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Reviewer: aerosoldoc (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Let me just reiterate that I love Jasper like plants love the sun...I just want to soak him up!

Sigh. I love the make up and make out...

Christy looked like I had just announced I was about to sprout wings and fly across the ocean. “Wow. Just… wow, Edward. I’m fighting the conflicting urges to console you and laugh hysterically at the irony.”

Oh my God, this is the exact reaction I had to my long time bachelor friend! I'm starting to like Christy already...and I'm not sure how my friend's girlfriend would react to him meeting up with me to discuss relationship issues (which we did), but she really didn't have anything to worry about with me. With him, on the other hand...

Sigh. Clueless Edward must really have a golden life, if a few stumbling blocks along the way feels like he just can't win! I have a sinking, evil feeling things are about to get a whole lot worse....

Fantastic chappie, your wonderfulness! See you on the thread...!

Reviewer: ShaeLove (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

whoa now. haha.

and you're right, edward isn't a pro at committed relationships.

but i can totally see him being a mopey puppy about the whole thing, and pissing everyone off.

and i guess i can understand bella's reluctance. --ah who am i kidding, of course i do. until he gets the job for sure or has other reason to move to where she is, she's gonna be skeptical. she's not going to want to move to the opposite coast for something she's not sure is a sure thing. and admittedly i would be the same darn way.   anyways. :) can't wait for more. i want to know more! haha.

Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Talking is a good thing, but it does depend on who you are talking to :)

I liked Edward's perspective on what happened.  Now I want to know what Bella's thinking about.  Also, I would imagine James is still causing a certain amount of stress on the work front.  Francke needs to follow through with an answer, one way or the other.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

I can just feel either Alice finding him having coffee with Christy and telling Bella; or Bella will come to NC to surprise him and sees him with her not allowing him to explain what is going on. Stupid, stupid fool!!! This just can't end well.

Praises to you the game you are playing with these wonderful characters!!!

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Well this is going to be interesting!

Reviewer: LadyMC (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Ugh...*facepalm* seriously Edward, the girl your trying to convince you love and want to spend forever with is NOT going to be cool with you meeting up with your ex!!  This is going to be bad isn't it?  Please tell me she's not going to call while he's with her or that Jasper isn't going to open his big trap and give Bella the wrong impression! 

Well apparently I was maybe a teeny bit hard on Bella but she's not completely off the hook.  They both have their fair share of the problems they're having!  Hopefully Edward will hear about his job soon!

Ok, thanks for the awesome chapter!  I can't wait to see what happens next!  Update soon! 

Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

oh thank God.. seemed you blindsided us.. haha.. i think most of us thought that edward left seattle without him and bella talking.. that bella never returned to the apartment so edward jumped on the plane. thank God that wasn't the case.. they were able to talk and bella even said "i do too" which i guess is the best that we could hope for for now.

edward meeting christy for coffee? i guess it's not such a great idea but honestly, i've learned that some guys are just dense enough to take time to check and see on how things would look like on the outside. specially if for them, it's really innocent and they're not doing anything wrong. so we all know edward is in love with bella and so he feels that the coffee thingy with christy is totally innocent and harmless. innocent i'd agree but not totally harmless i should say if we see jasper reacting like that. i wouldn't even want to think how it would look to bella--edward meeting with an ex-gf..

but let's just have faith in both of them..i'm sure everything would work out. nice chapter..it put my mind at ease to know that at least they are still talking to each other and not all hope is lost.=) thank you so much for the update! =) update soon!

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

great chapter! update soon!

Reviewer: lea2009 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

this is soo good!  cant wait for the coffee!!

 

 

and...............HAPPY 4TH OF JULY!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Coffee with the ex is a bad idea Edward!  Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

And what does that say about Christy, who's been in a "committed relationship" for how long now?

Thanks for clearing up the whole issue on his attitude when he left Seattle. I was a bit upset with the both of them.

Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Uh oh, for some reason I see bad things happening because of this innocent coffee date.

Reviewer: audra12s (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Thank you, thank you for the update! The perfect way to start the holiday weekend! I can't wait to see where this goes. :)

Reviewer: lmr14 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Love the chapter....Poor Edward; i have a feeling that this coffee will come back to bite him in the ass. 

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Well I hope they figure it out!  These kind of relationships can be very tricky!  At least he was  honest with Jasper...now if he doesn't go off and tell Alice, then Bella...maybe shit won't hit the fan!

But I have a little feeling shit will hit all the fans anyway!  I hope not!  This guy just can't win for losing can he?

Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Oh my. Great update, as usual.

Reviewer: Rachael (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

I get tingly when I read Edward say "sugar".  I think southern Edward may be my favorite type of Edward.  I love when he told her to burn her panties if they weren't confortable.  God, he is perfect, and Bella is wasting time with her drama!

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

yeah they didn't break up (swipes forehead) cna't wait ti see what ahppens next.

Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Oh man Edward's gonna get it! And I don't feel bad when he does something stupid like that! Think boys, think!

Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Ok. First, I think it is really annoying that Jasper is giving Edward crap and accusing him of "giving up" on Bella. If it was Bella who wanted commitment and Edward was the one putting their relatioship in "limbo"... her friends would be straight up telling her to move on.

And second, it is ok for Edward to have coffee with a female. It always pissed me off how in fanfic, Bella demands that Edward is respectful and understanding of her relationship with Jacob, and that Edward should trust her... but whenever its Edward who wants to hang out with another girl, Bella flips her shit. The street has to go both ways.

But I'm glad they didn't break up or anything. But it is going to be really annoying if Bella refuses to committ to Edward, yet flips out about him having coffee with a girl. She can't have her cake and eat it too. But hopefully she wont act like that.

Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

oh wow..   is Bella really worried about James...and what is she going to do blow a good thing with Edward!   can't wait for an update again soon!

Reviewer: crmom (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

Great chapter, you captured Bella's insecurities perfectly. Can't wait for the next, hurry hurry!

Reviewer: iloveedwardcullen123 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

cliff hanger...please update soon

Reviewer: iloveedwardcullen123 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

cliff hanger...please update soon

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

No, no, no!!!!  What happened??  It was all going so well.  You realise, of course, that I have this pain in my chest that won't go away until you post again.  Poor Edward, stupid Bella.  I love this story.  Now, I'm going to start reading your other story.  Keep up your writing - I love it.

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