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Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
I do appreciate your half evilness. :) Let me guess James is going to lie to Bruce and try to take over Bella's position. There's an evil bastard.
Reviewer: Merrisol (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Thank goodness you decided to write a bit further. I would have had an aneurysm otherwise. I think change is a comin'. Great story so far!
Reviewer: D Pattinson (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Wow! That was an intense chapter. Lots of stuff happening. I am glad it seems both Edward and Jasper will be okay. But I hope you don't keep us waiting too long to find out in the next chapter.
Reviewer: AFantasticRose (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
You scared the crap out of me with that little stunt! I knew when they mentioned Florida and surfing something would happen. Bloody foreshadowing. I know our beaches can sometimes be a bit bad with rip tides, I'm always wary of them when I step into the water. Update soon! I want to have Edward talking to us again!
Reviewer: carolinajoy (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Bless you for not leaving that as a cliffhanger. I don't think I'd have been able to read anymore updates after that!
I've really enjoyed this story and you do a nice job creating the characters and keeping the action moving. Even when the action gives me a sick feeling like part of this chapter!
Reviewer: LadyMC (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Wow...that was crazy! I had a bad feeling when Edward said he'd "be there with all his limbs". Something always go wrong after someone says something like that! I feel bad because like Bella, I was a little relieved when I heard Edward was going to be okay! I'm also apprehensive about her leaving a message with James! Something isn't right there...
Amazing chapter, even with the angst! Thanks for the update bb :)
Reviewer: acireamos (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
omg! what a full chapter! he gets the job, they get a house, jasper almost dies...whoa! I am a little worried about James not telling her boss she's gone thos...he's just not a nice guy, i feel it! loved the chapter! can't wait for more!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
great chapter!! update soon!
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Yeah you're only half evil b/c I know that you are going to hit Bella where it hurts in the next chapter. What are you planning on doing? Well, you are going to have James conveniently forgot to relay the message to Bruce and then Bella will lose her job.
Reviewer: blueeyedbella (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
ohmigosh! i totally did not expect that! update soooooon please!! :)
Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
AH! Poor Alice, I swear, I would have had a breakdown! Thank God he's okay! I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
I am sending cyber-kisses to you for not leaving us with Jazz being on life-support.
Reviewer: kamilynne (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
PLEASE for the love of god, PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!! This is in my top two favourite stories of ALL TIME!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Thank you for not leaving us hanging! Great chapter as always.
Reviewer: Akalei88 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
I have a bad feeling about James...like that he's going to tell the Chef that Bella just flaked out, and try to get her fired.
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Good things developed in this chapter, but some bad too. I hate that Edward was hurt and am still a little scared for Jasper, but thank you for not leaving us with him still on life support. *shudder* Now, how the heck are you going to get all eight of them on the same side of the US? hmmm? And I do mean permanently. Oh, and I think James is up to something...
Reviewer: youaremyvienna (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
oh noooo, james better not get bella fired.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
So happy for this update!
Wow, a lot of things happening here. My stomache dropped to the basement when I read about Edward and Jasper's accident. I cannot imagine what would have happened if either of them had died. Really, I just can't think about that...
I don't care how nice James is to Bella's face, I get the feeling he would sell her out in a hot minute. He's a two-faced bastard for sure.
Can't wait until Bella and Alice are wives to Edward and Jasper for real.
Ready for more when you are....
Hope you are getting settled in your new home in the South. Are things really slower there?
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Would that make you mid-evil? Sorry. That was bad, but I couldn't resist.
Love that they are getting a Craftsman! They are people after my own heart! They drama at the end was sad, but you described how it happened very well, and you left it in a happy place.
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
well I'm glad you're only quasi-evil. Love the update:)
Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Oh, no. Poor Jazz and Edward. I don't trust James. What is he up to? I must find out, so please update soon! Nice chapter!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Thanks for only being half-evil this time, I'm not willing to fully let you off the hook! :-) Loved it!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Awww! *sigh* for once it wasn't Ed or Bella yay!
Edward is really moving to Seattle?? Huh. I woulda thought she would move there & be a Chef, especially with Alice being there. Plus with her Parents moving to Florida as soon as her Dad retires etc..
Oh & what is that evil James up to?!? She's not gonna have a job left when she gets back, is she??
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
Great chapter!
I'm glad they are ok!
Please update soon?
Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
thank god you're only half-evil, i think i stopped breathing when i read jazz was on life support
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