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Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Ding dong! Great chapter. It's nice to see Bella letting go of her insecurities, even if it doesn't last long.
Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Yayyyy! That's what I'm talking about! I love what the ending is pointing to = ] I CAN'T wait! I totally know what you mean about the long-distance. But then again, I did have one and it wasn't ever too innocent... HAHA so uh, y'know, you should TOTALLY put these two in bed and have a little heavy panting! They deserve it, don't you think? They've been so good! Bella might not be ready to reach out that far yet, but hey, there's always some joy in firsts, right? = ]
BTW - Thank you SO much for the maturity. I love that they didn't fight or overreact over the coffee outting. Thank you x10. They handled this like mature, reasonable adults.
Now, time for sex, woman!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
love this story! its sexy and funny, but still compelling!! can't wait to see what happens!:D
Reviewer: WhisperingWolf (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Oh, very yummy and very good! ^_^
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
I'm not hating on Bella. :) Good for her! I can't wait for the next chapter to see what's on the go. Of course James is up to no good. Can't have a good story without any conflict. I really, really hope Edward gets the job. Except there would be more drama if he didn't. And again, what's a good story without conflict and drama?
Awesome stuff, as usual. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Yes, let's get them back in the same time zone! They need some alone time! LOL
Reviewer: harmonyrenesmee1 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
DAMN - I was waiting for the phone/skype/cybersex stuff to come.... and it does.. and you stop.. BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Lol, sorry. Amazing chapter as usual sweetie. I am seriously in love with this story. You have a natural talent for words.
<3 XOXO
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
well done. i liked this resolution. they actually acted like adults. great chapter.
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Hi WndrngY (by the way what does that stand for?),
I loved this chapter ans I'm soooooo happy that Bella took the leap of faith. Great job on this chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
O.P.
Reviewer: if only (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Awsome chapter. I am so glad that they are being honest with each other and making a grand attempt to ease the strain of the long distance. Great writing.
Reviewer: Sciencemom (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
Have some coffee on a Friday night? Ya right... Okay, let's see what happens next. I hope nothing "stupid" on his part happens. Like he goes for coffee all innocent then the ex tries something and Bella just happens to show up...
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
She finally admitted she loves him to herself. That is a huge step, and then she immediately thinks if he wants to find a place it is fir distance. I am curious as to why she didn't tell him about James when Edward felt so guilty about coffee. Bella needs to keep her eye on the creeper and perhaps avoid dark alleys and vacant parking lots with him. I can't wait forten next one, I feel like it will be a pivotal one!
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
please update faster ,once a week just isn't enough !!!
LOVE THE STORYLINE .
Please get them all back together asap
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
I know all about long distance relationships and sexual frustrations...hubby is military...
Looking forward to the next chap and I hope we see james getting his ass kicked!
Heather
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
ha ha ha. I love edward. Sugar to cute.
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Awesome work! And I do not hate Bella- I don't think I've ever had either, but I do have to say that I'm green with envy that she gets Edward!
Pleae update soon!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Bella needs to move to HH!!! She can be a Chef there or open her own place! Plus that's where Alice will be, & her parents will be moving to Florida eventually...so what's to keep her in Seattle?
Oh & James is still a prick. Whazzup with the apology & hug?? Is he trying for Sexual Harrassment against her, saying she came on to him??
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
I am loving your story. Please update soon...when you're done with unpacking.
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Beautiful well rounded chapter. I'll forgive you for the cockblocking since, as you point out, it suits the long distance relationship. :) I had actually been expecting them to skype sex. lol
I'm sensing some forshadowing with the James hug. Is he really evil in this story or a moderate obstacle for Bella to overcome?
Loved the converation with Em, her epiphany, and her change in behaviour resulting from it. (totally hot dream, by the way!) You made my day with this update!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
great chapter!!!
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Ok, who's moving where? Come on now! It would be great if Bella moved to Edward, but where would that leave Emmett and Rose? How are you going to get all six of them on the same side of the US? Or are you? And what is that evil SOB James up to? I don't trust him. Not one bit...
Reviewer: LoriLP (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Aww - that was a sweet chapter. Glad they finally seem to be on the same page about how they feel. Now if only they could figure out who was going to move where...I still think Bella might be moving there. Can't wait for the next chapter... thanks! :)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Wow this story is so sweet and romantic and playful and I just love it!!! I really like your notes they are perfect for your story! Look forward to the next chapter post again soon!
Reviewer: Jessie (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Nope, no Bella hatage here, though there may be a smidgeon of jealousy. ;-)
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Interesting, can't wait to read on. What I would do to wake up with a naked Edward Cullen. Wow! Great chapter.
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