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Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)
I knew someone would be waiting at her door. Sam is an ass but I loved the way Bella told him off. "You could have done almost anything except letting your pregnant something-on-the-side barge into my work and scream at me for trying to break up her marriage to my fiancée, you selfish, hateful, brainless, spineless son of a bitch!” That's a really good line.
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
Moving too fast - This is Twilighted Fan Fic not Granny on wheels. They didn't even have sex until chapter seven. That's like seven weeks in the real world ok more like seven days but still. And we are talking about a southern Edward Cullen. Would you deny the man the opportunity to call you sugar and touch you with his magic fingers. I think NOT.
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
Suck and Tell - I like that :) Everyone should have a friend that is willing to help you get laid. I'm a sure thing for my hubby but his friends still try to get me drunk when we go out with them. They gotta help their boy out :) But I dont mind because whenever we stay with them - I get a bed.
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
Note to self: Wax before any trip you may end up in bed with a Cullen or at least someone Cullen-like.
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
I'm loving the titles of the chapters. I'm going to love Emmett being Bella's brother, I can tell already.
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Getting to slept in Edward Cullen's bed. It's what we all dream about. I hope you get your kiss. How does your hubby not know that you write these amazing stories with mind-blowing lemons. Well I have more chapters to read :)
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
okay...time for another chapter!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOT
Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
I hope he doesen't blow it.
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
sqqqqqqqquuuuuuuueeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
I have a smile from ear to ear when I read this. I love your writing so much. I love sweet southern Edward..I love that they both loved that picture so much..and I love Alice as always for KNOWING Bella so well.
Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
Action! Good
Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)
That was funny.
Reviewer: Megan_redemption9688 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
jeeze edward has a big mouth
Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
I would have continued, that all I can say. Good start.
Reviewer: Megan_redemption9688 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
I like texan edward
Reviewer: Megan_redemption9688 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
this is hilarious i liike it
Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
Poor clueless guy.... I gotta feel sorry for him though. Bella has got to wise up and take a leap of faith. I know she has it in her! I really like this fic, and can't wait for more! Hope you are all settled in the new home!!
Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
Love the southern take on things. I must tell you I worked for four years from age 16 - 20 at the piggly wiggly and I loved it!!! Cracked me up to see you use it here!!!! Really liking this story... can't wait to see how things work out.
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
It is so cute! I love this some-what new side of Edward (we all know he is controllign :P)
How long til the next chap?
B.Q.
Reviewer: iloveedwardcullen123 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
nice chapter really surprising
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
I hope the "coffee" doesn't have a too much negative affect. And I really hope Bella isn't gping to just show up and Edward be blown out of the water
Reviewer: lydia malfoy (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
oh my goodness. when i was reading the first twilight book i kept thinking "this is such a sweet love story". well that's the same thought going through my mind about your story. truly sweet. i love these southern gentlemen and that bella is not a doormat but a strong smart successful woman who's a little gunshy about the seemingly perfect edward. your characters are really fun. btw, i don't usually read stories until they're finished. i know i know. you writers live for the reviews but as an obsessed reader, i hate waiting for the next chapter. but the title and summary really got my attention and now here i am. waiting for the next chapter. sigh.
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
Oh boy! Glad things didn't end in Seattle. But, I won't hold my breath when Bella finds out he went to coffee with an ex. :O
Reviewer: DeeZ750 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
Good story can't wait for more. Yeah but sad part is his Best friend/brother isn't helping him at all. He is too up set at Edward that he comes off mean so Edward doean't want his help. Well I hope it gets better. I can't wait to have Bella and Edward back together.
Reviewer: amandahugnkiss (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
sneaky sneaky, not what I expected- much better!!
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