught up!

please update soon!!

Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

WTF was that?! LOL

Waiting for the next chapter to see what the hell is going on between these two.

 

 

Reviewer: erinnnzomg (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

Ooh, ouch. This is bad. Ultimatums are always a sure fire way to piss a girl off. Bad, bad Edward. He will certainly learn his lesson.

And anyways.....

WHAT IN GOD'S NAME WAS HE THINKING TELLING BELLA HE LOVED HER AFTER SHE JUST FOUND OUT HER BEST FRIEND AND PARENT'S ARE MOVING?!?!? Jesus H, man! Wouldja grow a brain? Geez.

Alright. I'm done. I had to read all of this in its entirety! Because it was just that good. Aaaand I like a semi-southern Edward. I'm from Tennessee, and since I was.. oh, 14, I've been working on squashing my accent like an Alabama fan at a Vols game XD (But obviously some southernisms have stuck) I'm normally good at sounding... you know.. not like an uneducated hick, but it slips from time to time. I call everyone sweetie XD Damn that southern instinct of mine :P

-erinzomg

Reviewer: Mrs Carly Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

Please, Please, Please write more.

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

i really, really liked it. i thought edward was right for giving her the ultimatum; i'm sick and tired of bella's game, not been forward, not wanting to talk things trough. so yay for edward!

Reviewer: morjin (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

I liked that! Good for Edward for calling Bella out on her insecurities and trying to make it clear to her that he loves her and is there for her... but oh no "Fuck me and my ultimatums"!! I hope he just doesn't loathe himself now, poor Edward!! And Bella will now just learn what it's like without Edward... she will miss him lots, I just know it!! I just hope she realizes before its too late!! And haha I loved Francke, can't wait to read more of him!

Update soon =)

Reviewer: reckybecki (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

Wow. Are oyu going to go into what happened after Edward hung up the phone. I am super curious as to what happened.

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

Okay, firstly, really happy that ya'll made the move okay. Now the unpacking and getting settled.....well, good luck with that! ;D

Secondly, the chapter. Holy hell, what a chapter! Fallout was definitely the right name for this one. I really wasn't surprised that Bella got scared and that it showed. Really at this point though, I'm not actually mad or blaming Bella or Edward for their problems. This is definitely one of those cases where I can see where both of them are coming from; Bella is still scared of putting herself out there and she has this idea in her head that she can't be enough for Edward, but her bottom line is being scared of being hurt again. Edward has put himself out there and feels like Bella has thrown that back in his face. He kinda put his heart right out there for Bella, but definitely hasn't got the reaction he was hoping for from doing so and now he's hurt and his pride combined with that hurt kept him from going to Alice and Jasper's. At least that's how I see the situation right now.

And I thought Tom was just hilarious! Can you imagine working with that guy on a daily basis? Lol. I'm definitely wondering who will get the job though, Edward or Irina?

Loved this drama-filled chapter and can't wait for more! Glad to have you back!

Reviewer: TigerGirl (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

You are killing me. This makes my heart hurt for them!!! I love Edward and Bella so much in this story.  Please tell me I won't have to wait too many chapters for some sweet stuff? :)

I think this is an interesting way to make them both work for the relationship and hopefully come out stronger on the otherside of it.  However, I do live just a few hours from Hilton Head.  If only a frustrated Edward really was on his way home, I would gladly offer some southern comfort :)

Reviewer: beautifulgirls (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

You are killing me here.....how can she be such a b****h to him?  Please don't leave me hanging here.

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

Augh no!!! Grr... what IS her problem??? SHE even said he did nothing wrong!!! She SO owe's him for this big time!!!

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)

*sniff* SO much emotion in these last 2 chapters!! Ugh u killin' me...I love it! LoL But I think Bella & them should all move together along with Alice! She can be a Chef anywhere & Emmett can build anywhere & Rose can...be Rose anywhere!  :-) Plus Bella's family won't be that far away once they move to Florida (I used to live in Jacksonville. Go Jaguars!!)

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

Edward hugs all round. I think he did the right thing, Bella drove me slightly mad in this chapter... especially because she listed being jealous as one of Edward's 2 bad qualities... oh the hypocrisy.

LOVE THIS STORY!

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)

This was a fantastic chapter. I loved their closeness. BUT... I get the feeling it's not going to be a bed of roses all the time. Yikes!

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

OME, they are both to stubborn for their own good!

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

I think you ended this chapter just right. You're Edward is just perfect!

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