Reviewer: AngieSaar (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Thank you so much for that last chapter!
I´m looking forward to an epilogue! Maybe Edward impregnating Bella, the birth and some time after...happily ever after :o)
Go on writing! You rule!
Love, Angie from Germany
Reviewer: JLW4108 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
A great ending. Thanks for the journey! Will look forward to the epi and outtakes :)
Reviewer: T Kitty (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Lovely ending thanks so much xx
Reviewer: Anson Longbottom (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Oh, oh, oh!!! This was such a wonderful and sweet ending!!! Thank you for this amazing story! It has caught me like a deer in the headlights from chapter one, and your ending is perfect!!!!!
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Bravo!
Reviewer: tff000 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
sad the story is over and that you had to end it earlier than you had planned although it was well done. wondering if there is anything you left out from your original plan? if so, would you mind sharing? can't wait for the epilogue
Reviewer: mylovedward (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
it was great reading this story. please write a sequel too and when you do please don't take break in chapters..:)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
This was a excellent ending!
I'm sad it's over, though.
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
What a pleasant surprise to find an update to this story! I was afraid it had been abadoned like some of my other faves.
I'm glad Bella & Edward got their HEA.
Reviewer: Theresa_no_more (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Thanks so much for finishing the story -- a beautiful final chapter! I hope to see more from you in the future, even with all you've got going on. Congrats on finishing!
Reviewer: Snuffy10 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Excellent ending thanks so much for writing I have so enjoyed this story and you writing style.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Finally settled into the new home and Bella's restaurant. The long awaited Whitlock baby came after long and painful labor. Beautiful little girl. Edward wanting it all also. Wants to marry Bella and wants babies. Bella only agreed to one. Edward quoted the chip commercial. You can't have just one. Beautiful and romantic wedding on the beach with the family. Small intimate affair. The ending of everyone jumping into the pool with the exception of Alice and the baby. Even our bride and groom joined the rest of the crazy Cullen clan in the pool. Picturing it made me smile and chuckle. It's like an initiation into the Cullen family. Looking forward to the possible epilogue and one shots.
Reviewer: shanno716 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
I was a huge fan of this story and i'm glad to see it finished. I loved it and can't start reading it again from beginning to end without having to wait for updates
Reviewer: MCGT (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Lovely ending. Hope the epi brings with it babies and laughter.
Wonderful & sad to see it over.
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Very nice ending. Loved it. An epilogue at some point would be nice too.
Reviewer: StephanieCullen (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
I have so missed Southern Edward!!!!!!! So sweet!
Reviewer: leechlover81 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
I really loved this story so much, thank you for sharing it. :)
Perhaps an epi with the first Cullen baby would be perfect ;)
I love that you didn't do the whole wedding ceremony either, I liked just the facts it was much better to read that way.
Reviewer: Melsie (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
That was perfect. Thank you for sharing this story with us, it was truly wonderful and I'm bummed its over :)
Reviewer: kiviern04 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
great ending to a great creation. thank u thank u thank u for sharing. i hope u will write again sometime. u really have a wonderful talent
Reviewer: willinglydrawn (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Your story has been amazing. thank you ;)
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
What an awesome chapter! That was the perfect ending to this story. Thanks so much for sharing it with us!!
Reviewer: Angel_on_Wheels (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Perfect ending!!!
Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Well, you're done. Congratulations!! It has been far too long for this conclusion to have the meaning it should, so I guess I'll just have to go back and read the story again from the beginning! Ah, shucks... that's just too bad, isn't it? ;-)
Best Wishes, Virginia "Ginnie" May
Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
perfect!
Reviewer: icy cold (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
I do want to tell you how much I enjoyed your story, even with the long gap! You did good, and I will read whatever else you decide to put out for us. Best wishes to you in the meantime.
Karen
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