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Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
You had me scared there for a minute. Ok...I can breathe now! Maybe now Jasper's close call and Edward saving his life will force Jasper to move to Seattle too. I cannot wait until you post again.
Loved the chapter.
Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
thank you for only being being part EVIL!!!!!! we all can say thank you for that ! awwwww he just knew she was there awwwww NOW whats JAMES up to hmmmmmm?
Reviewer: DeeZ750 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Aww I'm glad you brought Jasper out of his coma and Edward holding Bella was the best!!!
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
that's really sad.. but i'm glad they're okay now. but jasper is still in ICU? i'm not familiar with riptides and surfing so i'm really not sure what happened. but i'm just glad they're okay because just like emmett said, i don't think alice (and jasper too) need this right now. they just found the possible route to their HEA and i would be sad if somedthing bad were to happen. but i know you're not eveil! haha.. you're not gonna let anything bad happen to them right? now i also can't help but wnder about bella's job. i mean it was mentioned that bruce had that look and we still don't know if james is planning something or whatever. i just hate to think that just as edward moved to seattle that something wrong would happen to bella's job like losing it. hopefully not.
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
OMG!! I almost had a heart attack when Esme called!!
Great chapter!
Reviewer: kellyliz82 (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Thank you for not leaving that at an awful cliffie. I love that they bought a house and that he is moving to WA! Loved the panic attack, that is so Bella. And I am so glad that you are not evil and let both E and J be okay. Why do I have a feeling James is going to screw Bella while she is gone?? He's been a little too nice lately......
Reviewer: Tweetiebird86 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
I dont think that James is going to pass the message, and that he is going to try and do something to take over while Bella is away. I still dont trust the guy...can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
So your numbers are 333. Yeah I appreciate the solid with not leaving poor Jasper on life-support.
Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Well that was unexpected! However, I'm glad they're both ok! And I'm super excited for Edward to move to Seattle!!
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
I love you for not keeping Jazz on life support...now if only we hade someone to kick Jame's ass because we all know what he will do.....and I'm afraid for Bella's job....Jerk!!
Heather
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
well thank goodness that both of them are ok!!!!!! You had me bouncing in nervousness there for a few minutes!
I hope james doesn't twist this shit around!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Hooray for Edward getting his job!
Hopefully you won't make us suffer too long for their recovery.
Reviewer: CarrieJ (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
ack what a cliff hanger! You better not let Jasper die!!
Reviewer: lotusblossom (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
OMG you almost killed me there. Thank you so much for not ending on a cliffie or I would have jumped out the window, for serious.
This chapter was just so, so, so good. I'm so glad they're moving forward in their relationship - and I'm hazarding a guess that after this scare there may be a proposal in the works from Southernward... maybe? possibly? Thanks for an awesome chapter!!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
thank you, but I have a bad feeling about James
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Whew, that was an emotionally exhausting chapter. Yea for the house! Boo for the guys almost dying. Yea for Bella and Alice going to see them. Boo for Francke making Edward wait. Great chapter!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
We have already discussed this Paige, the 333 shirt does not apply to you...although I will agree that giving us Jazz ok, brings you down slightly from full satan (maybe a 663 shirt, 2/3 evil, lol.) I still love you and the story though!
Manda
Reviewer: Susan Hails (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
excellent story, cannot wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Good chapter. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Great chapter. I never doubted those two for a second.
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
Find an apartment with a really big shower and a hottub. Reading Fan Fic makes me want to design a new bathroom :) I'm wondering what James is up and I'm sure him and Edward will have words sooner or later. Update soon!
Reviewer: Susan Hails (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
screw people suggesting its going too fast, move it faster haha xx
Reviewer: ashleyr132002 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
omg you have to finish this story or at least add more chapters!!!!!!!!! i love this story it is so good!!!!!! cutos
Reviewer: imcool1 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
whoop!!! love it.. off to go spend time with my in-laws. Can't wait for more!
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