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Reviewer: atmachine (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

i guess it would be better if he had the coffee with her and her bf or with jasper there or something bc just having coffee with the ex that he was the closest with probably is a really bad idea. how does her bf think about this situation? i think everyone is being too hard on him. jasper and his convo was kinda cruel in a way. i really like this story! try to update quickly and i can't wait to see how SS ends!!

Reviewer: atmachine (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up

omg i totally see how many different ways that could be taken

 

Reviewer: atmachine (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)

i didn't know you wrote something stupid. i really like that story and just started reading this one. i can't wait for your last chapter and getting up to date with this one!!

Reviewer: theladyingrey (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Interesting twist. I like the idea of the playboy who's suddenly swept off his feet but doesn't know how to deal with a real relationship. Hoping for a little more clarity on what's scaring Bella in future updates.

Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

That was a surprise...a good one :)  Will he get the job in Seattle?  And as long as his ex has a serious bf it should be ok, right?

Reviewer: aylah50 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

*Sigh* I love this story! Can't wait to read what happens next!

Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Love your writing....can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Lj_action (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

ok this makes the last chapter better. and i see no problem with him seeing christy.

Reviewer: bellasunderstudy (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Oooooooo Edward? What are you doin' darlin'? Seriously, he is so messed up if he thinks this is okay. If Bella got all in the air about some woman that he went to college with laying hands on  him what is she going to think if she calls to talk to him and he's "having coffee with Christy". Or if she calls Jasper and he tells her where he is? Oooo this has all kinds of blow up in his face written all over it....great chapter as always. 

Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

great chapter.. i love the story, keep it coming! thanx for writing

chasity

Reviewer: valieelovesspinkiee (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

True. So true. lol Coffee with ex's aren't good. But not necessarily bad. I mean, she's dating another guy... Idunno. I just couldn't put him in the dog house if I caught him. I'd be jealous as heck but... lol

Great update! I was worried about B&E. I'm happy Bella got a bit more open with the "I love you." =)

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

I don't think coffee with an ex is ever a good thing.  I'm not sure what he's thinking, time will tell.

Reviewer: kcull (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

so, will bella find out about the coffee date? will edward get jack of her and she then has to chase him? I can not wait for the next chapter...this is such a good story!

Reviewer: carebear (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

I am completely enthralled with this story!!!  How many more chapters do you thing?

Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

I'm glad to see how the conversation between them went. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Kisster (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

I hope this ex is serious about helping him and not disgruntled because he didn't want her like he wants Bella.

Reviewer: themrs (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Poor Edward - I hope this Christy thing doesnt bite him in the butt. :(

Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

So glad they sorted things out before Edward left.  Whew!! I think they are both making mistakes here.  Bella not talking to Edward about the future is pushing him away and making him frustrated (totally understandable).  Edward having coffee with an ex without telling Bella is a big ol' no-no.  I see that being trouble.   Can't wait to see if I'm right!

Reviewer: 092816gil (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Thank goodness they are still together!  I am really truly honestly loving this story! I feel like all my reviews are the same but really there is nothing else to say but....LOVE IT!!! 

Reviewer: Usagi-chan (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Awwww. Poor Edward. He needs hugs and a lot of good advice and not such a pissy Jasper hanging around all the time. Seriously Jazz, take a midol.

Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Aw man i can soooo see these "relationship-advice meetings" with his EX no less is gonna cause poor Eddie boy some serious heartache and trouble *sigh*
I DON'T want him to get in trouble :S.

I enjoyed his and Bella's heart to heart though, it was really sweet, esp on his part. LOL @ Burn em sugar, you don't have to wear uncomfortable underwear for me, infact you don't have to wear any at all! :)
Cheeky hot son of a bitch haha, *sigh* I luv him :D

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

I'm thinking a totally innocent meeting with an X isn't going to turn out well at all. *g* That's dancing with the devil, to be sure. I can't wait to see what happens!

Joan

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)

Wow. That's typical though for a girl who has had her feelings stomped by a guy. Who wants to put themselves out there for any one else to add a foot or two? Edward with a Southern drawl is a stretch but I like his character. I can see them both a little older in your story and it's fun to see them in this situation. Nice work.

JRbtsn Joan

Reviewer: Bella Landaeta (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Ohhhh eddie... be smart, now....

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Hmmm, his hearts in the right place.  He just doesn't understand how this is going to look.  As for the ex's advice-how much does she hate him?  I guess Edward really should be talking to the people he knows love him, like Jasper and his parents.  Or people who love Bella, like Alice or Emmett.  I sure hope you let him figure it out!

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