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Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

Sam is skeezy. Good riddance! Now onward to Edward!

Reviewer: Simonelecochon (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

That was nice that she was able admit her love for him.

Reviewer: valieelovesspinkiee (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

Woo! I like Bella in this chapter! And Edward's such a sweetie... I miss them being in the same apartment. I do hope that they get the chance to find one together... (gushes and squeals)

Thanks for posting! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: TheLambToHisLion (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

lol that was so unexpected. he certainly is rubbing off on her

Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

Aw Im happy she finally took the leap of faith

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i loved this chapter!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

It's about time Bella said it! Now, what's that no good James up to?

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

THanks for the update! hooray :)

THis chapter ROCKED!! horray, Bella 'fessed up to loving Eddiepoo. Go, Bella!!  And Eddiepoo wants to cohabitate! hooray!

James better watch his ass or I'm gonna cut him, deep, with Bella's cleaver.

I'm not hatin' on Bella. I was pissy with her, but she redeemed herself. Leaping in love is some scary shit!  I get that. Glad Emmett was sweet about cluing her in. Let a little go, Bella - make life easier. Controlling everything is hard work!  And leaves little time for Skypes nookie. >:>

I hope Eddie gets the job in Seattle, 'cause it's what he wants...but...he'd also have to work a zillion hours, and never see Jalice...hmm...and Bella did love the beach in HHI....and Edward could branch out on his own..and Bella open a little seafood place..hmm...maybe she should come East instead. :)  I think it's gonna hit the fan BAD with James and she'll want outta there anyway.

Looking forward to the next chappie! :)

Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

I really like your story.  I started reading this today and I've merrily been clicking the little "next" button until now.  I'm so sad there isn't another chapter.  I guess the wait for updates begins.  What is your update schedule like? 

Reviewer: labellamafia (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

you're got the whole long-distance relationship thing down, though. no worries :)

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

I LOVE This chapter!!! There are still so issues to work thru but at least Bella & Edward recognize that they need to talk to one another and not jump to conclusions or keep their fears hidden from one another. Please don't wait so long to post the next chapter...I have a feeling it will be just as great as this one.

Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

you made my  rotton day so much better because of your up date ! thanks as all always a great chapter!!!

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)

Seeing your ex on tv must have been weird. I cannot believe that Edward heard her..how embarrassing!

Reviewer: aylah50 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

I *so* love this story! I think I said that in my review of the last chapter too...but it's still true! :)

Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

ok i am so happy about this chapter that finally bella took a leap of faith already as you put it.. it must've been so hard for her if she's been a control freak all her life, not to mention the past about sam. so let's cut bella some slack..she did good..no, GREAT now. =) and i'm really happy that she didn't get jealous or anything when edward went out with christy. because really, it was nothing right? so it was really nice of bella not to put too much into that given her previous actions when she saw edward with tanya in front of frankce's bldg. i was hoping edward get the job with them since he really seemed to want it.. but i was also thinking that it's sad because if ever they would be separated with jasper and alice. but maybe we'll cross the bridge when we get there. =) thanks for this update! =)

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37

Your Edward is such a smooth-talker. I'm glad that Emmett is oblivious as to what is going on.

Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

Really lovin' this fic... I'm so glad Bella finally jumped!!!!  Who wouldn't want to jump with him???  I can't wait to see what James has up his sleve and hopefully Edward will be around to rip his arms off so he won't need sleves anymore!!!LOL!  Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

no sexual frustration here!  Just ordinary real life!  At least I think that is how it would be!  As far as James...yes something is definitely up!

I can't make up my mind as to where I think they should live...so I'll just be surprised!!!!!!!  Yippee!!!!!  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Drnifer (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 9 Bella in Her Element (V)

HaHa, Southerncomfortward...that cracks me up! I'd gladly brave the humidity of the south for him, too!

Reviewer: Drnifer (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)

That was awesome!  Even if things are moving a little fast, who in their right mind could resist Edward...on a beach....at night....sigh...

Reviewer: Drnifer (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up

I love the idea of Edward with a slight southern accent.  That's just......hot!

Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

YAY!  Bella has made a huge amount of progress...now she deserves Edward and this great relationship. 

I have a very bad feeling about James...I think he's trying to edge her out of the restaurant.  I still think she should move to HHI and open up her own damn restaurant!

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up

I though you said we had nothing to worry about with Jake. It's obvious that he's putting the moves on Edward's girl! Grrr...

Reviewer: LadyMC (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

Well, all I can say is FINALLY!  I was starting to wonder about Bella's mental status, leaving that fine man hanging for so long ;)  Well I hope he gets the job but then again it would be so much better foor her to move to HH, atleast IMO.  I would rather live on the beach than a rainy city anyday, but then again I'm a Floridian so I may be biased, lol!

I can't wait to find out what James is up to!  Fabulous chapter bb, thanks for the update.....

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)

cant wait 4 more

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)

loved Edward's pov. Glad to see that the attraction is mutual from the beginning. Can't wait to read about all the built up tension between the two of them.

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